PrAja SS-Ab maaf bhi kar de mujhe kyu door itna hogayi(part 10 on pg19 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz plz update soon waiting desperately for next prt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3
JB reached bijoliya mehal...hb comes and greets her..jb notices unhappiness on her face...hb takes jb to her room..
JB-Hansa (joining hands) hume shama kar do..humare kaaran ajabde ko itni peeda sehni padi...hum tumse haath jod k shama maang rhe hai...bahot pachtawa hai hume jo kuch bhi ajabde k saath hua uska... 😔
HB-hum aapko shama karne waale kon hote hai jaiwanta...aur vaise bhi ajabde ko in sab ki aadat si ho gayi hai...jab bhi ve chittod gayi hai,unka apmaan hi hua hai...samman nahi milta unhe waha par...
JB-hum jaante hai hansa...ajabde k saath jo kuch bhi hua vo sab 1 saazish thi..
HB- (conused) kaisi saazish.???
(JB told her each and everything...)
(just then Ajabde arrives and see JB..tears of extreme happiness flowed from her eyes)
Ajabde- RANIMA..!!!
(she ran towards her and hugged her... JB was soo overwhelmbed to see her bahu..she also cried in happiness...Ajabde took ashirwaad from her)
JB-ajabde...hume shama kr dijiye...aapke saath chittod me jo kuch bhi hua uskeliye hum apse sabhi ki taraf se maafi maangte hai..
Ajabde-nahi nahi ranimaa...aap hume lajjit kar rhi hai...bhala aap kyu shama maangengi hum jaisi sadharan ladki se...
JB-ajabde...ab aap humare saath chittod chaliye...waha sab aapki prataksha kar rhe hai..
(ajabde goes into flashback whn pratap said he hates her and diddnt trust her anymore..)
ajabde- shama kjiye ranimaa par hum chitod nahi jaayenge...
jb-parantu kyu ajabde..??
ajabde-humare daata k dehant k baad bijoliya ko sambhalne k liye koi nahi hai...bijoliya ko humari zaroorat hai... (she diddn't told her that pratap said he diddnt trust her anymore)
jb-thik hai ajabde...aap yehi rehiye...vaise bhi ranaji aur KP ko unki bhool ki saza bhi milni chahiye..achha ajabde,hansa..hume ab jaana chahiye..
ajabde-kya..?aap abhi chali jaayengi.??kuch din to ruk jaaiye ranima.?
hb-ha jaiwanta...ruk jaao..
JB- thik hai,,ruk jaate hai hum.
(soldier comes..)
soldier-baisa..!! afgaano ne bijoliya par aakraman kar diya hai...
ajabde- shoked..!! kya...!! aap humare tamam saniko ko ektatra kijiye..hum aate hai...ab lagta hai yudh karna hi hoga..
(she got ready for war )
hb- khayal rakhiyega apna...patta..,apni jija ka dhyaan rakhiyega...
patta-chinta mat kijiye rani sa...hum jija ko kuch nhi hone denge
ajab took blessing from hb and jb and leaves

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IN chittod...
pratap was sitting on the floor...
pratap-humse e kaisa apraadh ho gaya...hum itne warsho se jinhe kos rhe the,jine apraadhi maan rhe the waastav me unhone kuch nhi kiya tha...unhe bekaar me hi itna sab kuch jhelna pada... 😭
chakri-hum to aapse kehte the na ajabde baisa aisa kuch nh i kar sakti..
pratap- sahi kehte the aap chakrapani...hume aapki baat maanni chahiye thi...
ab hum bijoliya jaayenge aur ajabde se shama maang k samman sahit iss mehal me waapis leke aayenge...
chakri- par baujiraj...itna sabkuch sunne aur sehne k baad kya ajabde baisa yaha lautegi.??
pratap- sahi kah reh hai aap chakrapani...parantu hume unse baat to krni hi hogi...
(and he left..)

Precap- afgans defeat bijolia and took ajabde with them...patta gets badly injured while saving ajabde...pratap comes and savs ajabde..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
res...
unres...
all are superb parts dear !!!
Keep writing😃
Edited by Rhea_13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
unres ..really nice story..waiting 4 nxt prt..😃
Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
it was awesome...eagarly waiting for next part...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Wow.
Awesome and amazing update.
Pratap realised his mistake.
JB requests to Ajabde to come back to Chittod,but,Ajabde says that she has to stay in Bijolia in order to look after the people,as her father died.
JB also staying with Ajabde.
Omg.
Precap is scary...
Pratap coming to save Ajabde...
Continue sooonish..
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Nice
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
That was awesome 😊...plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Pls update it soon .eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Niceee.😊

But can you change it to ajabde fighting with afgans & pratap helps her or afgan leader about to attack on her & pratap saves her.(instead of bijolia defeat track) As per story ajabde is not becharii anymore she is strong enough.

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