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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

thanks a lot dear

i was waiting for your comment😃
thanks for likeing it😃
stela and jon's special appearence🤔 yes thatis posable
but it will take i bit time😃
thanks a lot again

Aaww waiting for my comments...😳
Hahah well yea i was on a holiday for three days so didn't come into IF. Yst i managed to read it all.😊...Yes yes pls consider K!! stella and Jon's special appearence! Me like jungle boy!!..very much.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Aaww waiting for my comments...😳
Hahah well yea i was on a holiday for three days so didn't come into IF. Yst i managed to read it all.😊...Yes yes pls consider K!! stella and Jon's special appearence! Me like jungle boy!!..very much.😆

even i love that jungle guy too😆
it's fun writing about his jungle😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Tum Say Hum part 36

After a little while both of them left the hotel..............Gyan left the hotel too and fallow them

This is the place they went to

Armaan and bharti wear their skates....while they were wearing skates, bharti told Armaan how much she love skating

Bharti: i was waiting for snow fall so that we can skate.....do u like skating

Armaan: yah....its fun

On the other hand Gyan was preparing for his plan

Gyan: this is last skate of your life

Armaan and bharti wear their skates and stand up to start

Bharti: lets compete and see who will win...

Armaan: ok...let see who will win....that flag...lets see how will get to that flg first

He point to a flag which was near same wires.....

Bharti: OK....but be careful...never cross those wires because that is 'no entry'....if anyone cross those wires that person never come back....

Armaan: why.....

Bharti: because after those wires a long slide starts and if anyone fell from there he keep slipping and can't stop....and when that person stops he is miles and miles away from here...so those wires are for safety....no one can cross those wires accidently....unless those wires are close....

Armaan: so...we don't need to be worry....let's start

Bharti: let's go....ONE...TWO...THREE.....GO!!!

Both of them start skating....both of them were skating fast to win.....they cant see anything except that flag....they didn't even realize that Gyan had putted a stone on their way and the wires are broken too.....both of them were enjoying it and trying to win but their skates hit that stone and both of them fell down in each other's arms and roll down the broken wires so both of them cross those wires....they couldn't stop and slip down the slide....they keep rolling down....both of them were in each other's arms....after a long ride in each other's arms when they finally stop they were still holding each other tightly....when they stop, Armaan was laying on bharti....he look at her face but her face was covered with her hairs...Armaan softly move her hairs and look at her....bharti's eyes was close but when Armaan move her hairs she slowly open her eyes and look at Armaan's face.....armaan's face was very close to her face...Armaan was lost in her eyes and bharti couldn't move her eyes too....

Bharti: Armaan....are u OK

Armaan realize what's happening he stood up and give his hand to get up....both of them stand up and look around.... all they can see was snow...they were miles and miles away from city

They were at a place like this

They can't see any way or anything....they can't see skating hill station too...

Armaan (confuse): where are we...

Bharti (scared): OMG...looks like we cross those wires

Armaan got scared too...both of them didn't knew what to do....bharti was scared and tears start felling on her cheeks...she couldn't stop them....

Bharti: we are finished now ....we cross those wires and now there is no way to go.....what to do now...we are going to die now....

Armaan was scared too but he was trying to calm bharti....

Armaan: dont worry bharti....we will find some why

Bharti: which way....there is nothing except snow....where to go?

Armaan saw that she is very scared...he walk near her and put his hand around her shoulder.....

Armaan: dont worry bharti.....i am here with you...i wont let anything happed to you....i will protect you forever

Bharti look at Armaan and more tears fell on her cheeks

Bharti: we cant do anything now....we are going to die

Armaan: no...i wont let anything harm you...

He hug bharti....bharti didn't realize when her arms were around Armaan too....

Armaan hugging her tightly: i will protect you till my last breath....

Bharti was feeling safe in his arms.....both of them were holding each other tightly....but when bharti realize what is happing...she broke up from hug and step back....she start looking around again

Armaan: lets walk

Bharti: walk to where....

Armaan: we are not going to get anywhere by standing here....we will have to start walking.....only then we will get somewhere

Both of them start walking....snow was till their knees and it was very hard to walk in that snow....it was taking extra effort and extra power to walk in that much snow.....they keep walking without knowing that where they are going.....both of them were scared but Armaan was hiding his fear so that bharti will feel batter......it was hard to walk and both of them were felling down again and again...whenever bharti fell Armaan hold her and never let her fall.....finally both of them hold each other's hand and start walking.....

