PrAja SS-Ab maaf bhi kar de mujhe kyu door itna hogayi(part 10 on pg19 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG OMG I was actually waiting for someone to write such a FF... PLease PLEASE PLEASE continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm... plz continue soon
eagerly waiting to see US and Pratap reaction...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
it is very good
please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awesomeee too good do update soon asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...waiting gor the next imaging roshal only
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2
Finally pratap and JB reached chittod mehal...she got down from plaki and walked straight to rana ji's room...she was walking with immense anger on hr face...even pratap was soo much confudes to see his ranima like this.
JB-(entering ranaji's room) Ranaji.!!
US-jaiwanta bai ji aap.!!aap aa gayi..!! hum bata nahi sakte ki apko dekhke kitni prassannata ho rahi hai hume..
(he was about to hug her but she stopped him..soon pratap and other family members came..)
DB-(he bhagwaan jija laut aayi..!! ab humare saare kiye karay par paani phir jaayega) Jija apka swagat hai...hume apko yaha dekhke bahot prasannata...
JB-vyarth ki baato k liye samay nahi hai humare paas dheer bai ji..!!
Pratap-Ranimaa.!!..??aap itne krodh me kyu hai.?
humse koi bhool ho gai hai.?
JB-ha kunwar pratap..bhool hui hai AAP SAB se..aisi bhoool jise shama nahi kia jaa sakta..
US- jaiwanta bai ji ,spasht roop se bolie aisi kon si bjool hui hai humse..?
DB- e ka jija...aapke aane se hum sab ktne khush hai aur aap humpe hi arop laga rhi hai..
JB-AAp shant rahie dheer bai ji..!
ranaji aur kunwar pratap.,aapne..aapneek ladki ka apmaan karne ka apraadh kaise kia,unki bhawanao ko ku thes pahunchaijeevan nasht kar dia aapne unka..mewar k raja aur bhaawi raaja ko kya ye sab shobha deta hai.??
US-Jaiwanta Bai ji..!!bahot ho gaya..!!hum kuch bol nahi rehe hai iska arth e nahi hai ki aap humpe jhoote arop lagayengi..!
JB-Jhoothe arop to apne unpe lagaya tha rana ji...bechari kuch sidh nahi kar payi..kyonki aap logo ne unhe safai dene ka mauka hi nahi dia..
Pratap-Khsama kijie ranima parantu aap kisi baat kar rhi hai.??
JB- AJABDE..!!
hum ajabde ki baat kar rhe hai pratap..!
jinko ap sabne itne ghinone tarike se apmaanit kar k mehal se nikal dia..
(all stood frozen...no one was able to understand what was going on)
pratap-parantu ranimaa..unhi ki waja se to aap hum sabko chor k chali gayi thi...unhi ki wajah se to...
JB-nahi kunwar pratap...nahi...hum to uss din ajabde se mile bhi nahi the..hum to apni 1 bhool ka praiyschit karne k liye gaye the...
US- ka..!! phir vo patra...
JB- vo kisine badal dia tha...taki humare jaane ka saara dosh ajabde pe aa jaae aur unhe kumwar pratap se aur mewad se door bhej dia jaae...
(She told about the actual letter she wrote...everone (except DB)was feeling soo guilty specially pratap and US )
(it was like pratap k pairo tale zameen khisak gayi thi...he remembered his last words he told ajabde that he hates her..he was feeling so ashamed on himself)
JB-ranaji..apko apni bahu pe bharosa nahi tha ki ve kuch galat nahi kar sakti...kunwar pratap,ka itna hi vishwaas kia tha aapne ajabde par..jinhone aapke liye hi nahi balki sabke liye itne balidaan diye,unke saath aisa vyavhar..!!
DB-(kar dia satyanaash..!!)
pratap- (criyng)he ekling ji..humse..humse to bahot bada apraadh ho gaa...hume shama kar dijie rani maa.
(jb was about to leave bt pratap stopped her)
Pratap-aap kaha jaa rhi hai ranimaa..?
JB-BIJOLIYA..!!!
(and she left)


Precap-Ajab's and JB's conversation...
pratap's arrival in bijoliya


Edited by Baishalighoshbg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so the truth is out...i'm waiting for next chapter...plz update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -villain-

so the truth is out...i'm waiting for next chapter...plz update soon!

m so glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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..thnx 4 d PM...omg dis is wat i ws actually waiting 4...ab belega PRATAP ajab k liye papad..😛 waiting 4 nxt update..overall vry gud update..mazaa aa gya
Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja

JB- (criyng)he ekling ji..humse..humse to bahot bada apraadh ho gaa...hume shama kar dijie rani maa.

JB calling 4 her rani maa??
..thnx 4 d PM...omg dis is wat i ws actually waiting 4...ab belega PRATAP ajab k liye papad..😛 waiting 4 nxt update..

sorry...a typing mistake 😛

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