PrAja FF - Pyar da Dabba ( Part 13,14 page 31) - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Kamu...

aayu baby πŸ€— jee bavro hogayo you commenting here again n again. πŸ€ͺ
I m all free so writing n writing n living the responses that making me to gave update fastam fast πŸ˜‰
JB US 🀣
Nhi nho nhi no katta tuh sure reh .
I hate that pool from bottom of my heart πŸ˜†
Wait for next update.

Teri stories. Link dede mujhe 😊

Arey ab comment toh karna hi tha talent should be appreciated aur dosti bhi toh nibhaani hae πŸ˜‰ ye le links:
Poems: seperation pains (complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4360061
The marriage rhyme (complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4361411

Stories: it will always be you (complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4347642
Life without you( complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4341046
Love and betrayal (ongoing): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4376471

Jab padh ke ho jaye tab comment zaroor kariyo😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aayu_26


Arey ab comment toh karna hi tha talent should be appreciated aur dosti bhi toh nibhaani hae πŸ˜‰ye le links:
Poems: seperation pains (complete):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4360061
The marriage rhyme (complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4361411

Stories: it will always be you (complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4347642
Life without you( complete): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4341046
Love and betrayal (ongoing): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4376471

Jab padh ke ho jaye tab comment zaroor kariyo😊😊

bookmarked the page. Will read all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just caught up to the last few updates. The flashback was a complete surprise. Love the way Amar talks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love love love this series Kamu, make some more like this one, our modern PrAja toh kafi modern nikle yaar! πŸ˜† you should write romantic books... AC forever! πŸ˜ƒ Looking forward to more, aur ek baat, make one on PrAja in their wala time too... please!!!πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 13

P: maa plzz and then his eyes meet the pic of the lady. It was Ajabdhe pic itself. He was shocked and understood the game of his parents. Heliterally did not understand how to react. He wanted to smile, jump, scream but he couldn't.

He saw at JB and she wink at her. He nodded his head saying ok.

P: hmmm, nice pic. She is beautiful maa.your choice are so fabulous. I love you. And he hugged him.

JB: ajab beta you should also see. After all its your boss cum friend marriage.

A: no aunty. I don't want to see. You and pratap has selected the girl it means she is nice and perfect.

US: Haa wo toh hai. Phir v you should see once.

A: no uncle.

US: are wat no no see it are see baba.

And he forcely gve her pic in hand.

A: un... are aap meri hi pic mujhe kyun dhikha rahe ho. And ye pic kaha se mili and... ye toh abhi prat...

Aaa, ummm meri pic ladki shaadi, and she was all confused.

Trio laughed out hard.

A: ye ho kya raha hai. Y you all are laughing.

Pratap hit on her head. Are budhu. It was all plan of mom and dad.

Hume bahar bhejna taaki we can confess to each other. Spend quality time with each other and this maa not well. All was there plan.

JB: and humdono jo uss din tumse shaadi ki baat ki thi, wo issi ke baare mein tha. Humnein ajab ki maa se hi baat kit hi.

US: jab maine ajab ko dhekha then only I decided ki humari bahu yahi hogi. Because she is only the one who can take care and improve my bigda hua ghoda. JB hit him.

Sorry I m mean bigda hua beta. And phir shaadi mein tumhari mother se mulakat hui toh bas haath mang liya tumhara. Kyunki nek kaam mein deri nhi honi chahiye.

JB: and we r really sorry ajab ki humnein tumhe rulaya. But this was first and last tym.

Ajab went and took blessings, of US and JB along with Pratap.

JB hugged her and kissed her forehead.

Iss khushi ke mauke par mere hi kami thi'' said Hansa.

A: maaa and she ran and hugged her.

H: I m so haapy for you.

Pratap went and took blessings.

H: I love you beta

A: I love you too maa

US JB : aur hume.

A: awww she hugged both of them 'I LOVE YOU TOO''

P: ehem ehem !! line mein main v hoon.

A: pratap and she went out of room.

JB and Hansa hugged each other and greeted themselves.

US: abb merese jaida intezaar nhi hota. Main pandititji se subh muhurat nikalwaa liya hai.

Kal ka date bahut hi acha. Shaadi kal hi hogi.

H: jaisa aap theek samjhe.

P: tum waha se aise kyun chali aayi.

A: tumne baat hi aisi boli ki ,,,

P: kii ?

A: kii kuch nhi.

P: ki tumhe sharam aagyi.

Ajabdhe bit her toungue.

P: ohooo maidam aaj kal sharmati v hai.


Part 14:-

FLASHBACK END

P : Toh aise hui humari shaadi. It was full of mello drama.

A: you were also included.

P: hawww when.

A: when you saw the photo.

P: are toh I was also shocked.

A: naa, you just wanted to tease me.

Chakri bhago nodded there head saying not again : aree chuppp hoo jao. Jab dhekho toh ladte rehte ho.

A: I didn he started.

B : plzzz not again ajabdhe.

C: chuck it. Aage batao kya hua.

P: aage kya phir next day shaadi hui. But I must say ( seeing to ajabdhe) You looked gawjuss in red green lehenga. Just like a princess and he wink at her.

Ajabdhe blushes.

C: shaddi ke baad kya hua ( giving notorious smile to pratap)

P: beta jis school mein tuh padha h main waha ka principal reh chukka hun. Toh kya hua kaise hua kyun hua usko wahin rehne de, aur tujhe jo kaam diya hai use pura kar.

