Hi Kaninika 😊
I PM'ed you, Anyway the chapters are fine just a few mistakes and the new chapter didn't have any mistakes well at least I didn't find any.
But anyway, They were fine 😊
Thanks a lot Rin,
I have replied to your PM.
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Hi Kaninika 😊
I PM'ed you, Anyway the chapters are fine just a few mistakes and the new chapter didn't have any mistakes well at least I didn't find any.
But anyway, They were fine 😊
Originally posted by: helloaamir
hey
great job.....on both parts...hahathis part was soo serious(but necessary). the end was soo sad. for both bhaskar and payal. poor payal, since bhaskar said no to her. but honestly, i like your payal better than the one in the show rite now 😡but i dont want to go there rite now.....poor bhaskar for finding out the hurt.....i hope that he becomes bharti soon though!!!! eagerly waiting for the next part!!! great job, as usual...love, aarti
Originally posted by: divyalrl
you are doing great ,keep writing.
Part 19
Next morning:
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA", Bhaskar woke up suddenly hearing this earsplitting sound, he was shocked😲, he started screaming as well "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA".
Bhaskar could see Bharti is sitting on his bed. Both of them are bewildered😲.
Sudha entered the room. "Kya hua!!!!!!!!!!! tumlog chilla kyuon raho ho?" Then she noticed Bharti. "Bharti beta, tu kab wapas ayi?😊 Teri dost kaisi hai ab?"
Bhaskar and Bharti were still shocked. None of them answered to Sudha's question.
Sudha was so verymuch overjoyed, she said "thik hai, pehlibar tumdono eksath is ghar me ho, jaldi tyar ho jao tumdono, main bhagwanji ki puja karne ke baad aarti karungi tumdono ki." She went out of the room.
Bhaskar and Bharti were still stunned.
KK: Kya hua Bhaskar? Mera yeh wala khel tumhe pasand nahi aya?
They saw KK coming out of the bathroom wearing a bathrobe😆. Then he started laughing very loudly.
KK: Nahi Bhaskar, ab koi game nahi. yeh KBBB khatam. "Kya Bharti Banegi Bhaskar?" Ha ban gayi. Tum jit gaye Bhaskar.
He continued: Waise mujhse tumhara dukh dekha nahi gaya. main chahta tha ke tum bhi samjho kisika dil tut jana kitni buri chees hai; tum ab yeh samajhte ho Bhaskar. tumhe apne karm ki saza bhi mil gayi. You are free now.
Bhasakar: lekin, he stopped.
KK: tum yeh soch rahe ho ke main kyun tumko do individual bana dia, wo isliye Bhaskar ke tumko saza dete dete main bhul gaya tha ke koi aur bhi hai, he stopped, started smiling and said "shayad do log hai😉" jinke dil main khud tor raha tha.
He continued: aur ek karan hai Bhaskar, itne din itna kuchh hua tumhari zindagi mein ke tumhare andar ek admi aur ek aurat dono ki qualities a gayi😆😆. Ab tum na Bhaskar banke khush rahe sakte ho na Bharti banke, aur main tumhe aur saza nahi dena chahta.
Bhaskar and Bharti was so happy😛😛, they cannot believe their ears😃.
KK: So alvida Bhaskar, khush raho, is dunya mein tumhare jaese bohut sare log hai jiske saath mujhe KBBB khelna hai
(for them the name will be different, for example Gyan ke liye KGBG-fullform-Kya Gayatri Banegi Gyan?🤣).
KK: Ha, main bolna bhul gaya tha. Geeta ne tumhare liye prarthna kii thi, wo sachmuch bohut achchi larki hai, ekbar tum zaroor usse jake milna.
Bhaskar and Bharti were static. They really didn't know what to say.
KK crossed his hands and said "MDK?"
Bhaskar and Bharti were perplexed😲.
KK: I mean mujhse dosti karoge?
Three of them started smiling and then they shook hands. KK vanished (as expected)😆.
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Bhaskar and Bharti were ready. They did't want to waste a single second. They wanted to meet somebody as early as possible.
But that was not possible😔. Sudha called them for the puja, they had to do aarti together (you know what it is; it is very common in saasbahu serials). They were getting totally impatient (I can't describe their expressions; I know you can imagine it yourself)😭.
Bhaskar: Ma, bauji, humdono ko ek bohut important kaam ke liye office jana hai, please hum e jane dijiye, jitni jaldi ho sake hum wapas a jayenge.
Finally after half an hour they could come out of their house.
By this time Payal had left for the radio station. They hurriedly got into the car, and Bhaskar started driving. (yes, there was a little fight about who will be driving but they had to stop because they were getting late.😆😆)
Bharti: pehle office chalte hai
Bhaskar: nahi, pehle radiostation chalte hai
Bharti: nahi, pehle office
Bhaskar: nahi, pehle radiostation
They started fighting again😆😆. Ultimately Bhaskar said: tum bhul rahi ho Bharti, Payal nahi hoti to hum yeh ajeeb zindagi jee nahi pate.
