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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi my names mehvish and i love reading books and ive started writting my own book but if you don't mind if you could read a bit and tell me if i should stop writing it cause it boring or carry on.

Mr Smith stood in front of us and began his speech "I just want to say a few words to express the company's appreciation for the time Sarah has spent with us. Sarah's moving on to bigger and brighter things which will leave a gaping hole in the organisation. While she has put in place some amazing ideas that will stay after she leaves, it will be a challenge to fill that hole. So Sarah, I hope you have all the best prosperity and fulfilment in your future endeavours. There is no doubt you'll make a success of future opportunities as you have here. These words and gift are just a small expression of our appreciation for your work and time here. So farewell and good luck." I looked at Sarah in shock was she actually leaving me forever, I knew it was destined to happen but so soon. All her memories fluttered in my head. I remembered the first day we met. It was heavily raining that day, I saw a girl she wore a simple, light pink anarkali dress. She seemed to be preoccupied and suddenly a truck was coming towards her but she wasn't moving. I grabbed on to her arm, and flung her angrily in to my arms. Her light brown eyes where full of tears, everything made sense now. At the time I was thinking how stupid could she get trying to kill herself in traffic why couldn't she use some sense and use poison.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey mehvish..
This is really very good..You should continue..😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi34

Hey mehvish..

This is really very good..You should continue..😃



Thank you for replying
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey plz continue sounds intersting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sounds good. Maybe you may want to try posting in the Writers Corner forum, the members there give great insights!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shellytt

sounds good. Maybe you may want to try posting in the Writers Corner forum, the members there give great insights!


Thank u i will definately do that
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky_sibtain

hey plz continue sounds intersting!


Thanks ill carry on and send it here as soon as possible
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehvish0786


Thanks ill carry on and send it here as soon as possible

thx so much and every time u update can u pm me?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky_sibtain

thx so much and every time u update can u pm me?


sure but im gonna carry on after my GCSE exams are ova
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi ive just realized i was on somebody elses by accidently cause they left it on

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