My first FF-Dec 14 to Dec 17

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please be prepared to read long FF....hope you guys like it...This is what I will remember how this show ended.

Background:

I am part of Creative team who is forced to end BB by Sony and I recently visited Indian-forum (due to the petition or other email J ). I read how BB fans want to end BB even though fans are very very mad that Sony chopped their favourite BB show. So I have only one week left and re-do the story line to meet my Fans expectations.

I will start with an episode when OK left the house after arguing with Armaan. ArBi are lost in the jungle, KK appears in front of Bharti and Armaan is gone to fine some water.

Episode Mon Dec 14:

KK: Bhasker, you completed all 8 out of 9 roop of women and did a wonderful job. See how you have changed now. You feel women's pain now.

Bhasker: (who is happy he completed 8 roop of women) why are you here…just to tell me this or what? Or may be there is another challenge for me.

KK: no more Challenge, just one more roop left for you to fulfill

Bhasker: and that roop is?

KK: it is called Mamta…motherly love for her kids. And after you are done with this, you will turn into Bhasker. And this will happen very soon. (Looking at us on screen…after all BB is ending)

Bhasker: (at this point of time is very tensed….he wants to stay as Bharti..but is hesitant to say this to KK)

KK: (knowing Bhasker's feeling, is teasing him further)..after then you will stay as Bhasker and enjoy your life as a man. And then you don't need to worry about OK, Armaan and Jiya (he has that teasing smile on his face)

Bharti: (now really worried and Bhasker turned into Bharti) KK….can I ask you a question

KK: what is that?

Bharti: Have I ever done something really good since I became Bharti

KK: yes, you did many good things….(same teasing smile on his face)…why are you asking?

Bharti: I need a favour..I …I …I …would like to stay with Armaan and Jiya for 24 hrs with no Ok and family

KK: why so?

Bharti: I…I don't know…but I like when Armaan is with me or when we three are together.

KK: So you are in love with Armaan

Bharti: I don't know..

KK: why don't you accept this fact Bhasker….that you are in love with Armaan.

Bharti: No Bhasker is not in love with Armaan…it is Bharti who is in love with Armaan.

KK: Aren't they both same….(with a smile on his face)

Bharti: No, how can they be. Bhasker is a man and Bharti is a women. They feel different

KK: oh now you are telling me you are two people living in one body

Bharti: exactly…see now you are getting me. Two people are living in the same body and should be separated

KK: how is that possible?

Bharti: possible what?

KK: To separate Bharti and Bhasker

Bharti: why not, you are a GOD, you can do anything. If you can turn man into women, you can turn them into two separate people,

KK: Ok, even if I separate you two, what next then?

Bharti: Well then Bharti can be with Armaan and Jiya. Bhasker can be a man

KK: You mean Bhasker can be with Payal

Bharti: with Payal …why with Payal?

KK: so even now you haven't realised Payal loves Bhasker

Bharti: (shocked face..background flash how Payal was there for him/her…Karva Chauth..when Payal kept fast…)

KK: you didn't see that, right? You are still so involved with Armaan and couldn't see her love for you…

Bharti: (still in shock..tears rolling down……thinking...how could I be so selfish…now with a BIG and naughty smile).so KK that means who HAVE to turn us into two people…so that Armaan gets Bharti and Payal is with Bhasker….

KK: smiles……and disappeared

Armaan coming back with no water. Bharti and Armaan search for water and food.

It is night time, Bharti is near water-fall washing her face Armaan admiring her….scene that they showed.

Armaan putting his shirt around Bharti. Bharti gets up and comes close to Armaan and puts her head on his arms. Armaan admiring her, seeing her sleeping, puts his arms around her. Bharti is sleeping (pretending) in his arms facing him. Armaan just can't take his eyes out of her face. Bharti slowly opens her eyes and looks into Armaan eyes…eye contact…keep looking at each other.

Bharti;(still resting her head around his arms) Armaan, it seems it is been yesterday when I saw you in MU. Do you remember how many times you fought with me?

Armaan: I fought with you or you fought with me?

Then they start taking about old golden days of MU.........

Bharti: (slowly raising her hands and hold Armaan's face)

Armaan: (keeps looking at her….resting his face and lips into Bharti's palm…)

Bharti: (tears rolling) Armaan, today may be my last night with you. That is why I wanted to tell you what my heart says. I love you and Jiya a lot……(eye contact) …Do you love me?

Armaan: (lifting his face from her palms)….I don't know Bharti (feeling uneasy due to OK)

Bharti: (feeling pain, hurt…doesn't know what do say…just keeps looking at him). Can you just fulfill my last wish, please?

