KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Rin03

Hi Kaninika 😊

I PM'ed you, Anyway the chapters are fine just a few mistakes and the new chapter didn't have any mistakes well at least I didn't find any.

But anyway, They were fine 😊



Thanks a lot Rin,
I have replied to your PM.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
great job.....on both parts...haha
this part was soo serious(but necessary). the end was soo sad. for both bhaskar and payal. poor payal, since bhaskar said no to her. but honestly, i like your payal better than the one in the show rite now 😡
but i dont want to go there rite now.....
poor bhaskar for finding out the hurt.....i hope that he becomes bharti soon though!!!! eagerly waiting for the next part!!! great job, as usual...
love, aarti
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Posted: 15 years ago
you are doing great ,keep writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: helloaamir

hey

great job.....on both parts...haha
this part was soo serious(but necessary). the end was soo sad. for both bhaskar and payal. poor payal, since bhaskar said no to her. but honestly, i like your payal better than the one in the show rite now 😡
but i dont want to go there rite now.....
poor bhaskar for finding out the hurt.....i hope that he becomes bharti soon though!!!! eagerly waiting for the next part!!! great job, as usual...
love, aarti



Thanks a lot Aarti,
I am glad that you liked it.
Thanks for commenting dear.
Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: divyalrl

you are doing great ,keep writing.



Thanks Divya

I am really 😃 that you liked it

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 19


Next morning:


"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA", Bhaskar woke up suddenly hearing this earsplitting sound, he was shocked😲, he started screaming as well "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA".


Bhaskar could see Bharti is sitting on his bed. Both of them are bewildered😲.


Sudha entered the room. "Kya hua!!!!!!!!!!! tumlog chilla kyuon raho ho?" Then she noticed Bharti. "Bharti beta, tu kab wapas ayi?😊 Teri dost kaisi hai ab?"


Bhaskar and Bharti were still shocked. None of them answered to Sudha's question.


Sudha was so verymuch overjoyed, she said "thik hai, pehlibar tumdono eksath is ghar me ho, jaldi tyar ho jao tumdono, main bhagwanji ki puja karne ke baad aarti karungi tumdono ki." She went out of the room.


Bhaskar and Bharti were still stunned.


KK: Kya hua Bhaskar? Mera yeh wala khel tumhe pasand nahi aya?


They saw KK coming out of the bathroom wearing a bathrobe😆. Then he started laughing very loudly.


KK: Nahi Bhaskar, ab koi game nahi. yeh KBBB khatam. "Kya Bharti Banegi Bhaskar?" Ha ban gayi. Tum jit gaye Bhaskar.


He continued: Waise mujhse tumhara dukh dekha nahi gaya. main chahta tha ke tum bhi samjho kisika dil tut jana kitni buri chees hai; tum ab yeh samajhte ho Bhaskar. tumhe apne karm ki saza bhi mil gayi. You are free now.


Bhasakar: lekin, he stopped.


KK: tum yeh soch rahe ho ke main kyun tumko do individual bana dia, wo isliye Bhaskar ke tumko saza dete dete main bhul gaya tha ke koi aur bhi hai, he stopped, started smiling and said "shayad do log hai😉" jinke dil main khud tor raha tha.


He continued: aur ek karan hai Bhaskar, itne din itna kuchh hua tumhari zindagi mein ke tumhare andar ek admi aur ek aurat dono ki qualities a gayi😆😆. Ab tum na Bhaskar banke khush rahe sakte ho na Bharti banke, aur main tumhe aur saza nahi dena chahta.


Bhaskar and Bharti was so happy😛😛, they cannot believe their ears😃.


KK: So alvida Bhaskar, khush raho, is dunya mein tumhare jaese bohut sare log hai jiske saath mujhe KBBB khelna hai


(for them the name will be different, for example Gyan ke liye KGBG-fullform-Kya Gayatri Banegi Gyan?🤣).


KK: Ha, main bolna bhul gaya tha. Geeta ne tumhare liye prarthna kii thi, wo sachmuch bohut achchi larki hai, ekbar tum zaroor usse jake milna.


Bhaskar and Bharti were static. They really didn't know what to say.


KK crossed his hands and said "MDK?"


Bhaskar and Bharti were perplexed😲.


KK: I mean mujhse dosti karoge?


Three of them started smiling and then they shook hands. KK vanished (as expected)😆.


