my FF~ Tum say Hum(part46)(page70)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tum Say Hum

Hi guys I am starting my first FF because I want to try FF now. It is about Armaan and Bharti of cores and it has a lot of other fun as well. Here is a small introduction of my story creators.

Amarjeet;

Bharti's father and a signal parent and a very rich and successful business man. His wife die after bharti birth and he didn't get marry again for bharti. Bharti is his only daughter that's way she is Amerjeet's life. His home called Chada house. It's his family name.

Bharti

Bharti's full name in Bharti Chada. So it is obvious that she is a Punjabi. Is 20years old. She is a rich spoiled girl and only daughter of Amerjeet. And a student in college but careless and 'bindas'

Bhaskar

He is best best friend of Bharti and her classmate. His parents die when he was a child and he lives his all life in a children home. After he was 18 he start doing a job and continue his studies. He always looks at Bharti and thinks that he wants to be as rich as Bharti but he love (not the love. But love as a friend) his friend and feel happy for her.

Payal

She is a best best best friend of Bhaskar and bharti. She lives her life in childrens home with bhaskar and lives it after she gets 18. She is doing a part-time job and study in bharti and bhaskar class.

About Armaan. Well it is a surprise and u will find out later.

Payal and bhaskar want to do something in their life and want to be successful. Bharti bhaskar and payal always do a lot of mastiy in college and tree of them are really good friends. Bharti is a careless girl but she can do anything for her priceless friendship with bhaskar and payal.

Well this story takes place in England because I can observe it easily and get it a life.

So if you want to know the story let me know.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sounds great and it looks really new and fresh. Love the fact that Bharti is Amarjeet's daughter. I'm sure that will be interesting and funny. Can't wait for you to continue and I am waiting to know about Armaan. 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gazal,

Totally loved the concept😃
Please do continue😊
waiting for Armaan to come😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey ghazal..dear...welcome to the club of BB FF writers...🤗
n m soooo excited to read ur character sketch...n well the bharti in ur story reminds me of a someone like u....doing lots of masti in college...😉
btw aab yeh armu ka suspense kaisa...i cant take suspense on Armu...jaldi batao...mera Armu kahan hai???😍 write soon dear!! ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Ghazal!😊

Am happy that you're starting your own FF! Thats great!
Do carry on because the intro is looking good so far! Hahah AJ as Bharti's father!
Gonna be fun!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Hey ghazal..dear...welcome to the club of BB FF writers...🤗

n m soooo excited to read ur character sketch...n well the bharti in ur story reminds me of a someone like u....doing lots of masti in college...😉
btw aab yeh armu ka suspense kaisa...i cant take suspense on Armu...jaldi batao...mera Armu kahan hai???😍 write soon dear!! ❤️

hey i am going to put all my college life masti in this.
and i am going to have fun wrighting it. and make sure that you have fun reading it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tum Say Hum (part 1)

So it is early in the morning in Chada house. Its 8:00 and bharti is still sleeping when it's her college time. Amerjeet is in kitchen and making breakfast for bharti and him self. He has cooks but he like to cook for his daughter.

Amerjeet is in hurry because he knows that it is 8:00 am and his spoiled princess is still sleeping. He is in hurry and he is shouting in Punjabi with his English servants who can understand him.

Amerjeet to his servant: khotay main tanu butter layan ko kaha tha.

Servant confuses and don't understand him: sorry sir how can I help u?

Amerjeet (To himself): kya masibat ha. Ya ager ma lodhyana hota to mara nokar mari bat to samejhty. Go upstairs and awake bharti. Its 8:00 now. She needs to go to college.

And at that time bhaskar and payal enter.

Payal and bhaskar: hi uncle.

Amerjeet: hi. Payal good that u are here. Plz go and awake bharti she is getting late.

Payal: OK uncle.

Payal enter in bharti's room and awake her up. Bharti get ready and both of them come downstairs.

Bhaskar was sitting on table and having breakfast. Bharti said good morning to everyone and pull plate from bhaskar hand and start eating.

