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mothiaai

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Posted: 10 years ago

well dat was a lovely one!!!!!!

HOPE THEY HAD SHOWED D SAME IN D SHOW AS WELL!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Aru

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Posted: 10 years ago

res...

let me find shanti and time to read this...will then comment...

by shanti, i mean man ki shanti... :P

btw, i'm not much of a tv person, but i do like BBT, also HIMYM and Sherlock...have u seen them???

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful OS

The emotions was so well described Gosh I just oved it

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Roshini

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Posted: 10 years ago

its fab stry..gud 1..beautiful luvd it...

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Aru

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awww...

i honestly forgot every thought i had about this story as I read the ending...

it was sooo awww...

oh god...

rest, it was dificult for me to believe that DB's face came out, i really couldn't believe it..but at the same time, i was glad that it did...

i loved the turmoil in the beginning and the fury as he pushed aside the guards...

and also the whol thing, Ajab finding him collapsed in front of her door with a face etched with tear tracks...and that whole thing...

amazing...sach me...

and...writing indirect is new, I have never read any story without proper dialogues, but this one, in passive, its good...it provides a room for imagination, to perceive the given situation in our own ways. I really like it...

great job. keep it up...

PS-lovely title ;)

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