~ArBi One Shot~ A Broken Pact (Replied back) - Page 2

Originally posted by: haaki.b

Hey Vini!!!!!!!!!! Good one yaar.... Infact awesome....Liked it...

do write more... and as Ghaz said, the last sentenses were awesome

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

'Aaiye.. aapka intezar tha...!! Der lagi aane mein tumko... shukar hai fir bhi aaye to...'

OMG... My mindblowingly Creative Writer Viniji... Welcome to the world of BB-OSians 😉

n my my what a ROCKING ..RAPCHUNDAS OS yaar... ❤️ Luvd it.....👏👏👏👏👏

That whole first part wit Armu searching for Bharti frantically was just soooooo awesome..! Luvd how u weaved in the fun moments of that Guy in the compartment... Armu tryin to b cool wit his gogs on.. then the Police inspector with his 'Lost & Found'....... too good 👍🏼

The leaps were very very nicely brought in.. at APT moments..! N wow... i really like it how u showed the relation of friendship between ArBi... which slowly but surely progressed into LOVE 😛

Super duper rockingly amazing OS yaar........ n that CLIMAX bit.. of the LADY ....asking Armu for a ride.. i so prayed it was Bharti..!! N gosh...... the whole 'FOUND' bit was FANTABULOUS yaar... just too good n hai allah.. ArBi KISSINGGGGGGGGG ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Vini.. truly ..if this is an output of ONE DAY....girl do i see a brand new JK Rowling or Stepnie Meyer in the making..?? Awesome job girl... u so totaly rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

*Side note - That pact of marrying at 50 ..reminds me of R.com 😉*

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Vini, it was just toooooooooooooooooo goooood😍

Specially I loved the name it is soooooooooo app for the story...you know two of my friends did the same pact😆 (when we were in school)

you know is mein comedy hai, drama hai, gham hai, khushi hai, kiss hai
sab kuchh hai..👏

and you know why I am liking this so much....I told you so many times...its about Armaan😳

Awww i love this line you stated Kanu..!! I didn't realise it till now..but thanks alot..so much..!! 🤗..Such wonderful compliment..and yea it's all abt Armu in this OS...was supposed to be equal with him and Bharti..but once i started with Armu i coudn't stop writing abt him...😆 😆....once again i guess he appeared as the stud here..😆...but soooo very happy that you love it..!!

Originally posted by: mahnaz_00

Hey Vini
Awesome OS dear
Really LUVED IT
Do write more of them

TC
Mahnaz😊

So happy that you loved it...and sure will try to come up with more..Thanks alot yea for reading it!

Originally posted by: naley4ever

hope u like the smiling sleepy congratulations cat 😆 1st of all girl me so sorry for the late reply But what a outstanding OS girl WOOOOOOOOOW Awesome 👏 Armaan was soo adorably hot sweet as always thanx ☺️ girl gr8 concept girl just love past future thing on the os THE KISS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW ☺️
kiss was romantically sexy ☺️ pulse these part

Armaan: Seriously Bharti! You are so gonna get it!

Bharti : Get what?

Armaan: Gee i don't know. Lets see maybe this?

before the kiss made it more Hot☺️ Romantic WOW me got goose bumps 😳☺️

girl i loved the ArBi Best friend thing in the start very cute 😍

what can i say vini girl u made my heart please once again in ur 1st Os Simply Beautiful keep on rocking girl

take care

luv

Naley

Hahah glad you like Armaan being super hot and sexy..actually i too feel he was looking good.....wanted to make his character like that..and no prob girl..am always happy to make him sexy for you.....and the many others Armu fans..

Hey Naley, guess what?! Even me also like those lines that you stated..gave me that feeling too..😆..Armaan pulling Bharti over without her being aware...and then kissing her..imagine if someone did that to you..i think i would have fall down flat...😆 😆..Too hot to handle......😆

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Hey !! great OS .... it's a beautiful love story 😛... loved it completely ...

the title was awesome and unique ..

loved the ending completely ...

do write more ... great witing 👏

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naleyyyyyy i LOVE that cat!! It is SO adorable...!! Cutee!!

Feel like pinching it..😆 Wait do you even pinch cats..?? Am not really sure cos the only cat that i ever like is Puss in Boots.😆.but this one is super duper cuteeeeeeee!!

Thanks alot girl..!!🤗

First of all, your comments makes me so happy! I love reading them as always..and sorry girl for the lateee replies back...I kept on forgetting to reply.....

