Na jaane kha se aayi hai...praja ff (updated on pg 3)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ye surf prologue hain humare Goldie banne ki khushi me baaki story hum baade me post krenge
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She was tired because of the run , and why not she was running for her honor from last 1 hour in her engagement lehenga with her back pack .
A 16 year old girl named ajabde was running away from her own father and step mom who has fixed her engagement to a double aged man for money .
She didn't notice when she entered the forest path but she can't stop she has to make a run to not get shot from her fathers gunde .
Ajabde - I woundnt let you sell me father ...I wouldn't , but where is the hell road gone.
Parvat das - hands up ...now ajabde there is no path for you to go ...kindly come with me your father .
Ajabde - no , I will not .
She starts running again at top of fee speed only to meet the opening of a small den or gufah .
But she doesn't care , she entered the den and smiled a relieved one .
But her smile soon ended seeing some soldiers over there who too had noticed her and now giving her a lust full smile .
Soldier - what are you doing here , lady . heoved close to her giving her goose bumps but before he could let a hand on her an arrow came and sheered the soldiers throat
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Tell me how was this ,...
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Smsm18 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds very interesting aditi
update soon😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prologue...😳
plz write more ..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushma_marawi

sounds very interesting aditi

update soon😛


Thanks sush...
Will update after my current one will pack bag 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi04

interesting prologue...😳

plz write more ..😃


Thanks rashi
Will write more... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Interesting start!👏Waiting for the story to unfold.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start!!! Looks interesting!
Start it soon ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi_angel


Thanks sush...
Will update after my current one will pack bag 😆


😆 ok😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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looks good
do continue
update soon aditi the goldie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awesome. Cant wait

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