PrAja OS- Ehsaas... ~Curtain fall~ [Part 2- Page 5 ] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful starting!
loved it <3 <3

waise, padhna nahi h tujhe kya? itna time kaha se aata h??😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Aru so well written. ..cvs should learn something from you...pratap explanation. ..about niyati so apt...and perfect. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
lovely story
superb writing
waiting for more Aru from u
looking forward to read more in this story
plz update soon
LOVE❤️
RADHI😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely writing Aru...
How beautifully niyati explained...
UFF! CVs- kabhi toh aisi scripts likha karo!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja

unres!

Aru..truely beautiful stry yr..mazaa aa gya pad k...njoyed ur frst prt of ehsaas...ab scnd prt ka intezaar rahega...hay aru ja k sikh in CVs ko nok jhok kaise krte h..kab se pakka rhe h sadda hua epi dikha k...pratu ws again fab in ur stry..dis is wat actual pratap is ...nt wat dey r currently showing in serial..ajab tho h hi gr8 ab us pr me kya bolu...aru...waiting 4 ur nxt prt of stry update soon

thank u roshini di...
CV's ki maya ka kya kehna...
ham kuch nahi sikha sakte unhe...😆
thank u fr such comments...
abhi to...just wait for the second part... 😉😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Its stunning! I loved how pratap explained the niyati stuff to Ajab - it was such a perfect praja conversation and samajhdaar pratap...yeah ajab's mind fighting against her heart...beautifully sketched out and very well written aru...

if only CVs would read what u write and execute it accordingly

thanks Hiral...
actually...this explanation was needed i believe..so i gave it...
wait for the next part...it is another level...
thank u dear...
don't know why i'm loving the word 'sketched' u wrote...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Krupali

ok I found it... 😛
it's beautiful Aru... 😳
my fav part was when Pratap explained how niyati brings them together every time.. that was perfectly written... 😊 👏 w8ng for nxt part!!... 😊

Thank You jijaa!!
Aapko pata hai...jab bhi me aapse baat karti hu, aisa lagta hai jaise me Sajja (SB) ban gayi hu...!
Aapko to pata hai naa, is niyati ke khel ke litne pov's aa chuke hain...
to maine socha, ki ab to seedha seedha saty saamne rakh hi dena chahiye...
Awwwiiieee, thank you!!
Hayyyeee, sorry aapko itna wait karane ke liye, but dw, next part will be out soon...and it would be very amazingg!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: anushruthi

awesome

truly beautiful !!
loved all of Pratap's dialogues and he is SO right
Niyati does want them together
Do cont soon
thanks for PM

Oh my God!
It makes so excited to open old threads and reply to my old people...
Thank you so much vaise...
He has to be right...after all he is Pratap Singh!! :P
I'm sorry I took so long...
but dw, update in a while...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: sara1990

beautifully written...😉

love they way Pratap explaining about niyati to Ajabde
waiting for the next update
All the best and good luck for your exam👍🏼

Awwiiiee...Sara!!
Thank You so much!!
Glad you liked it...!
Thank you again for your wishes...My exams went really well and the update will be up very soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Red-Devil

Liked it !!

well written Aru..!!😊👏
and...ADB for ur exams !!👍🏼

Aha!
Anshul!
Thank You re!
You never fail to comment even if the story is not your cup of tea...
Thank You so much raised to the power 2! (for your time and wishes😉)

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