My first OS~*~ you were there with me~*~

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guys i am writing my first OS.... i tried... hope u guys like it.... dont worry its the first and the lastšŸ˜†... OS is harder then FF

You were there with me

Bharti is 20 years old who lives alone in her house. Her parents died 8 years back. She have her father's money to spend her whole life in comfort. She is alone in this whole world. The only thing which keeps her alive is her love, her love for Karan. She loves him madly.

Karan is 22. He is only son of rich NRI. He studies in Bharti's college. Girl and girl's feelings are nothing for Karan. He likes to play with nice innocent girl's feelings. And he is doing the same with Bharti as well. But Bharti's love is true and she don't know that Karan is that kind of guy because whenever Karan is with her, he behave like he is the most wonderful person on earth.

Armaan is 22 as well. He is Karan's best friend and he is madly in love with Bharti. Armaan is a really sweet guy. He wants to save Bharti from Karan but he knows that Bharti's love is blind and she won't believe him. Armaan don't talk to a lot of people in college and always try to tell Karan that what he is doing with Bharti is wrong. He wears glasses and a lot of people call him a geek in the college but he is not geek he is just and clean hearted man who don't like dressing like other guys or try to behave cool.

Karan believes Armaan with closed eyes. He always shares everything with him.

It's a nice morning and Bharti enter in the college. She saw Karan standing in the corridors.

Bharti: Karan

Karan look at her and smile… Bharti run towards him and hug him

Karan: oh… u r late.. I missed u..

Bharti: really!.. So sweet

Karan: sweet na..

Bharti: yah.. hey I need to go to the lesson.. I am late… bye

Bharti walk quickly towards her class room… after Bharti leaves, another girl come to Karan and hug him

Girl: why do we have to hide from Bharti?

Karan: because she thinks that I love her

Girl: u don't?

Karan: well I do but I cant survive my whole life with one girl.. its boring u know..

Girl: and what if someone told her

Karan: she will never believe that person because she is totally blind in my love…. Well u tell me what r u doing tonight

Girl: nothing

Karan: see u then…. Bye babes

He kiss her cheek and the girl leave from there…

Armaan who was noticing all this, he come forward and tried to explain Karan again

Armaan: don't do this.. she is a innocent girl. Why u r playing this double game with her. U have any idea how much it will hurt her when she find out.

Karan: Armaan, u are my friend not hers OK. Why do u care so much about her.

Armaan: because i….i am worried about her

Karan: why?

Armaan: look Karan. U have no idea how much lucky u are. U won't find a girl like her ever in u life. She is the best girl in this world

Karan: why r u saying so many nice things about her. Are u trying to do something.

Armaan: no. I am Armaan. I am not Karan. I know that she love u. and I know what u are trying to do with her. One day u will cry on what u are doing

Karan: stop this lecture dude. I am really hungry. Lest go.

At night, Bharti was sitting in her bed room and she was thinking about Karan. She was thinking that he must be busy because Karan lied to her that he is going to do exam preparation. Bharti call Karan but he was with that girl so he didn't pick the phone.

Bharti was bored so she went out for a walk when she saw Armaan sitting in a park. Bharti walk toward him.

Bharti: hi. U are Armaan right. Karan's friend

Armaan: yah. Hi Bharti. How are u? What are u doing here?

Bharti: I was calling Karan but I think he is busy with studies so I thought I should get a walk. But why are u sitting here alone. U always sit alone. Even in college u don't talk to anyone. Why?

Armaan: well I don't mind talking to people but people don't talk to me. They think that I will talk like a geek because I look like a geek.

Bharti: u are not a geek. Who says that

Armaan: no one says it but I understand. Everything don't have to be said.

Bharti: u are right. Well now I am your friend. You wont sit alone.

Armaan look at Bharti and felt something. He know that he love her. But he also know that she only thinks about Karan. And this thing always make him sad

Armaan: thanks for becoming my friend. I should go now. Bye

Bharti: bye

Armaan: come I will drop u home

Bharti: no I will go own my own.

