My 2nd OS - you are my life

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well guys!!!!!!!!!! here is my second one shot.....Its not that good but hope you like it...
ARBI ONESHOT
YOU ARE MY LIFE
In a hospital, a girl was taken into operation theatre in a stretcher, she was bleeding severely and her head is injured a lot.blood is oozing from her head and knees. She was unconscious.A man was walking along with the stretcher while catching the girl's hands..his face is pale and a stream of tears formed in his eyes..He quickly wiped his eyes and continued to walk.The stretcher reached to the door of operation theatre and the compounders asked the person to stop there it self. The person sat on the chair putting his hand near his eyes which were closed and he was lost in his own thoughts....

His chain of thoughts were broken when some one called him...

Dr.Mishra:Mr.Armaan Sinha

Armaan:yes doctor!!!!

Dr.Mishra:Is anyone related to Bharti here? Her father,mother or any one else?

Armaan:Her parents died at her child hood.she was brought up in an orphanage.but now she lives in her home which she got from her parents.She don't have any relatives..Orphanage head, father John is all that she have..He is her guardian'We informed him and her best friend Payal..They will be coming soon

Dr.Mishra:But the operation must be done as soon as possible..And all the formalities have to be done for that.This papers must be signed immediately

Armaan:okay then, I will sign these papers and also will pay all the medical bill for her.

Dr.Mishra: Alright then, sign these and the operation will be immediately started..

He signed the papers and gave them to doctor and went to the chair again and took a seat.he was again lost in his thoughts..He was thinking what happened just a few minutes before.He was unable to believe that had happened and Bharti could go to that extent for him..

REWIND-

44 minutes 36seconds ago

Armaan just had a huge fight with Bharti for some reason and he left Bharti who stood still like a statue there.He was walking on the road and he didn't notice a car coming at the back of him.he continued walking and the car was very near to him..At that time Bharti shouted

Bharti:Armaan!!!!!!!!!

She came near him running..She pushed him and stood there and was hit by the car.She then shouted

Bharti:Armaan!!!!!

At that time, Armaan looked back and was shocked to see Bharti at that stage..He quickly ran towards her and called Bharti who was about to close her eyes

Armaan:Bharti!!!!!!Bharti!!!!! Ankhen kholo!!!!

Bharti was not responding to him. she was about to go into coma.Armaan was trying to keep her in consciousness so that she wont go into coma..

She too was trying her best to open her eyes..Armaan quickly lifted her and placed her in his car and rushed to the hospital..He got Bharti into the hospital and made her lay on the stretcher.he was still trying to keep her awake.but at last she said

Bharti:Armaan, I know I will die and I wanna tell u only one thing that I loved you and I love you and will be loving you for ever..She closed her eyes and went into coma with her hands in Armaan's

PRESENT-

A nurse came out side and Armaan asked her

Armaan:sister!!!!!!!! What's the condition of Bharti now ??????

Nurse: Operation is not yet completed and I will definitely inform u after it is done!!!!

Armaan:okay

Armaan was moving here and there when he saw Payal and Father John coming near him.

Father John asked

Father:How did it happen son?

Armaan:Woh..Father

Payal:common tell Armaan

Armaan:She got hit by a car when she was about to save me from that process[ narrated the incident to them]

Payal:Oh my God!!!!!!!! How is she now?

Armaan:Operation is going on.I too don't know what her condition is.This is all because of me.

Payal:Of you???????

Armaan:Yes!!!!!!

Father:What are you telling son?????? What happened?

Armaan:Actually

Payal:Bolo!!!!!!

In the mean time Dr.Mishra arrived and said

Dr.Mishra:Mr.Armaan, she is in a very critical condition.She is in coma.If she did not gain her consciousness with in 24 hours, I am sorry to say this.She will no longer be with you.

Armaan was shocked.He didn't know what to tell.Father asked

Father:Doctor.Can we see her now?

Dr.Mishra:She is shifted to ICU now and only one of you can go now and that too for some time.

Payal:okay then Father, u go first and see her..I have to talk to Armaan.

Father:okay!!!!!!

He went to ICU to see Bharti..Payal asked Armaan to come out for a while as she need to talk to him..Both of them went to Hospital canteen and sat in a table at the corner

Payal:So, tell me what's the fight for, huh?She left the home happily saying that u called her..

Armaan:Yes..I called her Indeed, because she told that she had very important thing to discuss with.But She.She is really a mad girl.always come back of me saying that she loves me and all.Atleast you can tell her that she thinks wrong . You know na Payal?I am not interested in all these

Payal[sadly]:huh!!!!!!!!!mad??????yes!!!!she is completely mad, she is crazy about u and she is definitely wrong in thinking that you will love her one day.

