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Krupali

@Krupali

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It's Amazing... ❤️

spclly last lines...! it feels so amazing r8 now...!

I can't describe it... it's splendid!! ❤️

Edited by Krupali - 11 years ago

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Kaushitaki
...mmm...mmm...a splendid feeling...loved d last lines...and the aura...it all came alive once again...and m sitting...frozen...enthralled...chilled...by d memory of pratap filling her maang...

it truly was...more that splendid...

got us all lost in it...

so lost that i cudnt help writing it...

infact, i didnt write it intentionally...my pen wrote this itself...

Pratap filling her maang...i was sitting still as a statue...i cudnt even breathe in that moment...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: aashna_siddy
I loved it too much aru...I don't have words to tell how splendid it was ❤️
U have described everything - the happiness , the surprise and the beautiful atmosphere there...
I have just one word to say - FREAKING AWESOME😳
Hugs 🤗

thank u re Aashu...

it just...sort of...came out of my pen... 😆

the atmosphere...its was literally brimming with joy...

had to somehow write it...somehow i felt i did not do justice to it...no...avv=ctually its like...i think it cud have been better...maybe...

thank u so much...

huggieee!!!

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Rhea_13
Beautifully written dear :)

thank u so much rhea... :D

i'm gladdy... :D😃

Originally posted by: Rhea_13
Loved this part and thanks for ty write up too :P
"Aaj se aap Mewar ke rajkumar Kunwar Pratap, aur Mewar ki Kunwarani Ajabdeh ke roop me dekhe jayenge..."
"Badhai ho badhai!!!"

ty for what??

if i havent told u yet, i must say...no thank u's to me... ;)

actually...their new titles that too put together are just enthralling...

the Kunwar and Kunwarani of Mewar...

soon to be the Maharana and Maharani of Mewar...

haayyyeee...its on the cloud nine...

Edited by Aru_A - 11 years ago

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Madhura

@..Madhura..

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Beautiful Aru
your work always make me freeze on my place...ahh I mean they touch my heart
love the last line 😳

luv u
Madhura

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ppl_alwys_leave
Aru... 🤗
Amazingly written...
Fab tha...especially the last para...
I loved it...
I think u should write more drabbles too...
RoSal as PrAja❤️

Kavishaaa...

Awww...thank u...

last para...hehehhe...

everything is subconsciously written...first time on the pages of my diary rather than in the computer...

thank u so much...

ik..drabbles are nice...but my writing is so elaborate that it hardly sticks to be concise...it goes long and long...

but i lovve writing small stuff also...for ex. my GMW and its sequel in the writer's corner... :)

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: _aashi_
u too wrote ur diary...me too 😆, same pinch 😉
If I go crazy ( I mean over excited of PrAja ) I write it in my diary 😛

hehehehe...

when i'm in any wave of emotions...or mood swings...or just recording memories...or ranting...etc etc...my Diary comes handy...n it has some stuff about PrAja...really...

PS-I hope ur diary's doing welll😆