On the other hand bhaskar and Payal were eating lunch but when they got call from one of the students who was skating their too and he saw this accident....he told bhaskar about what happed with bharti and Armaan...bhaskar and Payal get worried and rush towards skating hill station.....when they get there, they call Amrjeet too and tell him about the accident....Amrjeet left from his office for Scotland.....

On the other hand Armaan and bharti was still walking but they can't see anything.......both of them were walking from last four hours....their legs was in snow from four hours .....blood in bharti's legs start freezing...her legs till knees were totally cold and it was hutting her too...she was trying to walk but it was very hard for her to walk...at least she couldn't take it anymore and she fell down and start crying because of pain....her legs were gone totally blue....

Armaan who was noticing her pain from a long time, sit next to her.....he was feeling very helpless...he wanted to do something but he couldn't think of anything

Armaan: is it hurting to much

Bharti (tears felling on her face): i cant walk now....

Armaan look around but all he could see was snow.....he couldn't see anywhere to go...it was going to get dark in few hours so they have to find some place to spend night....armaan was feeling very helpless...he look at bharti and he can feel how much pain is she feeling

Armaan: bharti...we have no option...we have to walk and get somewhere...

Bharti look at his face: i cant

Armaan saw more tears in her eyes....he raise his both hand and put them on bharti's cheeks....

Armaan: i am sorry bharti....i am helpless....i am not able to da anything for you

Bharti: Armaan trust me...i cant walk

Armaan: but bharti you will have to otherwise it will get dark and we will stuck here

Bharti: i think this is it

Armaan: no bharti....this cant be it....came on...you can do this bharti....

Bharti: no...i cant...you should go Armaan...go and save your life....

Armaan holding bharti's hand: no bharti....i am not going without u....we will go together

Bharti took her hand back: Armaan go...i know i cant come....go.(louder) go Armaan....just go

Armaan stood up: no...i am not going without you...

Bharti angrily and crying: why not....why are you putting your life in danger because of me....who i am...just a friend....and you are putting your life in danger because of a friend.....don't do this...go and save yourself...go....just forget me and go

Armaan shout: no...i cant leave you here....

Bharti: why?

Armaan: because i love you

These three words freeze the time for a moment....bharti was looking at armaan's face with shocked expiration...she couldn't believe on her ears....

Armaan: you are not just a friend....you are more than friend....you are my love...love of my life...i feel happy to see your smile and i feel sad to see your tears...you are an important part of my life infect you are my life...i can't live without you...you means world to me......when i am with you my life is beautiful....i am not going without you....i will die without you.....i would love to die with you but i wont leave you and save my life....i can die for you but i cant leave you here

Bharti was looking at him and she couldn't understand what to say.....she wasn't believing on her ears...she keep quite and lower her eyes.....but today Armaan wanted to hear something from bharti......he was looking down on bharti's face but bharti was not looking at him....she was totally confused and didn't know what to say so she decided not to say anything.....

Armaan raise his hand: hold my hand bharti....i promise i won't let you fell

She look at his hand and then she look at his face who was still waiting for her answer.....she was still confuse because she didn't accept anything like this will happened....

She ignored armaan's hand offer and tried to get up own her own.....it was painful because her legs were frozen and she couldn't feel her feet.....but still she somehow stood up own her own....she was going to fell...Armaan tried to hold her but bharti stop him.....

Bharti: i am fine....you done need to worry..😲

She start walking somehow

Armaan thought that his fear become true....he was thinking that he was right that if he told bharti that he love her, he might lose her...and today he lose her

This song start playing in background

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-c2q6R0deM

kaise batayein kyun tujh ko chahe

yaara bata na paaye

baatein dil o ki dekho jo baaki

aakhein tujhe samjhaye

tu jaane na

tu jaane na

tu jaane na

tu jaane na

(both of them were walking in snow sadly)

Mil ke bhi hum na mile

Tumse na jaane kyu

(Armaan look at bharti)

Milo ke hai fansle

Tumse na jaane kyu

(bharti was looking down and ignoring Armaan)

Anjaane hai silsile

Tum se na jaane kyu

Sapne hai palko tale

Tumse na jaane kyu

(bharti fell and Armaan hold her...she was in Armaan's arms)

Kaise batayein kyu tujh ko cahe

Yara bata na paaye

(he was staring in bharti's eyes)

Baatein dil o ki dekho jo baaki

Aankhin tuhe samjhaye

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

(bharti stood up and start looking at other side)

(they start walking again and all the beautiful memorise he had with bharti, was front of his eyes)

Nigahon mein dekho meri

Jo hai bas gaya

(he remember when first time he fell on bharti in library)

