PrAja SS-An Unknown feeling: something i never felt before

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Nice update. Pratap ne Ajabde ki haatho se banaaye huwa kheer ko pehchaan liya. Waa kya baat hai Kunwar Pratap. Update soon dear😊😊😊

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kamu_zainaddict

@kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Ausme celu.

tha god teri story mei pratap gt to kno wabout kheer.

update soon.

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crazygul

@crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

kamya thinking of writing an os on praja. for extreme long time.. i think akha teej will b best occasion to describe praja relation..

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P.D.S

@P.D.S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

very nice. I like the pace you going at now. It's nice to get an insight of their feelings since we don't get to see it in the episodes.

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-Magnanimous-

@-Magnanimous-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Very nice update Cel 😃
my suggestion would be..you should increase the pace..then the SS will be more interesting to read 😊

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Aru

@Aru_A

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

These are super-amazing...I absolutely love ur writing...

Eagerly waiting for the next part... :D

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geetpagli

@geetpagli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Very nicely written👏...pls update soon😊😊

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CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Vinder90
was savin this as a nice weekend read 😆
pretty awesome yet again. . Ajab flashback idea very very cool 👏

and phool arrangin plates lol. 😆 rather cute 😆

overall awesome. . i dont mind the pace. . if you are comfortable writing 😊 (if i was writing, I wud struggle astronomically if the shows's pace overtook me lol 😆 )

thank you so much. 😃
Actually i wanted to pace with the story only but couldn't manage to update the story even twice a week. Will try to make up with my speed.😊

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CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Bonhi_ipkknd
Just read all the parts in one go...its really good..!!

I love the concern between Praja...and Pratap remembering Ajab with her torn blood-stained dupatta..!!!!! *sigh*

I'm hoping Ajabdeh will solve the GJ mystery...which is awesome. This should happen in the show...she is smart enough and also she needs a confidence boost and this can surely give her that.

Do continue soon...and according to me pace of the story is just fine.

Thanks a lot dear.😳 Glad that you liked my writing.😃
About GJ's mystery let's see what happens coz even i don't have the idea what i'm going to write next😕It's just when i start typing i write whatever comes to my mind.🤢 And I cant believe it that i've not lost the track and still managing to write correctly.😆

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CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Wow I like it...I read all parts in one go...just awesome

Glad that you liked it. Will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Nice update. Pratap ne Ajabde ki haatho se banaaye huwa kheer ko pehchaan liya. Waa kya baat hai Kunwar Pratap. Update soon dear😊😊😊

yeah 😊 in my story Pratap in ajabde's case also is as intelligent as he is in the battlefield or political or family matters 😆. Not like in the serial where Pratap loses his recognition power sometimes when we want it the most.🤢

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