Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Nandini6

Nice update

Subho dating chakri😆well thats very interesting😊


Hehe 😆 yes!! Hope you like the other updated too 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: rinall

Natasha !!🤗

Congrats on becoming a writer !👏
Oh man ~! The plot is sooo edgy and exciting !
Awesome idea to base this story om crime and investigations !👏👏
Like Pratap in this story, I too am a fan of murder mysteries, crime-detective novels !😳
Update soon !!😳


Thank you 😊 I just hope it matches everybody's expectations 😃 I'll try to update soon...maybe by tomorrow...I have class in some time so today I doubt it'll be possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Fab update!👏So bhago has entered the story!😃

Looking forward to the next update😛😉


Thanks 😊 I'll try to update as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Superb update😊 exiting plot of story😛
Update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: dsm123

Superb update😊exiting plot of story😛

Update soon😊


Thanks 😳 will try and update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Ajabde as an officer. Love it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: coderlady

Ajabde as an officer. Love it.


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Hey guys...here you go with the 3rd chapter...

CHAPTER 3

The two girls drove out of the punwar bungalow in saubhagyawati's car on the way to pizza mania..they reached and parked the car and without even looking at the menu saubhagtawati simply ordered

'A medium sized margarita, a fresh lime soda sweet and one Pepsi'

Ajabde was waiting impatiently for her to finish with an angry look on her beautiful face...

'Don't give me those scary looks! You look weird!!'

'Come on na! Quick..I need to know the people do that it's easy for me to gel with each one na! Plus I heard that the head officer is a khadoos person...

'Pratap?...no way! He looks really scary and khadoos but he is amazing...he's kind and decent and loves beating criminals and treating them how they should be...he is a total no-nonsense person but he is quite approachable...just make sure that you don't get into his bad books..though that shouldn't be a problem as you're quite regular and particular'

'What about your boyfriend?'

'Chakri?...he's the sweetest person in the world.. I mean he's so cute and funny and adorable and kind and handsome and lovely and..'

'Subho!'

'Oohh sorry...i mean he's quite nice and has a huge sense of humour...he's prataps best friend and he goes to solve all the cases with pratap whatever happens..they have an amazing friendship! He'll really help you...though I'll always be there too'

'Then there is vyeeni who is the tech savvy person and there's no computer you can find in the world which he cannot hack...along with that he's a good fighter too though he has always preferred technology related work'

'There's also maan Singh who is the junior officer and is kinda sweet though I never really talked much to him since he recently joint...he's very introvert'

'Or maybe you were too busy in your chakri to notice him'

Saubhagtawati gave a sharp glance to her and continued

'There's patta... he's a really nice guy...like helpful and all...he's a sweetheart..like a younger brother maybe...the only problem with him is that he takes a lot of impulsive steps and he ends up in trouble many a times...but apart from that he's quite good

'Then there's two more guys, som and Duda who are nice and brave and angry young men as well...and lastly there's Krishnaa the forensic expert who apparently likes Duda though Duda doesn't understand...problem with boys you see!...but all of us get really well along...like friends who will die together ,you know...so ya! that's pretty much it'

'Looks interesting! I'm getting excited and nervous...hope I get along with everyone as well'



Hope you'll liked it...I'm off to sleep now...bye...
Criticism, opinions, ideas are all welcome


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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Nice update!👏Loved how bhago described everyone😃 and especially how ajab called pratap khadoos.😆Also how ajab teased bhago.😆
Looking forward to the updates.😛
BTW,i'm first.😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Nice update nutz ohh pratap is khadoos
do update soon

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