Armaan: (looking at her with an expression..what is that)

Bharti: just for tonight, I want to sleep in your arms. Please don't say no

Armaan: (at this time, forgets Ok and his family...he keeps holding her tightly….)

Bharti and Armaan spend this night in each other arms. Episode ended.

Precap… AJ comes

Episode: Tue: back home and Bharti confronting OK,

AJ comes and the whole episode as they showed. Bharti confronting Ok and tells Payal she doesn't want to become Bhasker.

Episode: Wed:

Same episode what they showed…Payal telling Armaan she loves Bhasker…Payal and Bharti scene where Payal wants Bharti to remain Bharti and marry Armaan. Bharti realizing how much Payal loved Bhasker and is willing to sacrifice her love to save Armaan and Bharti's love.

*** I am editing Armaan's wife scene, as I don't think it was necessary***

Armaan and Jiya ready to go for an audition and Bharti saying Bye. Jiya is in audition and realises she forgets her wand at home. While at home Bharti finds wand and rushes to Jiya's school. Jiya is on the stage and Bharti comes and gives her the wand. There is a big smile on Jiya's face. Armaan is standing behind Bharti.

Jiya: If I meet a fairy, I will wish that every child should have a mother and that too like Bharti Aunty. She is not my mother but I want her to be my mother.

Bharti is in tears…and Armaan is in pain (as he is thinking Bharti is married to Ok and can't be Jiya's mom). After the speech, Bharti hugs Jiya and Armaan hugs both of them. Jiya won the audition.

Jiya: dada, can we three go out for lunch together

Armaan: (looking at Bharti…Bharti nodding her head in yes) sure where do you want to go

Jiya: the same place where we used to go…Bharti aunty's favourite place

Armaan and Bharti have eye contact and all three of them go to the same restaurant and have family lunch.

Bharti: Jiya I am so proud of you today, you did very well in your audition. So tell me what you want as a reward

Jiya: thinking..hmmmm…yes I want one thing…promise you will give me that

Bharti: I promise I will give you that (Armaan is listening their conversation and has a smile on his face)

Jiya: Ok I want only one thing; can I call you Bharti Mama?

Bharti: (just keeps looking at her in disbelief and moist eyes…looks at Armaan…Who is equally speechless but has a pain on his face) Yes Jiya, you can call me Mama. I will always be your Mama (and gives big hug to Jiya)

Armaan smiling with moist eyes…just keeps admiring both of them….

At night Bharti talking to God, how she felt mother today…and KK appears…telling him she completed all 9 roops. It is a time for her to be Bhasker again. Bharti crying and pleading can I stay as Bharti please...KK disappeared.

Ok waking up Bharti….who is turned into Bhasker…

Episode Thur (1 hr special episode): Bhasker and Payal run away, Bharti and Bhasker into two people…ArBI and BhPay…and they lived happily ever after

Same scene they showed..Ok and Bhasker (that was so funny), Bhasker in Payal's room…Payal and Bhasker running away and leaving a letter for Armaan. Ok and family break the door and Armaan reads the letter.

In the car, Payal and Bhasker…Bhasker crying and saying…KK this so wrong….why didn't he separated Bharti and Bhasker….Bhasker still has Bharti in him and is behaving like Bharti. Suddenly Bhasker feels thirty and wants Payal to get water. As car stops…Payal is out of car. KK appears in driver seat with Bhasker's shocked face. Suddenly he feels strike and there is Bharti sitting next to him. Both Bhasker and Bharti can't believe this. They are separated……

KK: Bhasker and Bharti, since both of you asked for the same wish with true heart, I fulfilled your wish. Same way like Geeta cursed with her pure heart…that is why you had to go through this journey. I am separating you two as being Bhasker in Bharti's body, Bharti had her own individuality. She went through lot of hardship…and is entitled for a reward.

Bharti and Bhasker vey happing at this stage…can't believe this.

KK: now I have to do one more thing

Bharti: what is that?

KK: I have to take care of OK, otherwise he will make your life hell…and you will cry bucket full of tears and that will make me sad…..I can't see my people sad and in tears…(he winks at Bharti)

Bharti: (with moist eyes, thankful expression….give big HUG to KK)

KK: Arey…what are you doing…if Armaan sees this he will think of something else….

Suddenly Payal open the car door and sits inside…KK disappeared

Payal: Bhasker, here is the water. AAAAAAAAAAAAA she screams when she sees Bharti and then Bhasker sitting next to him.