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Bhaskar and Bharti were ready. They did't want to waste a single second. They wanted to meet somebody as early as possible.


But that was not possible😔. Sudha called them for the puja, they had to do aarti together (you know what it is; it is very common in saasbahu serials). They were getting totally impatient (I can't describe their expressions; I know you can imagine it yourself)😭.


Bhaskar: Ma, bauji, humdono ko ek bohut important kaam ke liye office jana hai, please hum e jane dijiye, jitni jaldi ho sake hum wapas a jayenge.


Finally after half an hour they could come out of their house.


By this time Payal had left for the radio station. They hurriedly got into the car, and Bhaskar started driving. (yes, there was a little fight about who will be driving but they had to stop because they were getting late.😆😆)


Bharti: pehle office chalte hai


Bhaskar: nahi, pehle radiostation chalte hai


Bharti: nahi, pehle office


Bhaskar: nahi, pehle radiostation


They started fighting again😆😆. Ultimately Bhaskar said: tum bhul rahi ho Bharti, Payal nahi hoti to hum yeh ajeeb zindagi jee nahi pate.


Bharti understood. Ok, chalo radio station chalte hai.


After 20 minutes, in radio station, in Payal's cabin. Bharti entered.


Payal: Bhaskar, tum Bharti ban gaye!!! (gayi or gaye? friends this time I am really confused which word I will write😉) She was happy.


She knew that Bhaskar ki khushi Bharti ban ne mein hi hai.


Bhaskar entered the room. Payal was " ", (please fill in the blank for me😆, Rin suggested thundersrucked, Zoya suggested perplexed😆). Bharti was smiling.


Bharti: Payal, KK ne mujhe do individual bana di, main Bharti hun aur yeh Bhaskar.


Bhaskar: ab apna mu bandh kar Payal, machchar ghush jaega😆. He was smiling as well.


Bhaskar sat down on his knees and said "MSK Payal, mujhse shaadi karogi?"


Payal was surprised. She said "Bhaskar, tum''''''''"


Bhaskar started laughing, "Payal mujhe nahi pata tha ke yeh MSK wala formula tujh par bhi kaam karta hai."


Payal was confused😕.


Bhaskar: I am sorry Payal, tu janti hai main tujhse pyar nahi karta, abhi to meri dusri life shuru hui hai, pehle mujhe girlfriend banane ki ek half century karni paregi😆, last time nahi kar paye. Kya pata pyar pyar ke is khel mein mujhe kab tujjhse hi pyar ho jae🤗.


Then both of them started smiling. Payal was very happy, her Bhaskar is back, and this time it is not KK's game😛.


Bharti: Guys, agar tum dono ki baaten khatam ho jaye, to main ja sakti hun


Bhaskar: tumhe kaun rokke rakha hai?


Bharti: chabi, mujhe gari ki chabi chahiye.🤣


Bhaskar gave her the keys.


Payal: Bharti, tu agar aisa mu banake jaegi to sabkuchh garbar ho jaega


Bharti: kya karoo Payal main bohut tention mein hun


Bhaskar and Payal said together "tention mat le yaar aur jaldi ja", then suddenly they realized that they said exactly the same sentence together. They started smiling and looking at each other.😛


End of Part 19

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Part 20


Bharti came out of the lift. She literally ran towards Armaan's cabin.


Everybody in the reception and in the foir was stunned😲😲😲. Actually what happened is that Bharti forgot to change her dress. She was wearing saari, mangal sutra, and she forgot to remove the sindoor as well.


She hurriedly entered Armaan's cabin and fell in Armaan's arms😆😆😆.


Armaan was " "(fill in the blank, Rin suggested "startled", Zoya suggested "perplexed"😆). Bharti got up.


Armaan: Bhaskar tum phirse Bharti ban gaye, phirse kuchh galat kia kya?--------------No he wanted to tell this but he became so "lattoo😆" to see Bharti in Saree, she was looking so beautifull, that he could only say "Bhaskar, tum----"


Bharti: dekho Armaan main tumse larai nahi karna chahti, main sirf yeh bolna chahti hun ke main abhi Bhaskar nahi hun. KK ne mujhe Bharti bana di, is liye ki KK ko pata chal gaya tha ke main tumse pyar karti hun (she was not shy, she was in a mood of fighting).


Armaan: Bhaskar, tum aur mujhse pyar, yeh kuchh ajeeb nahi hai kya? Tum Sunny ke paas kyuon nahi jate (he was trying to hide his smile😆).