Woh ha milta tumse

Hu bah u

(he look at bharti again who was still looking at other way)

Jaane teri aankhein thi

Ya baatein thi wajha

(he remember when he was very close to her in London eye)

Hue tum jo dil ki

Aarzoo

(he feel sad that he lose his love and friend)

Tum pass ho ke bhi

(bharti was about to fell again but Armaan hold her hand)

Ehsaas ho ke bhi

(she took her hand back)

Apne nahi

Asie hai hum ko gileh

Tumse najaane kyu

Meelo ke hai fansle

Tum se na jaane kyu

(they start walking sadly again)

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

(please stop the song here)

Bharti was not sure that she love him or not so that's why she was quite but Armaan was taking that he lose his love.....

It starts getting dark and both of them were still looking for a place to spend night..... Suddenly bharti saw a light.....

Bharti: Armaan look at that.....i think that is something.

Armaan: lets see.....maybe we get help

Armaan and bharti start walking towards that light.....as they were getting close, that light keep increasing....when they get near they saw that it was a small wooden house....bharti knocked the door......

One old man opened the door.....that man was surprised to see them because that place was far away from city and no one comes their......he assumed that both of them are in problem.....

Bharti: hi....we had as accident and we reached here.....we dont know where to go and it night so we cant find any way to go.....so we will be grateful if you let us stay in your house for one night....we will find our way tomorrow morning....

That man look at both of them...they were shivering with cold....he saw that bharti cant stand properly on her feet because her feet are frozen ..

He felt that they are good people so he let them come in...

Man: i am Jek....you two can spend night here

It was a small room not a proper house.....it has one bed and a few staff ...but it was nice and warm inside because of the fire heater....

Bharti and Armaan quickly set near heater to warm themselves

Armaan: thank you so much.....if you wouldn't help us, we would die in this cold

Jek: well.....I never let anyone come in but you two looks in problem so i let you in

He gave both of them two blankets....they were sitting front of each other...Armaan was occasionally looking at bharti but bharti didn't make an eye contact....Jek start making coffee for them...while making coffee he asked them few questions about how they get here....Armaan told him about the whole incident.....Jek gave them coffee....

Bharti: thanks...you are like an angel for us

Jek: it's ok.....you are very innocent looking girl.. just like my daughter...so i have to help both of them....when did you two get marry

Bharti: marry?😳😲

Jek: yah...you two are couple right....

Armaan and bharti look at each other....they tried to clear that they are no marry...

Bharti: actually...we are...

Jek: oh your feet are gone blue ....let me give you some medicine otherwise it will get worse

He gave her some medicine

Jek: you might feel sleepy but you will be fine till morning... and i will show you guys way to go back

Bharti ate the medicine and both of them ignore the fact that Jek thinks that they are married...

Jek: ok you two now relax i am going

Armaan: where are u going

Jek: i am going back of this house..there is a small room....i will sleep there tonight....ok..good night

Jek leave the room...

Armaan and bharti was still quite....she take wall's sport and sit comfortable.... she prefer to sleep there and soon bharti fell in deep sleep....armaan was looking at her face with love in his eyes.....he was thinking about what happend today....he was still sad that bharti is not talking to him....bharti's quietness was killing Armaan.....

(song start from here again)

Ohh jaane na

Jaane na

Jaane na

Tu jaane na

( Armaan was staring at bharti's face)

Khyalon maein laakohn baatein

Yu toh keh gaya

Bola kuch na tere sahmney

(he get up and sit next to bharti)

Hue na begaane bhi tum hoke,

Aur dekho tum mere hi na bhane

(he put her head on his shoulder and tears appear in his eyes)

Afsos hota hai

Dil bhi yeh rota hai

(he hold bharti's hand and tears fell on his face)

Sapne sanjota ha

Pagla hua

Soche yeh

Hum the mile

Tume se na jaane kyu

( he kiss bharti's hand)😳

Meelo ke hai fansle

Tum se na jaane kyu

(bharti put her head on Armaan's chest(she is in sleep)

Anjaane hai silsile

Tumse najaane kyu

Sapne hai palko tale

Tumse najaane kyu

(Armaan put his hand around bharti...bharti was slpeeing in armaan's arms)

Kaise batayein kyu tujh ko chahe

Yaara bata na paaye

(he kissed bharti's head and hug her tightly)😳

Baatein dil o ki

Dekho jo baaki aankhein tujhe samjhaya

(he closed his eyes too)

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na

(soon he fell in sleep too...armaan want to spend this night close to bharti because he was afraid that he might lose her now)😭😭