Payal: what happened…how did this happened…she touches both Bharti and Bhasker

They tell her KK separated both of them…all three hug each other.

Payal: where is the driver…

Bharti: Driver was KK, she gets on driving seat and drive to Bhasker's home

Nanhe is happy to see Bhasker and Bharti together with Payal…another hug and conversation between brothers. Bharti is very emotional to see Nanhe and she too gives her a hug. Bhasker confirms Bharti is his friend and not a wife. Infact she is not Ok's wife either.

****I am giving happy ending to OK too…even though BB fans hated him, Give him a break guys…after all he loves his Bharti Ji a lotJ******

At Armaan's home:

Bharti ji(is wearing Bihar style saree) enters the house along with KK. Whole family is there. As soon as Bharti ji sees OK, she rushes towards him and gives him a big hug. Armaan and Jiya are in shocked. OK is very happy.

OK: Bharti ji, where have you been…and where is Payal and the naked guy.

Bharti ji: who is Payal and who naked guy. This nice man (pointing to KK) brought me home. I was completely lost

OK: Lost? You were here with all of us and you even said you don't love me

Bharti ji: I don't love you…Oh My God, how can I say this. For me, you are my everything. The only person I have loved in my life is you.

OK: (very happy…can't believe his ears….) Maji…see my Bharti ji loves me a lot….I told you that.

Jiya wrapped her arms around Armaan legs….holding him tight…both Armaan and Jiya very sad…tears rolling down Jiya's eyes. Armaan helplessly looking at her, his cell phone rings…tring tring tring….Armaan picks up the phone

Armaan: Hello

Bharti: hello Armaan

Armaan: Bharti?

OK and family: what?

Bharti ji: with confused face…what what?

KK has a smile on his face

Armaan: Bharti, where are you?

Bharti: don't worry Armaan, where ever I am, I am fine. I just called you to say Bye. I won't come back to you again as you don't love me…..Bye. (she hangs up the phone)

Armaan: Bharti, Bharti listen to me….(he tries calling back…but the phone is switched off)

KK: Ok, Bharti ji is your wife and the Bharti who called Armaan is Armaan's Bharti. Bharti ji was kidnapped by your Bhua so that she doesn't have your child. Bharti ji was here in this city for last 6 months and I brought her here. (he takes leave before anyone asks him any question)

OK: Arye, listen…what is your name.

But KK is already disappeared.

OK: (repent expression on his face…looks at Armaan) I am sorry Armaan….I really did bad with you and Bharti. Please forgive me.

Armaan: Bhaiya don't say that…even I didn't trust my Bharti…I didn't trust my love

Jiya: dada, please get Bharti mama back. I need her…I love my mama….(sobbing….)

Armaan: (bend down…holding Jiya tightly…and crying)Yes Baccha we will get her back…She has to come back for you and for me

At Bhasker's home:

All three of having laughter time…Bhasker looking at Bharti making faces…Payal comes in between

Payal: hello, remember I am your girlfriend now….not Bharti

Bhasker: Payal you are more then a girl friend….you are my best friend…But Bharti is best friend too. Bharti I owe you everything as you are the one you brought me back from women to man….Thank you

Bharti: Thank you Bhasker…because of you, I am born…

And all of three have Friend HUG…..just then Armaan calls Payal

Armaan: Hello Payal, do you know where is Bharti?

Payal: (puts her phone on speakerphone, looks at Bharti….Bharti nodding her head in "No")Armaan…what is a matter?

Armaan: Payal, Ok's wife Bharti ji who is look alike my Bharti has returned (Bhasker, Bharti and Payal…in shocked)…Bharti called me and I am trying to call her back…but her mobile is switched off….do you know where is she?

Before Payal could say Jiya takes phone from Armaan…

Jiya: Payal aunty….(sobbing) do you know where is my Bharti mama….I miss her

Bharti is completely melted at this time…takes phone from Payal…

Bharti: Jiya baccha

Jiya (with Armaan shocked): where are you mama…please come back…I miss you

Bharti: I miss you to…I will come back soon…..(and she hangs up the phone)

Armaan looks at Jiya and is very sad…he remembers the time he spend with Bharti.

Bharti is crying…Payal and Bhasker put their hands of her shoulder

Payal: why didn't you talk to Armaan

Bharti: Payal, Armaan don't love me…he didn't even trust me when I told him I am not Ok's wife….

All three of them hug each other….

At dinner time, three of them are having a dinner and remembering last 6 months with laugher…Raichaura, Mr Singh and Bharti being dutiful daughter in law with Bhasker parents…suddenly door bell rings…Payal gets up to open the door….

