FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 15

Originally posted by: poeple1234

Hi Niki di! sorry for commenting so late.. so Pratap had been waiting all these years for revenge waiting for his day to come... Phool is not as immature and innocent asa she seemed...I think I know the lawyer who she is talking about... it is Veni, is it... I'm just guessing... Pari di seems like and imp part in the story. There's another thing... you had mentioned about about Ajabde's sister Ratan... Sagar had gone to meet her... you haven't mentioned a word about her since and I am very much intrigued by her presence in the story... please elaborate her part a bit too... eagerly waiting for the family reunion to happen...😃

Hi dear. Thanks for the review.

Actually from now on most of the story will advance from Amar and Phool's pov. Because they r the two who r completely unknown both to the players and the played. They have their own agenda and both of them will meet each other soon in the Suryavanshi Mansion.
Ratan, her story is an integral one, a puzzle piece that would lead to Ajabde. Let's see if Phool finds out first or Amar!
As for family Reunion, u r gonna love it. I had been waiting for this since I started the second thread.

Originally posted by: PastaVasta

I am just going to say one thing. Whenever you are going to publish a book, do inform me about it because I'm in love with your fic. To be honest, I've been a silent reader of both; Obscured Fate and Treacherous fate for quite a long time. I've re-read these two fics which I usually don't do with fanfics. But girl, you've got a flair, the storyline is in transition and the characters penned down beautifully, your friends are right,you are amazing and your plots are way more amazing :)

Thanks for providing us readers an intriguing story.

P.S~ Update! Please. ^__^

P.P.S~ Would you mind PM-ing me the updates of this story. Thank you.

Thanks a lot. Its the reviews of you all that motivates me to write.
My characters are ever evolving and all are grey cuz I believe that no one is perfectly good or bad. And humans behaviour, always continues changing.
The plot, uff it is a convoluted thing that gives me a headache sometimes but I actually love it very much.
And yes I will be updating soon. I will PM u the update too.

Hey nice story. Lots of suspenses.. Please PM me next update onwards

So, where is our star writer these days???
Even I have vanished, lol!
I just wanted to say that I really miss this story...very much
I don't know where you are, I have no idea what is keeping you away, I only know that I miss you and your art...
Do give IF your darshan as soon as possible!
People miss you here..
-Aru :)

please update the next part and try to be more precise

please please please update the rest of the ff. please please

I just found this story and I'm already hooked...I really hope you do keep updating!!! Also please add me to the PM list if/when you continue