FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Awesome

Thanks a bunch!

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Niki Niki Niki your updates each and everyone of them is simply astounding. .the way you merge reality with history in this fictional plot is simply superb

So Amar now knows about his mother and Sajja Bai makes her entry and chokes on hearing Pratap's name I wonder if she will say nice things about him to Prithika and will Amar tell his father about his cousin?

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Amar now knows a part of the incident. It will be up to him to find the whole truth and the readers too will accompany him in his endeavour.
As for Sajjabai, what do u think she should do? Any predictions u want to make?
Do tell. I am quite flexible on her character.

Originally posted by: poeple1234

Hi Niki di! Great update di.. Amar's world has shattered to know about his mother...

I have a doubt... I thought Pratap did not know who got Ajab killed. You had mentioned in the previous thread about Sagar... the lines were " It had simply seemed to have made him more determined to reach to the root of the incident, something they had desperately tried and succeeded somewhat to cover up. He shuddered to imagine what would happen when he would come to know the whole truth." So how does Pratap know now or were you referring to something more big?

I re-read your previous post... you had mentioned Lorenzo di Medici... wasn't he the patron of Michelangelo?... I love things like this... have you read Dan Brown's Inferno? I had read about him in it.

Well done 👏

I was wondering who will catch this gilch. Won't speak much of it cuz all will clear up soon. Just remember one thing, there r many fellows each having a part of the puzzle. Only Amar will piece it together and the readers will come to know through him.
As for Dan Brown, he is my second fav author after George R.R. Martin. I have read all the six books and own copies of Inferno, DaVinci Code, Digital Fortress, Lost Symbol, Angels and Demons. I am currently on a hunt for Deception Point.
As for Medici, I was quite surprised his name came up in my research for Pratap's ancestors. Solid Gold 😉

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Amar now knows a part of the incident. It will be up to him to find the whole truth and the readers too will accompany him in his endeavour.
As for Sajjabai, what do u think she should do? Any predictions u want to make?
Do tell. I am quite flexible on her character.

Well as you showed in thread 1 that all mothers loved Pratap and praised him so Sajja could begin by praising him and remembering the good old times but even she got affected by the incident after all her son was involved so you could show that she does not know the entire truth and is prejudiced like US and scold Prithika for even asking about him

Nikki superb crisp short update. ..congratulations on your admission dear ...any chance of ajab being alive

Awesome update! Please do update soon
Eagerly waiting for the next

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Well as you showed in thread 1 that all mothers loved Pratap and praised him so Sajja could begin by praising him and remembering the good old times but even she got affected by the incident after all her son was involved so you could show that she does not know the entire truth and is prejudiced like US and scold Prithika for even asking about him

Thanks for ur idea. Let me see how it clicks! 😛

Originally posted by: jyotic74

Nikki superb crisp short update. ..congratulations on your admission dear ...any chance of ajab being alive

Why thanks a lot for commenting on my superb crisp short update 😆

And my dear read the prequel a bit. Ajab Baijilal remember?

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Awesome update! Please do update soon
Eagerly waiting for the next

Will do. Thanks for commenting.

You Niki!
You are so...*huffs*
Honestly, Unbelievable is the word for you!
Yaar, he kya Hota hai!!
Matlab, I don't even know how to express myself.
I know I rarely comment or even leave a single word for praise or something, par yaar, this is...I don't know.
Simply, this is one story jiska update I never leave... (Gosh, just had an idea, why don't you publish this tale on Wattpad?)
And I have some questions and some rushes of emotions after every update, but ofcourse, if I give my time to commenting, I might just stay away from all of my books, which ofcourse is not healthy for a science student.
Anyway...
Now, as far as I can remember, there was this Phool update that I know...
It reminded me of Highway, exactly the same situation.
But, who exactly is/was that guy? Have we read about him before? He could be some...I have wild guesses...
And you Niki, you are studying English, yet you have so much knowledge about such syndromes and stuff...how????
Then, Amar Singh...Songara Suryavanshi...ahem ahem...
He's missing Prithika (who will drink the dictionary from a straw while eating milky bars) the 'itch' and then he is curious about his family but he doesn't know about Prithika's side and is thinking of sneaking out and his innocence at stake, he finds out about his Suryavanshi family (oh I wanted to tell you something. The very less known fact about the surname of Mewari Rajputs. They are Sisodia. However, since the story has sunk in so well with Suryavanshi, it would be better the same way!) and he gets to know about the war with the Suryavanshi family (gosh I love the description of the study) and then gets to know that he himself is a Suryavanshi. Woahhh!!! Girl you!!!
The engraving of Pratap's name...my eyes were wide.
And after this broken comment, coming to Ajabdeh.
The detective work I wanted to do in the previous season I believe, when we saw Raj Rana Bahadur in the kitchen romance scene. Ajabdeh was alive, but the text was italicizes, suggesting a flashback since even Raj Rana Bahadur was alive there while he was declared dead (burnt to death, that must be terrible!) We also saw Ajabdeh surrounded by goons with her ligament torn and Pratap reaching when she is hit and her nose starts bleeding with no future nite of that incident until this day, when Pratap declares her dead.(I was horrified!) and then...that little hint you left above to a reader...Ajabdeh BAIJILAL. And I remember Patta saying, "Baijilal never loses." Gosh! What exactly is on! Better we brace ourselves...
PS- Sajja baiii!!! She is awesome as always! With her aachar and chutneys...I always love her in this care free manner. She is brilliant. And her over active granddaughter- "Dadima!!! Who is Pratap!!!??" That was superb! So waiting for her reaction. Maybe what I thought, she chokes first in shock, then she might have a smile remembering the lovely son Pratap, and then, she'll tell Prithika something like, "Time will give you the answers you want and when Prithika interrogates again, she might divert the talk to her granddaughter's new friend and Prithika starts about Amar and the possibilities are endless.
PPS- Do I really need to say that I'm waiting?