FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sam622

nicely written keep updating is there amar and pritika story

Thanks!
Yeah Amar and Prithika are important pieces of the plot, so I had dedicated an entire chapter for them in Obscured Fate. It has their first meeting and start of their 'friendship' , a bond between cousins unknown to each other.

Originally posted by: rosal_awesome

Thanks for the pm!!

Too much suspense! Oh Nikki, my heart just cannot take this anymore 😆
That update was a mix of both fb and present, interesting technique there! 😉
Wonderful update 😳

At first I had written the chapter with only the revelation of the person killed. Then I thought why not give a glimpse of the dead person's past with Praja. So added the flashback at the last minute. Though Raj Rana Bahadur will rule many fb's in future chapters. His reason of being killed will open a nest of anacondas'.

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

True annoying siblings you can hate them or dote on them but cannot live without them...am looking forward for more Prithika-Amar scenes where she drives him crazy😆
I miss Rosal wish they did not have the leap afterall according to history Pratap was 18 when he had his first kid (withing a year of his wedding to Ajabde) but I guess they cannot show that on television- teen pregnancy and all 😛 but I enjoyed Praja getting busted by his mentor😳 as he says it could have been worse it could have been Som or Maan or Guru Raghvendra😉

Looking forward for the next update 😊

God, I miss Rosal so much. Even though after leap characters are doing awesome still Rosal magic was something else.
Anyway in my fic both Raj Rana Bahadur and Raghavendra are Pratap's mentors. RRB is the more laid back one and the latter is the stricter one. So at least getting busted by the former is much better than being caught by the latter or in case Som and Maan catch them, well they will never hear the end of it.

Woowww...!!!! U really took ur sweet time to update...hehe...!!

Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Woowww...!!!! U really took ur sweet time to update...hehe...!!

See...I knew my assumption was wrong !! But hey, have u ever mentioned Raj Rana in any of chapters before..?? 🤔

If u have, then dont really remember it !! I will have to browse it all over...

The flash back scene...it is so amazing...!! Amar... the boy is...what ? six years of age...??

and he is kept in the loop...so soon..?? Dont u think its too much for a young boy ??

But that being said, I like the way he is portrayed...he is able to handle himself well...

Prithika...The girl is incredibly cute, that I can pull her cheeks if she were real...but since its not, as a reader, i demand more tracks of her...😆 and her interactions with Amar makes it even more amazing to read...!!

Waiting for the next...:)

Well this is the first mention of Raj Rana Bahadur but he will be a common character soon as we delve into fb's of Pratap's childhood.
As for Amar, he is brought up in an environment of danger filled with political games and back-stabbing, by a man who is emotionally broken yearning for a 'dead' wife and a group of his friends whose part time job is to assassinate spies. That kind of parenting will make a child more mature. Also he is reared to be Pratap's heir so he is kept in the loop of some things to some extent. In the political game they play, being caught naive is the worst possible ending. As I have mentioned in the story, Som tells him that his Godfather died in a house fire. He didn't mention murder. So to some extent he is still protected.
Prithika one of my OC characters will play a vital role in the future. She and Amar are going to be the hidden pieces that will balance this whole game.

how come inti superb story ka thread inactive ho gaya???

Hello people!
Firstly I would like to apologise for the sudden MIA, I pulled. Actually I grounded by my mother. I fell asleep in class and when woken up called the prof something really rude (I was sleepy and nobody is coherant immediately after waking up). This fantastic piece of news fell to my mother's ears and then BOOM.
No computer for 3monthss.
Anyway I will be updating the new chapters soon. Thanks for waiting.
Niki

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hello people!
Firstly I would like to apologise for the sudden MIA, I pulled. Actually I grounded by my mother. I fell asleep in class and when woken up called the prof something really rude (I was sleepy and nobody is coherant immediately after waking up). This fantastic piece of news fell to my mother's ears and then BOOM.
No computer for 3monthss.
Anyway I will be updating the new chapters soon. Thanks for waiting.
Niki

Hey Niki

I understand - mommies give you the worst punishments ever but am glad that you are back
Waise which subject did you fall asleep in?
Totally psyched for the next updates

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Hey Niki

I understand - mommies give you the worst punishments ever but am glad that you are back
Waise which subject did you fall asleep in?
Totally psyched for the next updates

History of English Literature.
I love English. My fav subject but this class is agonising.

Nikki ...dear...now that your punishment is over waiting for the next update🤗