Nivren FF:Humko pyaar hua pt 4 updated

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Part 1- Nivi and viren were neighbours.Sharmas and soods were very close and were like a family.Viren lived in delhi but wen he came to shimla she joined the same college as nivi.As time passed they became best friends and soon ths friendship became love.Both analysed their feelings and knew tht they were perfect for each other and they loved their partner from the bottom of their heart.This new friendship had turned into an everlasting lovestory.Very soon on a college picnic viren proposed to nivi and told her wht he he felt.In response to tht nivi too accepted her love for him.Both of them hugged tight and viren kissed nivi on the cheeks.Wen they returned back this news spread among their friends and all agreed tht they were made for each other.Both of them decided nt to tell this to their famiy until they graduated from college.AS days passed their love deepened,both had complete faith in each other.nivren were very happy.Wid thses happy days,nivi viren completed their two years of college and had the graduation ceremony.Nivi,viren and all their friends passed with flying colours and decided to join the same university so tht they all are together.Now they were on vacations.Nivren spent quality time iwd each other.They used to meet almost everyday and did texting and late nite calls.Finally one day both decided to inform their families abt their love.Viren decided to tell it to DS first and then to rest.He knew tht ds liked the sharmas and wud nt contradict his choice.Viren wnet to meet him wid a big smile and ds noticed something was special.But before viren cud tell anything ds surprised him by presenting him tickets of USA.He wanted viren to go there for his higher education.Seeing this viren was shocked and didnt respond.He didnt want to leave nivi.He tried forcing ds to change his decsion by saying tht he cud study here wid his friends but ds didnt agree.He said tht he shud start preparing as he had to leave after two days.Viren was shattered and didnt had the courage to say anything.Sid saw the sadness on his face and questioned him.Viren told him abt his love for nivi and tht he didnt want to go.Sid consolled viren by saying tht both of them were young for marriage and once he returns from us he would be married to nivi.He told him to focus on his future at tht moment.Nvi who was standing on the door,over-heard their convo.Wid tears she walked in(sid left the room).Nivi came and sat beside viren and told him tht she loves him and has full faith on his love.She says he shud nt worry and nivi is only viren's and tht she will wait till he returns.Right now he shud focus on his studies.Wid this viren kissed nivi on the fore-head and both shared and emotional hug.Two days later viren left for USA wid tears in his and nivi's eyes.Before going,they chatted the whole night and discussed their future life as husband-wife and made many promises to full-fill. Hey guys i just made a small stroy of nivren.I hope u all like this part do comment and hit the like botton.A very big twist is here to come in the story,so to know plz keep connected.
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Butifuleyes thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice beginning of a story, so now is in us interesting.pls do continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice story yaar..dont tell me that family decides nivi to get married to sid..
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Thnx everyone for liking and commenting on this.I surely am nt gonna dissapoint u guys.There will be big twist in my story.And rshree to know the twist u will have to continue reading the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg dear...what a pace...one chapter but several things happend...thoroughly enjoyed...awesome story...
Pls dear dont bring a third person into der lyfs...both excited and worried abt te twist that u mentioned...
Pls update soon...
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Part 2 2 years later.

Two years had passed since viren left for usa and today he was finally retuning back.All were very happy and preparing for his welcome.Viren retuned home and he was given a warm welcome by his family.All were very excited to see him back after such a long period.Though everything was good viren thought something was incomplete.He noticed tht nivi wasnt there and this made him a little dissapointed as he had thought tht sine he was returning home,nivi might cum to see him but she didnt.He was a lillte uneasy thinking abt tht becuz since a week he had hearned nothing from nivi.There were no calls,nothing.He was tensed and had a keen desire to meet her but the whole day he was surrounded with his family.Finally the day passed and wid each second his desire to see nivi increased.Finally in night he managed to creep out of his house and went to the sharmas.He sensed tht no one was at home.so he went straoght o nivi's room where he found her standing near the window.Seeing her after a long time made viren smile and he went near to her.

Precap-Viren and nivi's conversation abt... stay tuned to find it out

Guys sorry i updated it so late but i was busy,so hadnt had much time.Sorry for the short update but the next on wud be long and wid nivren.U all will like it,i guess.
Edited by sweet123455 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was too good but it was so short..
Pls continue it soon dear..
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Part 3 Viren after smiling went towards nivi who was facing the window and embraced her from the back.He rested his chin on her shoulder and said i love u and missed u a lot.Hearing this,nivi turned back and faced viren who had a biig smile on his face.Nivi was surprised to see viren and said viren...tum...tum kab aye...viren.And suddenly she hugged him wid tears rolling down her cheeks.Wid a crying voice she said viren i missed u too.Viren hugged her even tighter and said now i wont leave u.I will never go.Realizing wht viren just said nivi pushed him back and said to herself wht was i doing.Viren over-heard this and said in a naughty tone tht u were hugging ur lover.Nivi said but this is wrong,hw cud we do this?Viren who was little annoyed sais tht nivi wht is wrong?We r friends and love each other,so whts wrong in this?Nivi said tht everything is wrong because.She was abt to say something wen viren interupted her and said leave all this and listen to me.It been like three years tht we love each other and we know each other so well.Now i cant live with u as a friend,i want more to our realationship.Nivi who was confused asked him wht do u mean?Viren replied tht i m gonna tell abt our love to my family and then they will have us married.Nivi who was feeling hesitant to say said tht u r nt gonna say anything because this isnt possible now.Nivi wasnt able to see viren and was looking downwards.Viren who was very angry now caught hold of her and said WHT R U SAYING?WE CANT GET MARRIED?NIVEDITHA WHT HAS HAPPENED TO U,U WERE NT LIKE THIS BEFORE?TELL ME DONT U LOVE ME ANYMORE?TELL I WANT TO KNOW,WHTS YR PROBLEM?
Nivi who was now crying uncontrollably got out of his grip and shouted I LOVE U VIREN,I ALWAYS LOVED U BUT..." BUT WHT?questioned viren.I HAVE MY WEDDING NEXT WEEK,I M ENGAGED,replied nivi.
Listening to this viren was shocked and said wht r u saying.His eyes were filling wid tears,his voice softened but we love each other,so?Nivi who got control of herself now said "Its been a month since i finished my university.Before tht my parents started looking for boys for my marriage.Many proposals came but some how i rejected them.Papa and dadi were dubious abt me and once dadi questioned me if i love someone else.Hesitatingly i replied tht i love u and want to marry u.Lisrening to this dadi didnt say much and left.When she told abt this to papa,he was enraged and decided to get me married to the next man who comes.I cried alot in front of him,pleaded him but in vain.Two weeks ago sammeer and his family came wid the proposal and papa without asking me agreed.Sammeer they think is perfect.He is educated,well-bred and rich.A week after tht they did the engagement and since then i never talked to u because i dont have the courage to."Then turning towards viren,she continued."Viren after a week i have my wedding,its too late now,nothing can happen.Its better if u leave and look for a girl who is perfect for u.Viren,i think its time we shud part ways."
Precap-Viren and Nivi are sad.Viren leaving.
Edited by sweet123455 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh no nivi was engaged,,, poor viren... Continue soon dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh no nivi got engaged to some one... 😲
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