Armaan: u are a girl and its really late now. And I wont leave my friend alone at this time.

Bharti laugh: OK baba. Let's go

Now Armaan and Bharti were friends so Armaan got to spend time with Bharti. Karan was kept on with his game.

Karan always plays with innocent girls and takes advantage of them. Now he was planning to do the same with Bharti. He decided that he will take her on a romantic date in a hotel room. Take advantage of her and then he will dump her. But Armaan find out about his plan. Armaan know that only he can save Bharti now.

On the date night, Armaan locked Karan in his room and disconnect his phone as well so that he won't be able to get to Bharti and won't harm her.

On the other hand Bharti was waiting for Karan but he didn't come. She wait whole night for him and in the morning she went back home. She waited for long but she was still not angry with him. She was still thinking that he must be stuck somewhere that's why he couldn't come. On the other hand Karan couldn't find out who locked him in the room.

Armaan knew that this is the time when Bharti should know about Karan.

One night, Karan made a plan of going out with another girl and Armaan made a plan so that Bharti will find out everything. While Karan was getting ready for the date, Armaan took his phone and text Bharti as Karan to meet him. He gave the same place where Karan was going with that girl. When Bharti got there, she saw Karan with that girl, Bharti was totally shocked and she couldn't believe on her eyes. Today her blind love and her unlimited trust on Karan fell from her eyes in tears.

She didn't sad anything to Karan but Karan saw her and he knew that his game is over but he didn't try to explain anything as well. Both of them didn't said anything to each other and Bharti slowly walk out from the hotel.

She still couldn't believe on her eyes. She was totally broken. She didn't know if she should cry or not… she keep walking but she didn't know that Armaan was fallowing her. Armaan was fallowing her because he know that she is hurt and she might do something to harm herself.

After that Bharti stop going to the college. She locked herself in her house forever. She gets money from her dad's business.

Its 25th September: Bharti's birthday.

Even today Bharti was sad and alone in her house. Today she got 21 years old.

She was sitting in her room and spending this day like a normal day when Armaan enter in her room. Bharti was shocked to see him.

Bharti: Armaan?... what are you doing here?

Armaan: well you forgot me but I didn't.

Bharti: there is nothing like that Armaan.

Armaan: really?... then why you didn't took any of my calls…

Bharti look down and turn her face.

Armaan: Bharti… I know you didn't talk to me in these days because I am Karan's friend… but I am your friend as well na…

Bharti was still quite and her eyes were full of tears.

Armaan: Bharti… who are you crying for… that guy… who didn't know what you r.. he didn't know how lucky he was that you loved him…. Its his bad luck that he couldn't get you… he didn't understand what ur love is. And its your good luck that you are saved.

Bharti with tears felling on her cheek: why are you saying all this Armaan… you are also his friend right?.... what are you doing here.. Go to your friend.

Armaan: he is not my friend anymore.

Bharti turn and look at Armaan

Armaan: yah… I don't want to be friend of such a guy who don't know the respect of women.

Bharti: oh…

She lower her eyes again and turn…. Armaan walk up to her and stood next to her.

Armaan: lets go Bharti

Bharti: where?

Armaan: I want to take my friend somewhere.

Bharti: I am not in the mood.

Armaan: how many days are you going to spend in this room… Bharti come out of this… you will have to do this…. You have a long life to live… you cant live like this… don't make things hard for yourself.

Bharti: who do I have to live for Armaan… no one… do I have anyone to live for.

Armaan: I am here for you…

Bharti look at him with shocked expiration.

Armaan: give me a chance to prove myself a good friend… a friend you can trust…. Bharti.. u are my first friend… otherwise everyone elas thinks that I am a geek

Bharti: no u are not a geek

Armaan: come with me na

Bharti: no Armaan

Armaan become sad: I understand… I am not good enough to be a friend you can go out with…

He turn to leave.

Bharti: wait… who said that… I am coming

Armaan become happy and a big smile appear on his face.