She should really deserve this.God have given her the right punishment[she was practically shouting at Armaan]

Armaan:Please try to understand me Payal!!!!!!

Payal:u first understand Armaan.Bharti is really a sensitive and innocent girl..she always laughs and makes other laugh. She always finds her happiness in the world's happiness.She never dares to hurt anyone. I have never seen her crying in these 15 yrs of friendship we have. She never cried even if she has a lots of problems. But for the first time I have seen her crying only because of you.The day u have slapped her in front of every one when she proposed you 2nd time u know Armaan, a girl never does this Instead she waits for the boy to tell everything. U know whatshe loves you from 3 years.And its only her love which made her to join in your office as your secretary. She is not interested in this field but came in only because of you.Today, she told me that it was one of her last attempt to convince you because she is leaving for US permanently to study and settle there'She got her Visa and will be leaving in 15 days time.But you!!!!!I really hate you for this Armaan.really hate you!!!!

Payal Went away crying .On hearing these words, Armaan was taken aback.He never knew that Bharti loved he a lot. He was disturbed a lot.He was lost in thoughts all that which is flashing in his mind is BHARTI, her face and all the old memories

He remembered the day when Bharti came to the interview, how confused she was and how happy she was when she got selected.. How friendly she was with ArmaanHow she planned his birthday and gave him a surprise..How she proposed on the valentines day him sitting on one knee like boys do, how he left angrily and stopped talking to her and how she again became friends, how she helped him several times in making his deals, how she gave him ideas, how she proposed him again in another party and got slapped by him.and how she didn't lose her faith in love and even today, how she told that she cant live without him, how she was even ready to give her life for him, how she got hit by the carand her last words before goin into coma ' I love u'..Tears were rolling down his cheek.The only face he is remembering is Bharti..He realized the importance of Bharti in his life .He realized that he cant live without Bharti even for 1 second...That's it.he got up from the table and went to ICU where Bharti is there.He was about to go inside but Payal stopped him.

Payal:Where are you going?

Armaan:I realized my mistakes Payal.I love Bharti..I want to see her now.

Payal:Enough is enough. Now Mr.Armaan Sinha please go away and let us live our lives.

Armaan:Please Payal.

Payal:No way.and once she is recovered.She will go to US and will forget you for ever.

Armaan:Please

Payal:No

Armaan got disheartened and turned away to go!!!!!but some one called him.

Father:Armaan

Armaan:Yes Father

Father: son, u can go and meet Bharti now.

Payal: But father

Father: No buts Payal, he realized and repented now let him go and Son!!!! U have to go only on one condition

Armaan:What condition?

Father:That you will keep her happy

Armaan: definitely father, she is my life.

Armaan went to Bharti and saw her in a very critical condition.He sat near herheld her hand and said

Armaan:Bharti!!!!!!!!!please wake up Bharti!!!!!! Please

But she didn't respond

Armaan:Bharti:please wake up.at least for me..I cant live without you.I love you plzzzzzz Bharti

But there was no change in Bharti

Armaan was trying and trying and he broke down into tears.he still was trying to get her into consciousness.He tried and tried and fell asleep beside her and catching her hand

In the early morning, Armaan felt someone pressing his hand.It was Bharti.He said

Armaan : Bharti!!!! Bharti!!!!!!! Wake up!!!!

She slowly opened her eyes and smiled upon seeing Armaan . Armaan was very happy and he hugged her tightly and said

Armaan: Thank god u came back or else?

Bharti[slowly]:or else?

Armaan:I wouldn't have been on the earth

Bharti place her hands on his lips.Then both had a romantic eye lock Armaan then sat on one knee and said

Armaan:Bharti,I have realized.. I love you so much..... I cant live without you..Will you marry me????????

Bharti was very much surprised and happy.She nodded in agreement, made him stand and hugged him.Armaan Hugged her back..Both of them were happy that they got their love.

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hope you like it and please leave your comments.........