Payal: who would come at this time?

She opens the door and it is Armaan and Jiya….Armaan looks at Payal….Payal just nods her head with a big smile. They come inside.

Bhasker: Payal, who is there?

Armaan, Jiya and Payal enter the dinning area….Bharti and Bhasker are shocked…Armaan is shocked seeing Bhasker with Bharti….he understand the guy who came to their house was indeed Bhasker

Armaan: Hi Bhasker…(they shake hands), Hi Bharti

Bharti: Hi, (she hugs Jiya…Jiya hold her Bharti mama tightly)

Jiya: Why did you left me

At this time Payal and Bhasker excuse themselves along with Jiya and went outside

Payal: Jiya, do you want to come with me…I wanted to show you something.

Armaan: (looking at Bharti with passion)…So you just left me

Bharti: No, it is you who don't love me. You don't trust me

Armaan: (coming close to Bharti): Who said I don't love me. The day I saw you in MU, I fell in love with you. (very close to Bharti…now they can hear each other heart beat going fast)…Background song …"bakudha tumhe ho….)

Armaan holding her in his arms…eye contact…Kisses her forehead….

Armaan: I am sorry for not trusting you and making our life miserable..(kisses again) I am sorry what OK did with you….(kisses again) I am sorry for letting you go….

AND they kiss each other…**the one we all waited for**

Both of them are in tears…and BIG HUG…Jiya comes from behind and hug their mama and dada

Next morning in MU, AJ welcomes Bhasker and Bharti…

AJ: We will celebrate Bhasker and Bharti comeback to MU….let us have party at night….sponsored by me.

Just then Ok enters…..there is dead silence in MU

OK: (comes straight near Armaan and Bharti) I am sorry Bharti ji….for everything I did to both of you…please forgive me…

Armaan and Bharti both give hug to Ok

OK: here is MU's papers…I transferred these papers on your name…This is my wedding gift for both of you.

At night…party time, everyone is happy…..Armaan's family is there, Bhasker's family is there…..

Armaan and Bharti looking stunning….starts dance on "bakudha tumhe ho…"eye contact

Bhasker and Payal looking stunning too…starts dancing….looking at each other….eye contact

Everyone joins them……The end of BB….and they lived happy ever after

KK comes on the screen to talk to us:

KK: So this was the story of Bhasker…turned into women…and the birth of Bharti…Till next time…bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
Awesome it was...
Wished BB ended on this note....
Atleast they have shown proper end to the show and cleared the misunderstanding and confusions a lot of us had...
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!! Archana it is soooo goood👏

Kash aisa hota😍

I just loved the way you solved everything adding more romantic situations.😃

I loved the way you solved OK's problem and the way ArBi united. So well written.
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful ending with us :)
The conclusion of BB has left bitterness within most fans. But it's nice to see that our forum members are so talented with their FF. Perhaps all of you guys should have written the final episode!
I enjoyed reading it, many thanks.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Love it, i wish it ended this way, then there would be no loose ends..great job!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG..I wish this happened in Thursday's episode...
Its a lovely FF....
I've said it before and I'll say it again,BB Creatives should retire and give you guys their position.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
Oh my gosh!! What a wonderful ending!!!
This is totally perfect!! If only BB had ended this way..
Every questions were answered here..
Plus you deleted Armaan's wife scene which is such a right thing to do! No loose ends, the real Omkar's wife came back.. Everybody is happy.. There's extra scenes of ArBi!!!
Thanks for this! It's really good!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Awesome it was...

Wished BB ended on this note....
Atleast they have shown proper end to the show and cleared the misunderstanding and confusions a lot of us had...
Take Care
Zoya

Thank you, I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

wow!! Archana it is soooo goood👏

Kash aisa hota😍

I just loved the way you solved everything adding more romantic situations.😃

I loved the way you solved OK's problem and the way ArBi united. So well written.
👏

Thanks Dear! I just couldn't accepts Creative's ending. So thought rather then being mad, let us write our own ending...the way we think it should end.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: fizzles

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful ending with us :)

The conclusion of BB has left bitterness within most fans. But it's nice to see that our forum members are so talented with their FF. Perhaps all of you guys should have written the final episode!
I enjoyed reading it, many thanks.

Thanks Dear, I am glad you enjoyed it. I was really so mad at them. This was the only show I used to watched beacuse of its uniqueness.....but Creative team made complete mess at the end, as if they were not interested in this show at all.
That is why I thought let me write what I wnated to see....and I will remember (and think) BB ended in this way.

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