Armaan: I am waiting for you…

Bharti: ok….

She got ready and went downstairs. Both of them left in armaan's car… Armaan took Bharti to a place. Bharti was quite confuse at what Armaan was doing.

Bharti: which place is this..

It was a bark place and she could see nothing…. It was top of a hill… it was night that's why it was really dark…. Armaan hold Bharti's hand so she won't fell…

Both of them start walking when they say a table lighted with candles and a big cake on it… Bharti look at Armaan.

Armaan sing: happy birthday to u… happy birthday to u… happy birthday dear Bharti.. happy birthday to u….

Bharti was shocked… she keep looking at Armaan.

Bharti: how do u know that?

Armaan: I know it… come..

It was not a big celebration or a very decorated place…. Just one table which have enough candles for light… but the cake was really beautiful with Bharti's name on it….

Bharti: you did all this for me..

Armaan: no… I did this for that beautiful smile on your face…

Tears appear in Bharti's eyes.

Armaan: I said smile.. not tears… I hate tears…

Sweet wide smile appear on her face and she didnt let the tears fell…

Armaan: that's what I want… lets cut the cake…

Armaan gave Bharti the knife and she cut the cake…. Armaan clapped and sang birthday song. Bharti feed him piece of cake…

Armaan: I have a gift for u…

He pull out a hand made flower necklace…

Armaan: I am not good in giving gifts to girls… I thought a lot… but then I thought that this will be a good gift to bring your smile back.

Bharti took the necklace….

Bharti: you are a very sweet person Armaan..

Armaan (blushing and looking down): thanks

Bharti: why are you blushing?

Armaan: because this is the first time a girl call me 'sweet' 😳

Bharti start laughing…. Armaan look at her and start smiling… he was happy to see Bharti smiling again.

Both of them sit on the rock and start looking down the hill… the city was looking really beautiful.

Bharti: thanks a lot Armaan…. Thanks for everything

Armaan: don't say thanks…. I did all this for myself…

Bharti: what?

Armaan: yah… I wanted to spend some time with you

Bharti smile again but this time tears appear in her eyes...

Bharti: the man i love... he didn't care about me or my feelings but u are only a friend.. but u really care about me, my tears and my smile... i don't deserve this... whenever i love someone or something, i lost it...

Armaan: u deserve everything in this world... u deserve all the happiness in this world... let them come near you... let them come in ur life...

Bharti look at him... she got really emotional after hearing this from Armaan... she couldn't stop her self and hug Armaan.... Armaan knew that she is really upset... he put his arms around Bharti and move his hand slowly at her back to calm her down.... today Bharti cried as much as she wanted and Armaan let her cry... when she felt a bit batter she broke the hug and look down...

Bharti: sorry... wo..main

Armaan: don't say sorry... its the first time a girl hugged mešŸ˜‰šŸ˜³

Bharti start laughing

Bharti: u are too cute (pulling his cheek)

She start looking down the hill again but was still in his dream land.... he couldn't believe that the girl he love, just hugged her😳😳... he was very happy and Bharti was feeling lighter as well....

They sit there for a little while then both of them decided to go back.... Armaan drop Bharti home and she ask him to come in for a coffee.... both of them made coffee together and get to know each other more closely.

Few years past and Bharti was very comfortable with Armaan now. they were very very good friends now.

She was liking his cuteness and the way he made her feel spatial.

One day Armaan came to meet Bharti. He was looking nervous. He didn't say 'hi' or 'hello'. He straight way start.

Armaan: Bharti i want to say something.

Bharti: hi Armaan.

Armaan: i don't have time for that

Bharti: what's wrong?

Armaan: marry me.

Bharti (shocked): what?...

Armaan: u didn't get it... ok i will say it again...marry me šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

Bharti: Do u know what u are saying?

Armaan: yah.. i practice all night... i wanted to say it before i get too nervous…

Bharti: Armaan!

