Time of my Life: OutTake of Mistakes and Love Complete

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Hello

How is everyone? So I finally got a small break and I decided to meet you guys- I was missing you all so much (Plus the internet finally graced me with his presence too😛) Accha so everyone read my Pari's new SS that she posted on Ajabde's innocence being proved. CVs ne toh diya nahi but my darling Pari did so read, review and leave her tons of love

Chalo kaam ki baat hui ab thode maze maare jaayein - remeber our boxing champ Ajabde from Mistakes nad Love. So this OS is actually a Future out-take from the story. So I hope everyone will enjoy it and I will try my best to come and meet you again but it depends on Internet baba's grace and my schedule too


Chalo till then have a nice week, enjoy MP and the person who has taken the hot seat for doing the Ratings - All the very best!!!


Loads of Love

Garima




Time of My life

Pratap was a desperate man looking for desperate ways of running out of the office. All his friends looked at him while trying to control their laughter but Akbar's words had them all rolling on the floor

Akbar: Common Pratap it's just a car and I'm sure Ajabde Bhabisa would drive it carefully

Pratap glared at him like he had lasers in his eyes: That is not just some car- that's Chetak

Akbar: wait you call your car Chetak; like Bajaj Chetak the scooter?

Hakim shook his head when Pratap pounced on Akbar who stepped back and then they both fell on the couch together- Akbar beneath Pratap holding his back trying to save him while the others enjoyed the view

Som: He is right Baujiraj. I'm sure Bhabisa would drive Chetak safely

Chakri: Where has she taken Chetak to?

Veeni: Some market

Maan: then there will be a scratch definitely

Pratap: What??? He shot up straight

Hakim: he is right you know - the markets have really narrow lanes and people keep jumping on the road, the zip driving auto rickshaws

Som: Don't forget our lovely cows after all the roads are there living rooms you know

Pratap had enough and he stood pacing when the cell rang- he glared at his friends who were putting bets on the amount of damage that will be done to Chetak

Pratap picked up his cell: Yeah...wait what??? You did what!!!!

And then like a rocket that is just released he ran out of the cabin with his friends running after him.

Pratap drove like a maniac while his friends followed him behind and when he stopped the car- the destination had everyone worried

Pratap ran in with Akbar, Hakim and the others right behind him and the scene there was baffling

Sitting comfortably inside one of the cellars was Ajabde with Amar who seemed to be having the time of his life as everyone was making him laugh.

A constable approached Pratap

Constable: Is she your wife?

Pratap nodded his head and then the constable went back to the desk to complete some papers

Hakim: Bhabisa!!!

Ajabde looked at them and gave a big smile: I got arrested!!!!

Akbar: What did you do?

Ajabde: I punched a guy

Pratap stared at his wife waiting for her to complete and then he looked at the constable

Constable: Your wife punched a guy -your wife punched a guy - a guy who happens to be a police officer- your wife punched a guy who happens to be a police officer who at the time was on active duty

Everyone looked back at the person sitting inside the cellar

Pratap: What do I need to do to get her out of there?

Constable: All the papers are ready-just sign and pay the bail amount and please take your wife out of here

Ajabde was released and then it seemed like a Bidaai was taking place- all the in-mates were crying

A totally big sized in-mate crying like a baby- Take care now Ajabde and Amar take care of your Maasa. Ajabde if you ever need any help don't hesitate to call us

Ajabde sniffling I won't

all the guys looked at Pratap: Take care of our Ajabde here. We will get released hopefully in 6months and then

Ajabde: You are coming for a home cooked meal and Amar will love to play with you too. Right Amar and he nodded the poor child also had tears in his eyes seeing the atmosphere

Suddenly a cop entered holding ice over his face and saw Ajabde

Cop: What is she doing outside? She has been arrested. Throw her in the cellar now

His colleague: Calm down now Jhalim Singh her bail has been paid. She;s free to go

JS: Jhalim Singh naam hai humaara and sar utha ke kahen to iska bail nahi ho sakta

Ajabde: Hello Jhalim Singh meri bail ho gayi aur zyaada chap chap mat karo. Bataa rahen hain hum

Pratap and the gang were looking at the two like a table tennis match was on

Ajabde: You just wait aane do Mamasa ko and then I'll tell you what happens when you mess with me

JS: I'm not scared of your Mamasa

Rawatji: You are not scared of whom Jhalim Singh

JS: Sir (salute) nothing sir I was just telling this lady here

Ajabde: Mamasa we were waiting for you only

JS: Ma..ma...sa?

Rawatji: Meet my niece everyone and look you brought Amar with you too. So who's going to tell me what happened this time

Amar: ME!!!