Bharti understood. Ok, chalo radio station chalte hai.
After 20 minutes, in radio station, in Payal's cabin. Bharti entered.
Payal: Bhaskar, tum Bharti ban gaye!!! (gayi or gaye? friends this time I am really confused which word I will write😉) She was happy.
She knew that Bhaskar ki khushi Bharti ban ne mein hi hai.
Bhaskar entered the room. Payal was " ", (please fill in the blank for me😆, Rin suggested thundersrucked, Zoya suggested perplexed😆). Bharti was smiling.
Bharti: Payal, KK ne mujhe do individual bana di, main Bharti hun aur yeh Bhaskar.
Bhaskar: ab apna mu bandh kar Payal, machchar ghush jaega😆. He was smiling as well.
Bhaskar sat down on his knees and said "MSK Payal, mujhse shaadi karogi?"
Payal was surprised. She said "Bhaskar, tum''''''''"
Bhaskar started laughing, "Payal mujhe nahi pata tha ke yeh MSK wala formula tujh par bhi kaam karta hai."
Payal was confused😕.
Bhaskar: I am sorry Payal, tu janti hai main tujhse pyar nahi karta, abhi to meri dusri life shuru hui hai, pehle mujhe girlfriend banane ki ek half century karni paregi😆, last time nahi kar paye. Kya pata pyar pyar ke is khel mein mujhe kab tujjhse hi pyar ho jae🤗.
Then both of them started smiling. Payal was very happy, her Bhaskar is back, and this time it is not KK's game😛.
Bharti: Guys, agar tum dono ki baaten khatam ho jaye, to main ja sakti hun
Bhaskar: tumhe kaun rokke rakha hai?
Bharti: chabi, mujhe gari ki chabi chahiye.🤣
Bhaskar gave her the keys.
Payal: Bharti, tu agar aisa mu banake jaegi to sabkuchh garbar ho jaega
Bharti: kya karoo Payal main bohut tention mein hun
Bhaskar and Payal said together "tention mat le yaar aur jaldi ja", then suddenly they realized that they said exactly the same sentence together. They started smiling and looking at each other.😛
End of Part 19
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Part 20
Bharti came out of the lift. She literally ran towards Armaan's cabin.
Everybody in the reception and in the foir was stunned😲😲😲. Actually what happened is that Bharti forgot to change her dress. She was wearing saari, mangal sutra, and she forgot to remove the sindoor as well.
She hurriedly entered Armaan's cabin and fell in Armaan's arms😆😆😆.
Armaan was " "(fill in the blank, Rin suggested "startled", Zoya suggested "perplexed"😆). Bharti got up.
Armaan: Bhaskar tum phirse Bharti ban gaye, phirse kuchh galat kia kya?--------------No he wanted to tell this but he became so "lattoo😆" to see Bharti in Saree, she was looking so beautifull, that he could only say "Bhaskar, tum----"
Bharti: dekho Armaan main tumse larai nahi karna chahti, main sirf yeh bolna chahti hun ke main abhi Bhaskar nahi hun. KK ne mujhe Bharti bana di, is liye ki KK ko pata chal gaya tha ke main tumse pyar karti hun (she was not shy, she was in a mood of fighting).
Armaan: Bhaskar, tum aur mujhse pyar, yeh kuchh ajeeb nahi hai kya? Tum Sunny ke paas kyuon nahi jate (he was trying to hide his smile😆).
Bharti: Main Bharti hun, aur main kisi aur ko kyun pyar karungi, maine kaha na "I love you", "I love you", "I love you"😆.
Armaan: Ha, lekin (still hiding his smile)
Bharti: aur tum bhi kuchh mat kehna, tum usdin keh rahe the na ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho, abhi kuchh garbar kii--then you follow the consequences😆.
Armaan put his finger on his mouth, and started smiling "nahi, main kuchh nahi kahunga"
Suddenly Bharti understood that what she was telling to Armaan. She gave a bashful smile😳☺️.
Armaan: ab kuchh bolu? Bharti was still smiling.
Armaan: I love you Bharti, kya tum meri bahon mein aogi?
Bharti: Kya?😲😲😲
Then she started smiling again. She came near to Armaan and they hugged each other. (this time it is not a day dreaming of Armaan, it is true).
Everyone in the office was outside the glass door, they were totally "perplexed".
Sunny: Bharti thanks, tumne mere Armaan ka dil nahi toda🤣🤣
Gyan and Vinita: Bharti bhi a gayi, ab Bhaskar aur Bharti dono milke hamari band bajaegi.
Amarjeet: Main "bewildered" (his WOD) hun bhai, koi mujhe batayega in dono ki shaadi kab hui?😲
🤣
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray
@Jassie,
Thanks a lot Jassie.
I am very very happy that you liked it.
It will be really fun if the same thing happens in BB as well.
Yes I will start the new FF within a few days.
You are welcome dear, write BB FFs, we all will be very happy to read them.
Yes, Bharti is really cute and the naughty Armaan is back again😃
Thanks again
Kaninika