My 2nd OS - you are my life - Page 2

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

My sweet sis,

Loved it👏

You described each moment very beautifully. The first hospital part where Armaan indirectly says he has no relation with Bharti but he agrees to sign the document.😊

The flashback of the accident, you portrayed it very well.😊

The Payal-Armaan convo----very very touching😊

The flashback where Armaan thinks about Bharti......very good.

And finally ArBi together😳, all's well that ends well😃

Very good work Haaki👏 You are capable of writing good stories, do come up with more🤗

Originally posted by: naley4ever

just simply Awesome girl 🤗
very unique girl it was very sad
finally Armaan realized his love

girl Awsome work
take care
luv
Naley

Originally posted by: haaki.b

thanx for liking it and for the slapping thing, i jus want to say... me too hate boys raising hands against girls.But I just wanted to show the characterization of Armaan and Bharti here....Armaan is an angry young man who doesnt like love. and Bharti, a sweet and bubbly girl who always remains happy despite the problems she have, she just gets hurt but takes it easily always...And I need a scene to make her cry which results in Payal's concern....So I have kept this....

I am sorry if you dont like it...

And thanx for ur comments.

will write more

love,

Harika

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Ohh Haaki Darlin'!!...🤗 No need to say sorry dear!..No need at all.. Me was just saying that..BUT i told you right that i LOVE your OS..and you're really excellent in writing such OS..!! So i am waiting for your next one..😉

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Beautiful OS dear
Loved it
Do come with more

Take Care
Zoya

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Loved the OS completely ....

very well written dear ...

ArBi was really sweet 😛

It was beautiful ...

please write more OS ...