And hey no worries, you weren't late at all..!! Just so happy that you managed to read it..😃

Hahah glad you like Armaan being super hot and sexy..actually i too feel he was looking good...😳..wanted to make his character like that..and no prob girl..am always happy to make him sexy for you..😳...and the many others Armu fans..

Hey Naley, guess what?! Even me also like those lines that you stated..gave me that feeling too..😆..Armaan pulling Bharti over without her being aware...and then kissing her..imagine if someone did that to you..i think i would have fall down flat...😆 😆..Too hot to handle..☺️....😆

Naley you make my heart please when i read your comments..SO thank you very much once again..Happy that you like it...and i love that congratulations pict! 🤗

Originally posted by: naley4ever

girl i just had to reply on this i sooo happy you liked the cat you cant pinch cats🤣 but you can pull their whiskers me love doing that 😆 I'm sooo happy you love my replies 🤗girl tell me about it kissing like that HOT HOT☺️ me will definitely fall down But but girl After the kiss ok😳 not before i should enjoy it first and then fall down ☺️ 🤪😳 girl if is guy like armu why not fall down he will be there to catch me 😳 girl love your replies to they always make my day

take care girl
luv Always
Naley

🤪

Ahahahahah!!😆 😆 Okay so you can't pinch cats..?? Hmm okay..You see Naley in actual fact i've never touched a cat before..😆...i don't quite like them..kinda afraid of them...😆 i like dogs more..but that pict you sent is cute i like kittens though.....

BTW you pull their whiskers..?? ..So mean!!.....

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Tanu ji thanks for the warm welcome ji..!! 🤗..

First of all, your comments are so long...that my reply is gonna be long as well..😆..

Such humble, sweet, kind, wonderful..oh man..i need more words..to describe this comment of yours...😳..Made me so happy when i read it last time. if i recalled i read it at night..and it sure as well made my night....😛

BTW sorry for the late reply.....Wanted to reply back then..but then kept forgetting as the pages move further back..

First of all thanks for the long chain of praises for my OS..but yaar i don't think it was that good...but i still loveeee reading such comments..😳 😳....you reminded me of VM for a moment with the "..RAPCHUNDAS " comment....cos i just watched ZNKD on that day..

Glad you like that first part of Armu searching..cos i wanted to make it really like a suspense..kinda feeling..making the reader want to read more of it..but i might have sounded to draggy..😆...but still am happy you loved that part..

The police and that boy were humour in this OS..and thanks for liking those shades...😆..i was laughing when i copied and paste that image of the sunglasses...wanted to make Armu look super hot and cool...i think it brought over the effect..i hope...esp with that scene when he slouches in the bench putting one leg on his thigh...and using that pagadi..gosh i pictured hotness...☺️ 😆

Oh wow so many red cherries for the kiss..??.. make me go like that also..☺️...hahah..so happy you like those scenes and that last line..with the kiss..

Actually i was finding it very hard to end off the OS..and then last minute that scene of Bharti asking for a ride hit me..i wasn't gonna put that in at first..but i HAD to end this OS and this was the fastest way of ending it...😆..BUT So glad that i ended it off like that..and you guys actually love it..so THANKS alot! 😃

As for your last comment utterly sweeeeetttt of you..🤗 BUT Nahi yaar!! I cannot be compared to those two writers..esp JK Rowling for me..she's like unbelievably beyond words..Such an excellent, flawless...weird though (in the sense that she cries so much when she axes a character in her books..and i'm thinking why cry so much when you're the writer and can change the story however you want it...😕😆) writer..!!...

They just too good..but am totally flattered that you stated that..😳..

Thanks Tanu! 😊

Love your comments so much, totally inspiring..makes me wanna write more..:))

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

yiipeeeeeeee ....vini wrote a new OS....🤗🤗🤗 luv ya bud...

*gets dunked in the head by Vini...it aint an OS....its a REPLY...*😡

Erm...ohookkkk....sorry sorry.....

😆😆😆😆😆 Kidding dear...

wow....so sweet of u to take time out n reply in such detail yaar.......luv ya...🤗🤗

n gosh...i so totally thank that the end struck u like th lightning struck our Harry...😆😆 they say its Flash of briliance....😉

Btw....m anxiously awaiting ur FF n next OS updates.......*since u said ur on break on VM making* 😛

Plzzz....hamari farmaish puri karooooooooooooooooooooooo 😳😳😳