Bharti: Main Bharti hun, aur main kisi aur ko kyun pyar karungi, maine kaha na "I love you", "I love you", "I love you"😆.


Armaan: Ha, lekin (still hiding his smile)


Bharti: aur tum bhi kuchh mat kehna, tum usdin keh rahe the na ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho, abhi kuchh garbar kii--then you follow the consequences😆.


Armaan put his finger on his mouth, and started smiling "nahi, main kuchh nahi kahunga"


Suddenly Bharti understood that what she was telling to Armaan. She gave a bashful smile😳☺️.


Armaan: ab kuchh bolu? Bharti was still smiling.


Armaan: I love you Bharti, kya tum meri bahon mein aogi?


Bharti: Kya?😲😲😲


Then she started smiling again. She came near to Armaan and they hugged each other. (this time it is not a day dreaming of Armaan, it is true).


Everyone in the office was outside the glass door, they were totally "perplexed".


Sunny: Bharti thanks, tumne mere Armaan ka dil nahi toda🤣🤣


Gyan and Vinita: Bharti bhi a gayi, ab Bhaskar aur Bharti dono milke hamari band bajaegi.


Amarjeet: Main "bewildered" (his WOD) hun bhai, koi mujhe batayega in dono ki shaadi kab hui?😲


🤣


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



I have finished writing this. I am so happy.

There are many questions that are remaining.

1. who will be the next chief editor- Bhaskar or Bharti?😕

2. Kaun Gyan Vinita Raichura aur Anu ki zada band bajaegi? Bhaskar or Bharti?😕

3. What will BB tell Sudha and Laxminarayan? I think kuchh bahana zarror bana lenge (they are BB na?), sach to zaroor nahi batayenge, dil tut jaega un dono ki.

4. What will Jia do?🤗

5. what about Anu-Nanhe, Sunny-Nanhe, Sonali-Pushpak,Gyan-Vinita lovestory?☺️☺️

And Finally what about Bhaskar Payal lovestory?😛

I leave these questions to you guys

Thanks a lot to everyone who loved my story.

A special thanks to Rin, she helped me in correcting some gramatical mistakes as well as by giving crucial comments.

And Shabnam, Nadz and Zoya, I will start writing the new FF very soon.

Take care Kaninika



Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Kaninika...this is an excellent ending yaar...I truly lurve your work!!!!!!And I assume you will be starting on ur new FF on BB characters soon????
I wish you all the verie best darlin......And I'm verie eager to read your work....Do get started......Seeing your work and the rest, even I feel liek writing a BB fan fic.....let me think abt it!!!!
P.S:Btw i just lurved the way Bharti fell into Armaan's arms and how she kept talking and hushed Armaan...it was so typical fo bharti and she's super cute that way!!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago

@Jassie,

Thanks a lot Jassie.
I am very very happy that you liked it.
It will be really fun if the same thing happens in BB as well.
Yes I will start the new FF within a few days.
You are welcome dear, write BB FFs, we all will be very happy to read them.
Yes, Bharti is really cute and the naughty Armaan is back again😃

Thanks again
Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray


@Jassie,

Thanks a lot Jassie.
I am very very happy that you liked it.
It will be really fun if the same thing happens in BB as well.
Yes I will start the new FF within a few days.
You are welcome dear, write BB FFs, we all will be very happy to read them.
Yes, Bharti is really cute and the naughty Armaan is back again😃

Thanks again
Kaninika

Kaninika.....
Ohhh how I just wish we can see such beautiful,mischievious moments between Bharti and Armaan..seriously yaar.....wow that's super awesome....Awww thanks dear..let me think abt it and let you know,k??Yay....naughty Armaan is back..that's gonna be super cool...Can't wait!!!!
I'll think of FF for BB and perhaps inform you guyz asap.....Thanks for the encouragement dear!!And all the verie best for ur new FF!!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kaninika ...this is such a beautiful ending ...


I luved it so much ...so no heartbreaks 4 anybody ...
The Arbi scene waz so funny & romantic ..the fall & catch one(really missing those scenes in the original BB)..
but u could hav written sum Payal & Bhaskar scenes...when they were alone ...
but its fine this way also ...may b u can continue the P/B story in ur new FF..

All the best 4 ur new FF

I know its gonna b as amazing as this ..
😉😉


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