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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-


JayRa..i want HarshIni to be onscreen couple..not offscreen!

good then πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
HERE,
IS THE 4TH PART,

TITLE PYAAR HUA,
IKRAAR BHI HO GAYA

KHANNA HOUSE:

Ragini is on 7th sky & finding her favourite dress... while her mom enters...

mom: kya doondh rahi ho beta...

ragini:wo maa meri favourite pink dress jo aap laye the na pichli diwali par... wo doondh rahi hoon...

mom:wo dress tjhe aaj hi kyun pehni h... bahut time ho gaya tune wo dress nhi... jab bhi main kehti thi to tu ye keh kar taal deti thi ki kisi khaas occassion pe pehnoongi... to phir aaj kya special h...

ragini blushes & fumbly says: wo maa... aise hi... bas...

mom: ok samajh gayi... jay k liye pehan rahi h na...

ragini gets surprised & ask her: aapko kaise pata???😲

mom: beta main teri maa hoon, apni bachhi ki har khushi ko jaanti hoon... bata jay b tjhse pyaar karta h na...

ragini smilingly & blushingly says: yes maa, jay b mjhse bahut pyaar karta h, aur main aaj bahut khush hoon... both hug each other...


horn blows...

ragini:o mar gaye maa, jay aa gaya... jaldi dress do maa...

jay waiting 4 ragini outside his house... ragini comes... my words she looks gorgeous...😍

jay looks her & smiles & says: welcome maam, ur servant is at ur service... ab chale...

then they both sit in car & left 4 college... supriya ws seeing this 4m balcony & feels really happy...


IN CAR


jay: waise tu aaj itna saj dhaj ke kyun aayi h... teri shaadi h kya aaj???

ragini teasingly says: haan... aaj meri shaadi h...

jay suddenly stop d car & screamingly ask: kisse???πŸ˜†

ragini: hai koi handsome,smart,dashing boy jo ki mere liye kuch b kar sakta h... jo mjhe bahut pyaar karta h...

jay in anger: kaun h wo jisko apni jaan pyaari nhi h... uska naam to bata...

ragini: uska naam h ... jay...

jay feels a sigh of relief... & suddenly start leaning on ragini... they both hd a eyelock...then after 2 min. jay said: do min k liye to meri jaan hi nikal gayi thi... aisa mazzak dobara kiya na to phir...

ragini: to phir... kya karega???

jay: main phir apni jaan de doonga kyunki tere bina main nhi ji sakta ragi...

ragini & jay gets emotional & then ragini asks: itna pyaar karte ho mjhse??

jay nods his head & then he further leaned & kissed her forehead & then they both hug each other...



IN COLLEGE

karan: yaar bhai n ragi kahaan reh gaye

sanaya: are samjha kar... dono naye navele pyaar me pade h to thoda time to lagayenge na...

karan: ye lo aa gaye... bhai kahaan reh gaye the aap... chalo forget it... aapko ek good news sunani h

jay: good news... kya??/

karan: bhai apna college tour pe jaa raha h aur wo b OOTY...

JAY: what!!!!! dats a gr8 news...

everybody ws happy but ragini gets sad...





PART 4 ENDS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
screen-shoot by me 😊)
@loney it's for u 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
thanxx @ruhee for giving a lovely comment & thanx to all for loving my creation 😊.i'll make more .love u all ❀️
Edited by Farzina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
~~~ADORABLE~~~~~~SUSHAAN~~~JAYRAGZ~~~~~~~~~~~~~❀️
MY CREATIONS 😊




Edited by Farzina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awwieee 😊 Ddhi..amazing ffsss...❀️awwiee..i love all❀️..u've made my day special, morning started nicely, so whole day will gonna good πŸ˜›..waiting for next part, sorry, dear, i saw ur msg, now, so,..😊.keep it up..really excellent work 😊..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
hey deepak just read ur all parts of ff..I loved itπŸ˜ƒ
guys nowadays I like ff more than epsd😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -Ruhee-

hey deepak just read ur all parts of ff..I loved itπŸ˜ƒ

guys nowadays I like ff more than epsd😳

thnxx ruhee...
for second line: i also love to write ff & read vips ff more than the episode...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-


Haha...bahut maza aane wala hai ruhee...i really enjoyed writing those parts..i m sure u all will love reading it!

@ blue: it means u already hd written those parts...

nd nok jhok k saath saath romance ka tadka mat bhooliyo yaar...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
@deepak &vips : plz send ur script to our cvs πŸ˜‰

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