Armaan: please don't say 'no'… if you don't want to marry just walk away… But don't say 'no'

Bharti: Armaan… I am marring someone…

Armaan was totally shocked and he just can't believe on what he heard.

Bharti: I am sorry Armaan…. I never told you about Angat… I know it is my mistake…

Armaan (heart broken): you did made a mistake Bharti….. a very big mistake… you broke my heart..

Bharti: I was going to tell u Armaan

Armaan (shouts): when?... when Bharti?... (lower his voice) why I am shouting at you.. who am I?... no one..

Bharti (tears in her eyes): don't say that Armaan… u are my best friend… you means a lot to me.. ur friendship is world to me Armaan.

Armaan: really… that's why you never told me about Angat…. I didn't hide anything from u Bharti. Apart from the fact… that I love u….

Bharti shocked: why you never told me Armaan…

Armaan: because I was thinking that its not the time… but I didn't knew that you are hiding something as well.

Bharti didn't know what to say… she know that she hurt Armaan by not telling him that she found someone. Armaan leave from there and Bharti couldn't stop him… after that Armaan didn't meet Bharti again… Bharti get busy in her wedding preparations but she keep trying to contact Armaan but Armaan didn't response…. Bharti was realising that Armaan is not only her friend… he is more then that to her now… but it was too late and she was helpless… she decided to ignore the other feelings for Armaan. She was trying to ignore that she love him…. She just want to think about him as a friend

And the day of Bharti's marriage came. Today Bharti was missing Armaan. She tried to call him but he still didn't respond. With the sad face, Bharti made her way to the car. She was going to a 'mandir'… they were getting marry in a 'mandir'…. Bharti got there before Angat…. She wait there for Angat but he didn't came… after a while she got the news that Angat die in an accident….

Bharti was totally broken…she was not able to understand why god is so unfair with her…. She was standing there like a statue… after few seconds she start walking slowly… she came out of the 'mandir' and start walking lifelessly on the road… she didn't know that she is walking in the middle of the road. She didn't realise that a car in full speed is coming towards her… the car was getting closer and closer but Bharti was not in her sense. The car was just few inches away from her when someone hold her hand and pull her to a side…

It was Armaan. He got so scared that he hug Bharti tightly…

Armaan: what are you doing Bharti… what if something happed to you…. I would die with out u…

Bharti was still standing lifelessly... Armaan remember that Bharti is getting marry with Angat and she don't belong to him… he broke the hug and look at Bharti's bridal dress… Armaan felt bad to see her in bridal dress.. he understood that she is getting marry today….

Armaan sadly: its your wedding day today… and what if that car hits you…

Bharti was still not responding…

Armaan: you are looking beautiful Bharti… as always… u are looking out of the world… Angat is very lucky…

Bharti look up at Armaan's face and tears fall from her eyes… Armaan got worried to see her upset…

Armaan: what happed Bharti?... why are you crying…. What's wrong Bharti?

More tear fall from her eyes, she hug Armaan and start crying loudly…

Armaan put his hands around her and got even worried that what's wrong with her.

He ask her again and then Bharti told him about what happened with Angat… Armaan tried to calm her down and took her inside the 'mandir' again… he give her some water to drink… Bharti looked at Armaan and remember what she did with him…

Bharti: I did so bad with you Armaan… I broke your heart.. but you are still with me… you still care about me… you are still worried about my tears… why Armaan?

Armaan: because I love u…. from the bottom of my heart….

And I always be there with you…. My love is true and pure that's why i cant stop myself… 😳

Bharti's eyes were full of tears

Armaan: don't cry… I cant see tears in ur eyes

Bharti: I am sorry armaan… will u ever be able to forgive me?

Armaan: yah… but on one condition…

Bharti: what?

Armaan: you will have to marry me… today… in this 'mandir'…. Will u do that?😳

Bharti think for a minute but all came front of her eyes was all her sweet moments with armaan…

Bharti with a smile: yah… I will

Armaan smile as well and both of them got marry in that same 'mandir' at the same day….