Thanks for reading

I know i know it's to long

But it has to be in one shot so i write this long one

Sorry

Hope you guys like it

Will be waiting for the comments

Ghazal naz

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Posted: 15 years ago
👏 such a sweet and romantic part,
did i see a hint of Kavyanjali thrown in😆 loved it, even the songs were of perfect choice
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: BlessedSexyone

👏 such a sweet and romantic part,

did i see a hint of Kavyanjali thrown in😆 loved it, even the songs were of perfect choice

what😲? 🥺🥺🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 😭😭😭
Kavyanjali🤔 sorry dear i never watched that show
i got this idea from one of my friends and i am sure she never watched any indan dram before too
thanks for liking it
Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW girl it was not long it was Awesome girl i really wanted more girl superb part 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
I LOVE THE SONG & it suits them perfectly !!! WOOOOOOOOOW😳
OMG FINALLY ARMAAN SAID IT THE THREE MAGICAL WORDS
I love the way u made armaan put his true feeling out Fabulous work girl it froze me as well ☺️ 👏 truly mind blowing part awesomely beautiful!!
LOVING IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH !!!!!
man once in his life gyan did something right this time like u rox dude 😆
girl dying to read the next part please continue sooooon!!!!!!!!!
take care
Naley

👏
Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome part...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
OMG!!!
Armaan confessed his love...

Take Care
Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago
WoW Ghazal Really Really well written!!..I felt so sad while reading it!!
Esp that part where Bharti says it's "The End for her.."....😭 😭..And Armaan was "like no!..Don't say that"...😭 😭.....
Very sad i actually could feel their stuggle in the snow!..Must have been really really cold and bad...Plus Bharti's foot became blue and frozen..😭 😭 😭.............Ok i should stop with the crying emoticons already..😆😆
The confession part was 👍🏼.......(Armu FINALLY Confessed!! Yessss!!..)
Every single word of what Armaan said touched my heart!! That WHOLE paragraph was just beautiful!!..He not wanting to leave her at all and wanting to protect her always...Then saying he will die with her and so on....Very touching!....
Great song in between..Oh yes Gyaan is EVIL..:(...
Glad they found some help..And i hope Bharti accepts Armu's love!..Loveed how he hugged her tIght and slept because he was afraid that he would loose her..
Nicely written Ghazal!! 👏 👏 👏
Me like this seriousness suddenly and no worries even though it was long, it was a pleasure to read!..Every single bit of it!......🤗..(Huggies for you..)
Do carry on yea!..😊
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

WoW Ghazal Really Really well written!!..I felt so sad while reading it!!
Esp that part where Bharti says it's "The End for her.."....😭 😭..And Armaan was "like no!..Don't say that"...😭 😭.....
Very sad i actually could feel their stuggle in the snow!..Must have been really really cold and bad...Plus Bharti's foot became blue and frozen..😭 😭 😭.............Ok i should stop with the crying emoticons already..😆😆
The confession part was 👍🏼.......(Armu FINALLY Confessed!! Yessss!!..)
Every single word of what Armaan said touched my heart!! That WHOLE paragraph was just beautiful!!..He not wanting to leave her at all and wanting to protect her always...Then saying he will die with her and so on....Very touching!....
Great song in between..Oh yes Gyaan is EVIL..:(...
Glad they found some help..And i hope Bharti accepts Armu's love!..Loveed how he hugged her tIght and slept because he was afraid that he would loose her..
Nicely written Ghazal!! 👏 👏 👏
Me like this seriousness suddenly and no worries even though it was long, it was a pleasure to read!..Every single bit of it!......🤗..(Huggies for you..)
Do carry on yea!..😊

oh thanks a lote dear😃
even i felt sad when our arbi is sad
and frozn feet realy hurts yaar😆 once it happed with me😆
thanks a lot for liking it🤗(huggies back)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naley4ever

WOW girl it was not long it was Awesome girl i really wanted more girl superb part 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
I LOVE THE SONG & it suits them perfectly !!! WOOOOOOOOOW😳
OMG FINALLY ARMAAN SAID IT THE THREE MAGICAL WORDS
I love the way u made armaan put his true feeling out Fabulous work girl it froze me as well ☺️ 👏 truly mind blowing part awesomely beautiful!!
LOVING IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH !!!!!
man once in his life gyan did something right this time like u rox dude 😆
girl dying to read the next part please continue sooooon!!!!!!!!!
take care
Naley

👏

oh i am sooo happy that you really like it
and yah first time gyan did something good😆 but his plan flop again😆
i am happy that u liked it
i will continue and PM u😃

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