Edited by haaki.b - 15 years ago

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sweety_ursh thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey im first do coment!!!!
hey ousome update yaar n cant wait for next part👏👏👏
fullon mast
urbi!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Haaki.. its beautiful yaar..!! Very interesting .. n engaging..!! Njoyed the epi a lot..😛
Especialy how u had the flashbacks in between the narrative..!!
N wow.. Bharti really does believe in luv... even after getting rejected twice before she was ready to give it another shot... even ready to sacrifice her own life for her luv...!! Awesome.. 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Ur OS are always fantastically entertaining Haaki... great job!! ❤️
Pls. keep writing more n more......🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice and beautiful OS yaar
well i always wonder how people gose to flashback and come back... well i felt sad for bharti... dont know why.... it hurts when the person u love hurts u or leaves you of not with u anymore OR Fights with u😭😭...
but i like armaan's last line as well😳
really cute
do write more of them
Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Haaki, i'm pretty impressed! I actually love this storyline.
Totally different because in this situation we have Bharti chasing Armu..I loved everything about it EXCEPT one thing..The slap that Armaan gave Bharti when she proposed to him the second time. I don't think it's right for a guy to raise their hands on a woman no matter what the scenerio is. Bharti could have been at fault here but she didn't do any harm so i find that he didn't have to raise his hands..Me totally against men raising their hands on women. But off course this is just an OS, so it's not a big deal..but i am just telling that i ONLY didn't like the raising of hands bit..besides that nothing at all..! 😃...I hope you dun feel bad that i said that..😳
Okay now that aside, like what i said above, loving that fact that your OS was something refreshing. I didn't see it coming that Armu was not accepting Bharti's love. I thought they were deeply in love when i read the starting part..till off course i read further..😊..
The things that Bharti did for Armaan! WOW!..She truly and deeply loves him..and am so so happy that he finally realise his love for her. I think he must have taken her for granted..not knowing it till the very end that he actually can't survive without her.
Seriously Haaki beautifully written! It was clean and was a pleasure reading it! I find it very good actually and do share with us somemore of your One Shots yea..?..You sure are talented in writing awesome OSs..😃
Me loved it..!! 👏
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety_ursh

hey im first do coment!!!!

hey ousome update yaar n cant wait for next part👏👏👏
fullon mast
urbi!!!

thanx for your comments....but its not an FF. just a one shot. so it wont have updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Haaki.. its beautiful yaar..!! Very interesting .. n engaging..!! Njoyed the epi a lot..😛

Especialy how u had the flashbacks in between the narrative..!!
N wow.. Bharti really does believe in luv... even after getting rejected twice before she was ready to give it another shot... even ready to sacrifice her own life for her luv...!! Awesome.. 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Ur OS are always fantastically entertaining Haaki... great job!! ❤️
Pls. keep writing more n more......🤗

thanx for liking it tanu..........
and your comments made me happy.Will surely write more.
Edited by haaki.b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

really nice and beautiful OS yaar

well i always wonder how people gose to flashback and come back... well i felt sad for bharti... dont know why.... it hurts when the person u love hurts u or leaves you of not with u anymore OR Fights with u😭😭...
but i like armaan's last line as well😳
really cute
do write more of them

thanx for liking it Ghaz!!!!! yeah...It do hurts when the person we like hurts us...I have just got the concept when I was on the tour and i posted it after coming.
will write more for sure....
SomerholicGirl thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Wow Haaki, i'm pretty impressed! I actually love this storyline.

Totally different because in this situation we have Bharti chasing Armu..I loved everything about it EXCEPT one thing..The slap that Armaan gave Bharti when she proposed to him the second time. I don't think it's right for a guy to raise their hands on a woman no matter what the scenerio is. Bharti could have been at fault here but she didn't do any harm so i find that he didn't have to raise his hands..Me totally against men raising their hands on women. But off course this is just an OS, so it's not a big deal..but i am just telling that i ONLY didn't like the raising of hands bit..besides that nothing at all..! 😃...I hope you dun feel bad that i said that..😳
Okay now that aside, like what i said above, loving that fact that your OS was something refreshing. I didn't see it coming that Armu was not accepting Bharti's love. I thought they were deeply in love when i read the starting part..till off course i read further..😊..
The things that Bharti did for Armaan! WOW!..She truly and deeply loves him..and am so so happy that he finally realise his love for her. I think he must have taken her for granted..not knowing it till the very end that he actually can't survive without her.
Seriously Haaki beautifully written! It was clean and was a pleasure reading it! I find it very good actually and do share with us somemore of your One Shots yea..?..You sure are talented in writing awesome OSs..😃
Me loved it..!! 👏

thanx for liking it and for the slapping thing, i jus want to say... me too hate boys raising hands against girls.But I just wanted to show the characterization of Armaan and Bharti here....Armaan is an angry young man who doesnt like love. and Bharti, a sweet and bubbly girl who always remains happy despite the problems she have, she just gets hurt but takes it easily always...And I need a scene to make her cry which results in Payal's concern....So I have kept this....
I am sorry if you dont like it...
And thanx for ur comments.
will write more
love,
Harika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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My sweet sis,

Loved it👏

You described each moment very beautifully. The first hospital part where Armaan indirectly says he has no relation with Bharti but he agrees to sign the document.😊

The flashback of the accident, you portrayed it very well.😊

The Payal-Armaan convo----very very touching😊

The flashback where Armaan thinks about Bharti......very good.

And finally ArBi together😳, all's well that ends well😃

Very good work Haaki👏 You are capable of writing good stories, do come up with more🤗

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