And they live happily ever after

thats itšŸ˜›
hope u guys like it
will be waiting for the comments
thanks for reading
ghazal naz
PS: i forgot my own name spellšŸ˜†

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SomerholicGirl thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow Ghaz!!!!!!!!!!! what an awesome OS.........a lot happened with Bharti and Armaan is real cute.......me too writing another OS and posting it today yaar.... any ways telling ya!!!!!!!!! awesome OS
keep writing more
love,
Harika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome yaar
Loved it
Do come up with more

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
Hey Ghazal........
Reallllllllly cute OS dear
Luved it a lot
Do write more of them

TC
Mahnaz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ghazal its an outstanding piece of work...šŸ‘šŸ‘
Loved all the scenes between Armaan and Bharti..šŸ˜
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh man... i m going all crazy... having tears in my eyes admiring this amazing piece of work Ghazu..!!
Mindblowingly fantastic..šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Luvd the entire premise very very much... n especially the growth in ArBis relationship frm Strangers to acquaitances to friends n finally to lovers.... Fabulous ā¤ļø
Luvd the whole Bday surprise bit like soooo much yaar... it was so thotful of Armu to bring Bharti out of the room ..out of her past n guide her towards a beauitful future..! its like he became her LIGHT at the end of the DARK tunnel...that she was in...šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤— n also.. culdn stop smiling at how Armu blushed at being Called SWEET for th first time or Hugged for the first time..šŸ˜›
Very very well written Ghazu..... now my dil wants Many more OS frm ušŸ˜‰
Edited by Armu4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh Ghazu Ghazu Jaanu..!! Excellently written yaar!!..šŸ¤—
Good to see that you've started on OS and girl you SO didn't make a mistake in writing one! It was totally a pleasure reading your OS..and what can i say man..I tell ya one person who can write such deep kinda love lines (man i duno what to call them...šŸ˜†..see i told ya am not good with writing deep emotion filled lines in stories..) is YOU!
I hope you know what i am trying to say. Like those lines where Armaan tells how much he loves Bharti..and that he can't live without her..i find it tough to write hence if you notice in my FF i've yet to come to the love bit..šŸ˜† mine is still on friendship/unaware of love base....but you do it so well..!! In your "Tum Say Hum" FF the love you show between Armaan and Bharti is so strong there also..and you did the same here..!!
So great job girl..!! šŸ‘šŸ¼...
I love the storyline of your OS. Something new..and was also sad. First Bharti being heartbroken..and then later when she and Armaan are close, Armaan gets heartbroken..I was pretty shock when Bharti told Armaan that she is marrying someone else.. Didn't see it coming..and felt sad for Armu. BTW love the way Armu proposed to Bharti! So simple and cute.! "Marry me!..I feel nervous so i want to say it faster..Marry me Bharti"...😳..Loved it!..
Love the ending, though was sad that Bharti's dulha actually died..:(....but then ArBi got together eventually..😊
Keep them coming in girl..!! Would so love to read more One Shots from ya..!! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
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šŸ˜† what do you mean by you forgot your own name spell?šŸ˜†
you know what, when I see Gazal is writing something I always expect funny things, but this OS is not funny😭 only at the end when I saw you saying you forgot your name spelling made me smile "that's our sweet Gaz"šŸ˜†

Anyways jokes apart: The OS is "Mindboggling Rocking"🤣

Really you wrote so many things in a OS, so many incidents which brought our ArBi finally together, very well concept and very well written. šŸ‘

Do write more OSšŸ˜

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Posted: 15 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooooow girl excellent work šŸ‘ love the concept
Love Armaan & the love he have for Bharti it was mix of love & friendship
for Armaan me so glad that he got his true love at the end
gr8 work girlšŸ¤—u rox in ur 1st OS
take care
naley


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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
it's awesome yaar ! loved everything about it .... from the beginning till the end--- everything is perfect šŸ˜› loved Armaan a lot ...
Great writing šŸ‘

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