FF~*Tera hone laga hoon *~ Part 19 on pg 29

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Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

Haila!!!!!!!!!!!!
The part was just fab...
Loved it too bits...
Loved everything...
From Armaan fighting that Mr Mehta to Bharti calming him despite the fact that she herself was very tensed...
Then the way Armaan took of her bangles and applied the ointment...
HAYYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was so cute...
Then the hug!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!
I was just drooling over it...
Ayi Ma!!!!
The part was full of ArBi and I loved it to the core...
Continue soon...
Cant wait for the next part

Take Care
Zoya

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

Sohanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Yaar u killed me 😳😃

Such a wonderful part yaar 👏👏

somewhere i knew it would be this Mehta who went after Bharti in the beginning 😡

He reminded me of Raichura 😡😡

i love the way Armaan reacted 👏👏

Served this Mehta right 😡

Amarjeetey 😆 for once he didnt take care of its profits but of Bharti 😃👏

dont worry Amarjeet, Bharti & Armaan will bring you more profits 😆

You fulfilled my wish with the part of Armaan putting the shall on bharti and then hugging her from behind😳😳 then the rest was pure magic 👏😳

Both slept in each other's arms , awwwwwwwwwwww 😳👏

Love the way the story is going, smoothingly 😊

Yaar this part was beyond my expectations 😃

I loved it completely, im so amazed with ur writing style yaar.⭐️👏👏

Every scenes and emotions are so well described. 👏

Its a real pleasure to read 😳 but why does it appear so short 😆😆 i know im greedy 😆😆

Please do update soon 😳😳

Love,

Humera 🤗

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#123

superb yaar👏

i love the way armaan fight with that rascal

and armaan is soooooo sweet that way he is handling bharti

loved it

countiu soon

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#124

Dear Sohana,

Wow!!
loved every bit of it.
Specially loved the way you described every moments in detail.
The Bharti-Mehta part
Ar beating Mehta part (it reminded me of Ar beating Vasuli. The way he stopped him when Vasuli was about to hit Bharti😍)
The way AJ behaved😃
The way you described the part when ArBi were coming back.
The part when both of them were putting ointment on each other
And finally the last part😃

"He wrapped the shawl around her and in the process he ended up wrapping his arms around her. Bharti was surprised at first, but then she just turned around in his arms and hugged Armaan tightly. Armaan was even more surprised than Bharti had been, but he hugged her back and rubbed his hands up and down her back trying to comfort her because she was crying. Armaan tried asking her what was wrong and she just shook her head and continued holding onto him tightly. Armaan brought her to the couch and made her sit down. She had stopped crying, but still continued to hold onto Armaan. Armaan just put his arms around her and they both sat back. After a little bit Bharti closed her eyes and had fallen asleep with her head on Armaan's chest. She felt safe and secure in Armaan's arms."

This whole part was just superb.
I think all the readers will be 😃 after reading this. Me waiting for Tanu's comments😆. She must hasn't done anything in her office, only thinking about ArBi😆

Totally loved it.
Can't see Bharti sad.😔
Continue soon dear.

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#125

Outstanding update dear .... 😛

loved every bit of it .....

very well written 👏...

the ArBi moments were superb !!!!😛

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#126

Oh gosh...am so relieved that Bhartis he-man comes n saves her in the nick of time....ohhh ...that OK...😡 argghh..how dare he touch my janus jaan... i will kill him...!! 😡

Luvd how Armu knocks the hell out of him.. 👏 n well kudos to AJ for being such an understanding boss.....👍🏼

Am so touched to see that Bharti...tho being Sad herself tries to cheer Armu...❤️ Perfect Wife..❤️

n OMG..the whole fist aid ENCOUNTER...😳 got me all mushy ...luvdddddddddd it....❤️❤️❤️ luvd how my janu controlled himself ...tho wanting to kiss Bharti ... Armu truly a perfect MAN ❤️

Awesome epi Sohana...👏 Rocking...

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Noori Khan

@CrazyNoori

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Posted: 15 years ago

#127

loved it loved it cont soon soooo cute it was

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N.H.Talagala

@naley4ever

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#128

wow girl absolute beautiful love it soooo much 🤗
please continue soooon dont keep me waiting I'M crazy in love with ur FF☺️
love everything about it
sooo real keep's me wanting for more ever time 😳 love it love it love it sooooooo much
take care
naley

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#129

Continue yaar...
Waiting for the next part...

Take Care
Zoya

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Sohana Singh

@*Sohana*Singh*

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Posted: 15 years ago

#130

@Vini So sweet of you to come onto your laptop to comment...your comments always make me smile. Yeah Mr Mehta did bring them a bit closer, but I hated writing that scene. That SN scene is just soooo romantic, sooo magical, how I wish it could happen with ArBi...😍Glad you enjoyed it.😊

@Zoya thank you for all the sweet comments, all your little make exclamations are too cute, really glad you liked it😛

@Humera Though your comments aren't that often, I just love reading them. 😊Glad I fulfilled your wish. Do tell me if there is anything else you'd want to see happening between ArBi, I just love writing thoe romantic moments. Sorry, it wasn't as long as you wanted, but I think I made up for that a bit with the next part😃

@Ghazal_naz Thank you sooo much. 😊Glad you like. Yup, Armaan is just amazing in all he does.😳

@Kaninika Thanks for all the lovely comments and I'm really glad that I can bring a smile to your face.😛 I know, I don't like writing about sad Bharti...😔

@Arpita Thank you for the comments😛, really makes me want to continue writing😊

@Tanu I always look foward to reading your comments, they are always so expressive! and they bring a smile to my face. 😛Yup, I'm glad your janu arrived in time.👍🏼

@Noorie Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the updates😛

@Naley Thank you sooo much, really makes me happy to know that you are loving my FF😊. I will try to keep it as real as possible😛

@Zoya sorry to make you wait, will try to update as quickly as I can...😊

Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago