Neil Bhatt/ DCP VC AT 3: Duniya ke saare hero Virat sir ke aage zero - Page 95

Originally posted by: Asur

Thank you

Start was little funny and reality, end was beautiful Akshi ji

I have written something too.....Masti mein.....

Virat:

The moment I choose

The moment I loose

It's the destiny of God

Or maybe just the love of you...

Sai:

Whatever I have

Whatever I got

Wasn't it all about the life

Or it's just the love of you.....

Virat:

Covered everything under the sun

Still the chapter is incomplete

Kya pyaar adhura hota hai

Because it's neither me nor you who always repeat......

Sai:

Clearing the sky came the the drops of sunshine

What about the areas which never shine

Kya aap sachchai ko apnaate hai

Because whenever I try hum aapko usme paate hain...

Virat:

Last side was never the hope

It's despair of early rose

What is there for you my sweetheart

It's the course of never ending darts.....

Sai:

So let's begin a line of breathe

Where you will be my Colgate and I'll be your teeth

Pta nhi aadat si hai Hume ek dusre ki

And that's how we repeat and repeat.....

Originally posted by: Haalim

You are so talented ❤️

That was funny

Beginning was tragic but the ending

Colgate & teeth

I just wrote without thinking..... following your pattern

So you can inhale it the way you want

For me the ending was little non sanskari cheeku ji......as they say things become the way you see......

May I explain.....

Originally posted by: Ashane25

I just wrote without thinking..... following your pattern

So you can inhale it the way you want

For me the ending was little non sanskari cheeku ji......as they say things become the way you see......

May I explain.....

Lekin non sanskari? Samajhne ka irada bhi nahi hai

Originally posted by: Asur

Kuch likhne ka mann kiya so a little something:

Virat-

The moment of love

The moment of pain

Both became one

In you.

Sai-

The moment of trust

The moment of despair

Both became one

In you.

Virat-

The crack in my heart

The healing balm

The tornado of destruction

The sea, serene and calm

Everything is you.

Sai-

My ray of hope

My biggest fear

My corner of joy

My lone tear

Everything is you.

Virat-

The moment you're away

It's myself I lose.

Between you and me

It's you I'll always choose.

Sai-

The moments I'm with you

I find myself again.

In the drought of life with me

You are the snow, hail and rain.

This is so so beautiful (and apt)😍! You’re quite a natural poet!

Megha Barsenge starts 6th August 2024 at 7:00pm.

I mean the poem was just two sides opposing each other and all about love.....it was actually the ending which is confusing.....I didn't write with a wrong perspective but dekhe toh thora cheesy ho gaya....

line of breathe, Colgate and teeth, repeat and repeat

Ek dusre ki aadat