C: kaam? achaa haa kaam.

C: I think we should leave now. Bahut raat hogayi hai.

Ummm bhabhaisa aaj amar ko lejaaye apne saath plzzz.

A: umm ya sure par agar ye roya toh.

P: common ajabdhe amar has a nice bonding with Chakrawati he wont cry.

And waise v bhago ko v experience hon achaiye to handle kids.

B: kya jiju kuch v and she went of room.

Ajabdhe hit him.

P: kya ? I m his BIL itna haqq hai mera.

Chakri lifted amar in hand

A: chakli chakli and he start pulling his hair.

C: amar no amar no. tumhe mere hi baal milte hai. And then amar started playing with his eyes nose cheeks.

He wished them good night and went to his room.

Ajabdhe closed the door.

A: main fresh hokar aati hun.

P: yaa.

Pratap took out the candles and light them up. He spreaded the red rose on the bead and wrote I love you on floor and decorated with lamps around it.

He went and checked the door, that its locked or not properly, coz he didn wanted anybody distrurbance. After so many months he will be getting a quality tym to spend with ajabdhe. They were so indulged in amar and pratap with business that hey didn got tym to spend with each other. But today he wanted to bring the old days back.

Ajab came out and she was so surprised seeing the sweet simple attractive dcor in room. A big smile came on her face. She was so happy.

Pratap whispers from back ' Kaisa laga surprise''

She turned towards him ' Bht sundar I just loved it''

A: toh yahi kaam tha jiske liye you sended amar there.

P: toh ab amar ke rehte toh ho nhi sakta tha na.

A: she made her eyes down and smiled and blushed.

P: I love you ajabdhe.

These three magical words gve goosebumps to her. She wanted to hear this from months. She looked at him with teary eyes.

He cupped her face: I know I was so busy that I couldn't gve you tym andI

'I love you too'' she said

P: acha.

His right hand moved down to her waist holding it tight and made her more clsoser to him. And oher hand caresses her cheeks.

She kept her eyes closed enejoying the touch if pratap. He made her face close to him and seaed the lips with the kiss.

They were breathing high after that long kiss.

Ajandhe tried to maove away but pratap pulled her towards him.. He hand came over his and her fingers entwines with his. She closed her eyes and leaned against him and resting her head his shoulder.

He removed the hair to one side and kissed her shoulder. His each and every touch gve her shiver from top to bottom. She turned around and hugged him. He lifted her in arms and took to bed..he removes his Shirt and got on her And kissed her forehead. He slightly removes the plates of her saree and moves her hand softly on his abdomen

'You are beautiful ajabdhe and I love you and he kissed her again paasionatey and she back responeded wih same passion. She huuged him and they both slept peacefully waiting for the next beautiful morning with loads of happiness in there life.

***END***


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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
IF k meherbaani se finally able to unress.
bk to ur stry
Kamu.. ek saath double dhamaka..
finally tere sir se removing tag.. "stry adhuri chodne wali" coz u completed it...πŸ˜† mere pr meherbaani krne k liye aapka shukriya..BTW u talkkng abt sum surprise wo ye last update tha ki i hv sumthng more?? ye mujhe samj nhi aaing .. <-- dis is imp πŸ˜› bata de..

ur stry is fab.. mene nhi bola tha.. ki mujhe apni kamu pr bharosa h wo kisi kaante ko nhi layegi..mst stry it ws frm start to end.. nt only dis update bt ur entire stry.. it ws mindblowing..dill garden garden hui gava..maza avi gayo.end ws fab.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
chakli mast tha..
kuch baaki choda mene?? agar yes.. tho end wid dis.. U R JST FAB WRITER N I LUV U FOR UR STORIES MORE THEN UR VM..LUV U KAMU N BEST OF LUCK
Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! [:D/] 😲
Ek sath do chapters[:D/] πŸ₯±
Your sense of humour is tooo good matlab kya humorous chapters the! πŸ‘
Loved this story a lot and do write more! 😊
Btw kamu jaana, main like ke sath comment bhi karti hun pata chal gaya na ab πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kya baat he kamu ek saath 2 updates
Your story was too good waise jaldi mein hoon baat me thikse reply karungi till that time res
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Posted: 10 years ago


unres
awesome update kamu... πŸ₯³ loved both the parts.. bechari ajabde ka chehra dekhne layak tha.. jab usne pratp ki,,to be wife ki photo dekha tha..
woh toh yahi soch rahi hogi ki -" Inn logon ne meri hi pic di hai ya phir meri koi humshakal ka photo de di.." 🀣 πŸ˜›
love the part where Amar Singh tortured chakli (chakri)πŸ˜† Amar is soo adorable 😳
& not to forget the most Romantic part of praja.. haaye.. 😳

Aur Yeh kya..?? story complete bhi hogayi...??πŸ˜” oh I'm so gonna miss this ff very much.. aur ab jaldi se ek nahi story start karna.. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kamuuu πŸ‘ boht acchi end thi, I loved the ending... Kitna romantic tha!!!!!!!!!!!!! aur amar itna sweetly pulling hair... I loved jab BIGDA HUA GHORA bola US ne πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Fab Post... Request hai ! ek naya FF banao, iss baar make them our historical PrAja please! Cant wait!

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