My first OS~*~ you were there with me~*~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: haaki.b

wow Ghaz!!!!!!!!!!! what an awesome OS.........a lot happened with Bharti and Armaan is real cute.......me too writing another OS and posting it today yaar.... any ways telling ya!!!!!!!!! awesome OS

keep writing more

love,

Harika

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Awesome yaar
Loved it
Do come up with more

Take Care
Zoya

Originally posted by: mahnaz_00

Hey Ghazal........
Reallllllllly cute OS dear
Luved it a lot
Do write more of them

TC
Mahnaz

Originally posted by: Wafa_94

Ghazal its an outstanding piece of work...👏👏

Loved all the scenes between Armaan and Bharti..😍

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Oh man... i m going all crazy... having tears in my eyes admiring this amazing piece of work Ghazu..!!

awwww😳.... thats soooo sweet😳

Mindblowingly fantastic..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Luvd the entire premise very very much... n especially the growth in ArBis relationship frm Strangers to acquaitances to friends n finally to lovers.... Fabulous ❤️

thanks a lot.... ur words are sooo sweet😳.... happy that u like it

Luvd the whole Bday surprise bit like soooo much yaar... it was so thotful of Armu to bring Bharti out of the room ..out of her past n guide her towards a beauitful future..! its like he became her LIGHT at the end of the DARK tunnel...that she was in...🤗🤗🤗 n also.. culdn stop smiling at how Armu blushed at being Called SWEET for th first time or Hugged for the first time..😛

😆 i was smling and laughing dont know why....he is such a sweetheart that which ever creactor you chose for him... he just fits in it😳..... love Armaan and bharti

Very very well written Ghazu..... now my dil wants Many more OS frm u😉

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oh Ghazu Ghazu Jaanu..!! Excellently written yaar!!..🤗

Good to see that you've started on OS and girl you SO didn't make a mistake in writing one! It was totally a pleasure reading your OS..and what can i say man..I tell ya one person who can write such deep kinda love lines (man i duno what to call them...😆..see i told ya am not good with writing deep emotion filled lines in stories..) is YOU!

awwww😳😳😳.... thanks vini darling.... well u are good with emotional storylines.... ur comments makes me emotional.... i think its the relation we have😆 kum ka mela sisters😆.... thats why ur comments made me emotional😆

I hope you know what i am trying to say. Like those lines where Armaan tells how much he loves Bharti..and that he can't live without her..i find it tough to write hence if you notice in my FF i've yet to come to the love bit..😆 mine is still on friendship/unaware of love base....but you do it so well..!! In your "Tum Say Hum" FF the love you show between Armaan and Bharti is so strong there also..and you did the same here..!!

So great job girl..!! 👍🏼...

thanks a lot.... well soon i know that the love will start couse i just read the OS u wrote and u will do a feb job with the love lines as well😉

but i am happy that u think i did a good job😳.... well LOVE is something deep and its Arbi who make me think of these lines😳

I love the storyline of your OS. Something new..and was also sad. First Bharti being heartbroken..and then later when she and Armaan are close, Armaan gets heartbroken..I was pretty shock when Bharti told Armaan that she is marrying someone else.. Didn't see it coming..and felt sad for Armu. BTW love the way Armu proposed to Bharti! So simple and cute.! "Marry me!..I feel nervous so i want to say it faster..Marry me Bharti".....Loved it!..

thanks.... well i was totally messed up while writing.... but then i bring it to this track... happy that u like the storyline😛

Love the ending, though was sad that Bharti's dulha actually died..:(....but then ArBi got together eventually..😊

Keep them coming in girl..!! Would so love to read more One Shots from ya..!!

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

😆 what do you mean by you forgot your own name spell?😆
you know what, when I see Gazal is writing something I always expect funny things, but this OS is not funny😭 only at the end when I saw you saying you forgot your name spelling made me smile "that's our sweet Gaz"😆

Anyways jokes apart: The OS is "Mindboggling Rocking"🤣

Really you wrote so many things in a OS, so many incidents which brought our ArBi finally together, very well concept and very well written. 👏

Do write more OS😍

Originally posted by: naley4ever

woooooooooooooooooooow girl excellent work 👏 love the concept
Love Armaan & the love he have for Bharti it was mix of love & friendship
for Armaan me so glad that he got his true love at the end
gr8 work girl🤗u rox in ur 1st OS
take care
naley


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Originally posted by: BUBLAI

it's awesome yaar ! loved everything about it .... from the beginning till the end--- everything is perfect 😛 loved Armaan a lot ...

Great writing 👏