This is their habit. Bhaskar always pull things from Bharti hand and eat them and bharti always do the same with bhaskar. It is a kind of joke they do with each other.

After breakfast three of them go to college.

In college bharti is a kind of 'gonad'. Everyone is sacred from her pranks. They know if anyone said anything she doesn't like she will be very evil. She loves teasing students. All teachers are fed-up with her behave but they can't say any thing to her because she always pass in exams but she never study in class. All teachers are shocked that how this girl always passes when she don't study and leans music during class.

There was a group of 5 students who are the worse enemies of bharti, bhaskar and payal. Bharti call them ganja group because one of the guys in that group is 'ganja' (bolder). Bhaskar and bharti always fight with them and payal don't like it. She want them to study hard rather then fighting with ganja group.

Bharti, bhaskar and payal went into their class and bharti sit in her usual style. She put her feet on the table and put heard phones in her ear and starts leasing music. Just then teacher enter in class and payal try to inform bharti by pushing her. But bharti didn't care and continue. Payal try to warn her that teacher is in class but just then teacher come to bharti with a angry smiling face as he is fad-up with this spoil girl but he cant do any thing.

Bharti is still busy with her iPod.

Teacher: hello madam what can I get for u.

Bharti shocked and said: sir??

Teacher repeat: yes madam as you are in your bad room and I am your servant. What can I get for u??( he is angry )

Bharti put her feet down and pull her head phones and try to act like nothing happened: sir you are really funny. You are kidding right.

Teacher with anger: No the day u come to this college I stop joking and so as other teachers in this college. We are terrified from u. u know what happened last night.

Bharti in a serious mood: did you wife run away?

Teacher still angry: No worse then that. I saw u in my dream and I wake up with horror and couldn't sleep rest of night.

Bharti: don't worry sir I will get u sleeping tablets. Then u can sleep all night.

Teacher: can u get me poison so that I will sleep forever and I don't have to teach u.

Bharti: don't worry eat whole bottle and you will be finish forever.

Teacher: shut up!!!!!!!!!!!! Just shut up

Bhaskar who was laughing during this conversation suddenly stop laughing as he know what is going to happened now.

Teacher: I am fed-up know u just''.

Bharti just then entrapped: I know what u are going to say. 'Get out' well u don't have to I am doing a favour on u and I am leavening. OK''' Now chill!!!!!!!

Bharti put her bag and walk out from class as this is what she wants. She goes to canteen and the girl in canteen knew that she is going to came. Because this is what she always do.

Bharti: hey sexy. How are u? Look how much I love u. I am back to u as usual

Girl in canteen name is Jani

Jani: yah I know you always come back not because you like me because you don't like your lessons. Tell me one thing. You don't attend your lessons then how come u pass every time.

Bharti: well that's a secrete

Preview

Bharti have a fight with ganja gang.

Hope u like it.

Do comment.

Hope it is not too long.

And tanu this bharti is not me ha. i am not like her in college
ghazal naz
Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ghazal...Bhartis convo wit her teacher was total...🤣 moment... luvd it..!! reminds me of my college days..!! got thrown out of class quite a lot..!! 😉

hmm...now now..lemme see if ur Bharti..is similar to my ghazal...😊
Awesome epi..luvd it..!! Great start...keep it up..!! n write more..soon!! ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

ghazal...Bhartis convo wit her teacher was total...🤣 moment... luvd it..!! reminds me of my college days..!! got thrown out of class quite a lot..!! 😉

hmm...now now..lemme see if ur Bharti..is similar to my ghazal...😊
Awesome epi..luvd it..!! Great start...keep it up..!! n write more..soon!! ❤️

well she is bit similer to every girl in college. i mean every one thourn out from the class. it is usual. i will wrigt soon. thnx for liking it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oooooooooooooooo sounds fun love it totally reminds me bk in the dayz da way i was wid tutors lolzzzz cont soon xxxxx

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