Amar: Chote nanasa we were standing at the corner drinking juice ki tabhi wahan bad people stopped an old man who was moving his trolley filled with goods and troubled him. He (JS) did nothing and sat under the shade drinking nimbu paani. Mumma decided to interfere and told them to stop otherwise she would call the cops

One goon picked up a bucket and broke it scaring Maa sa with the piece but she grabbed his hand and twisted it like this (he is using gestures) and then one slap on his face. Others came but she glared at them and made them apologise to the baba who gave me a toy car

Rawatji: The others didn't do anything

Amar: No Maasa had beaten the leader black and blue na toh baaki sab darr gaye

Rawatji shook hie head while Akbar had said

Akbar: Bhabhi jaan you are my hero

Amar: My too

Rawatji smiled: Jhalim Singh go and put more ice on that eye. Amar beta why did Maa sa punch him?

Amar: She didn't punch him I did

Ajabde held her smile while Pratap looked at his 4year old

Pratap: Amar

Amar: He was taking my car away from me na

Rawatji: You boys sure love your cars. Chalo go home and Ajabde beta come home to meet me next time

Ajabde: will do

They all leave the station - Pratap runs to Chetak nad starts inspecting every nook and corner giving a sigh of relief seeing no scratch marks or dents. Pratap along with Ajabde and Amar leave for their home on the way Amar falls asleep in the backseat making Ajabde smile at him

Pratap: Waise how come Amar was able to punch that guys eye so black

Ajabde: Because I was holding his fist in my hand and he fell into the open drain nearby

Pratap laughed at the antics his wife came up with. There was not a single day he had gone without it and didn't want to either after all she made his life far more interesting

Late that night when Amar was sleeping in his car bed at home Pratap found his wife reading a novel like she always did. He snuggled up to her and said

Thank you for everything

Ajabde: Huh

Pratap: I was leading a very boring life before you came and filled it up with colours and craziness and now I cannot fathom to live without this craziness Ajabde. You are making me enjoy life and every moment is enjoyable with you so Thank you

Ajabde smiled and gave him a peck on his cheeks before going back to her book. She suddenly looked at her husband and said

You need to talk to Amar's teacher and get his place changed

Pratap: why? Surprised at the direction the talk was heading for

Ajabde: Because that useless teacher is making my son sit near that Mehrunisa and she's bad news I tell you. She's going to trouble my Amar

Pratap: Ajabde you do realise that they are in kinder garden

Ajabde: They start young baba even me after all my first punch was given when I was only 5 or 6

Pratap: At 5 you punched a guy

Ajabde: Haan he was 10years old and told me I couldn't play with the boys so I punched him. In fact I'm thinking of enrolling Amar in boxing classes too

Pratap grabbed her by the waist moving on top: No thank you one Mohammed Ali is enough for me to handle and I'm sure Amar will do fine against Mehrunissa. He's my son

Ajabde: That he is

He gave a kiss on her forehead switching off the lights as he thanked his wife the entire night for giving him the Time of his life

THE END

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for posting such a lovely os !! 😛
Keep posting more and more 😉
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such an amazing os
loved it
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Absolutely loved it 😆😆😆 awww Amar is a mini ajab here👏👏👏
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Waah! Your mind works a bit too creatively!!! I envy you! wherever so you get these ideas from!
It was super cute and super funny and a very very enjoyable OS to read!
It has a lot of humour which brought a smile on my face (the large wala smile)
Police constable ko box!!
Ajabde aur Amar dono ki Jai!
Pratap and his craze for Chetak!!!! 🤣
Try and write one more part na! It can be Amar's boxing class 😆
I absolutely loved it!! ❤️
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Oh my dear di!🤗🤗Yayy you are back!😃
And the story OMG! Matlab amar is carbon copy of our ajabde.😳😆
Bechare constable ka hi bura haal ho gaya!🤣
As natasha said pehle sword fighting class by pratap and ab aap ek boxing class bhi laga hi do by ajab.😳😉😛Awesome!👏⭐️
PS-There is no one on the hot seat yet!😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First things first... Garima Janna thank you for the compliments 🤗 and leaving me lots of love... but i am still waiting for your comment on the second part of my story😭


Second the OS 🤣 i can't stop laughing... which is bad as i have sore throat and i need to but you are awesome


Chetak 🤣 🤣 and Pratap 🤣

and the mamasa joke ... jalim singh ki to tote ud rahe honge... and loved how Rawatji said that come home to meet me next time 🤣

i always felt that mama-bhanji rishta was never fully developed in the serial

but loved the little AS as well 🤣


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Fantastic OS Garima😃
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Beautiful OS 👏 or hamari ajab to gajab hai 😃
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it was hard for me to control my laugh and read ...
thnks for such a lovely os...😃😃

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