Dil Beparwah...Oblivious heart...RishMi TanShi SS - Page 9

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Rishi has come around. He is now appreciating Tanuja as the person she is rather than focusing on her disease.

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Dil Beparwah...Oblivious heart...Part 8

Rishi went back to school.

He confessed to the Principal:Sir,whatever complaint you heard about me is right.I was really slack.I did not teach the students properly.You can fire me.I am willing to leave this school.A nice teacher deserves this school,not me.

The Principal:You taught the chapter about the world war in a different way.It was through videos that you took the class,To check how the new teaching method is and whether it's working I took a class test for the students.The students did the test very well.They all scored good marks.I am proud to have a teacher like you in this school.You really deserve this job.Even the parents who complained about you are having a good opinion about you now.

Rishi was really happy and surprised.

Rishi:Thank you so much Sir.I promise that I will be the best teacher to the students.

The Principal smiled.

Rishi came out of the Principal's cabin.Rishikesh went near him.

Rishikesh:All are praising you here.Everyone is impressed with your new teaching technique.It's really great.We all must try it out.Congratulations Rishi.

Rishi smiled:Thank you Rishikesh.




Raj,Rano and Tanuja were very happy that the Principal appreciated Rishi.

Tanuja fed him a cake piece saying:In this happy moment,have this sweet.

Rishi smiled having the cake.

Rishi told Tanuja:Thank you so much Tanuja.Because of your ideas and help only I could become a good teacher.

She smiled.



In the room...

Rishi sat near Tanuja.

Rishi:Can I ask you something?

Tanuja:Yes.

Rishi:You married me happily.But after marriage I hurt you a lot.You might have been very angry with me.But do you still have love in your heart for me?

Mana Haseen Hai Lekin
Tumhari Tarah Kahan Hai
Mana Haseen Hai Lekin
Tumhari Tarah Kahan Hai

Tanuja was stunned.

Tanuja looked at him.

Tanuja:My love is not something that vanishes all of a sudden.

Uss Chaad Ko Dekhate Ham
Uski Jagah Kaha Hain
Uski Jagah Kaha Hain

Rishi smiled emotionally.

Rishi:Then can you please give me a chance to improve our marriage?

Chhup Jaaye Badalon Pe
Yun Sharmsaar Karke

Tanuja:When there is love,marriage gets improved automatically.But why do you want to improve our marriage?

Rishi:Because I have started loving you.

Tum Pyaar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte
Ek Baar Karne Dete
To Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte

Tanuja could not believe her ears.

Tanuja:What?

Rishi:I love you Tanuja.

Tanuja smiled tearfully:I love you too Rishi.

Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte
Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte

They embraced each other.

Tumhe Kitna Pyaar Karte…

(Bawaal).









During the sleep Lakshmi woke up shivering.Rishikesh got scared and got up.

Rishikesh:Lakshmi,don't get scared.I am here.Balwinder will not return to you.

Lakshmi placed her finger on his lips and said:Don't get scared.I did not shiver because of fear.I shivered because the AC was too much.

Rishikesh was relieved.

Lakshmi decreased the temperature of the AC.

Rishikesh:Lakshmi,are you alright?

Lakshmi smiled:Yes,I am alright Rishi.Infact now I don't have nightmares at all.When you are there with me,why should I be scared?I feel safe in your arms Rishi.I am no more scared or haunted by my past.Instead of nightmares,I am seeing sweet dreams with you.

Rishikesh was surprised.

Tere Siwa Ab Na Guzaara Mera Ve
Jeene Ka Junoon Tu Sahara Mera Ve
Marke Bhi Paas Rahuga Tere Main
Sohneya Haan Ho

Rishikesh:I am so happy that you are getting better Lakshmi.

She smiled.

Rishikesh:Ok..now you sleep.

Both of them lay down on the bed.Suddenly surprising Rishikesh,Lakshmi lay close to him and embraced him.They looked at each other romantically.

Palkon Pe Rakhta Hoon Tujhko Saja
Tu Hi Toh Hai Mere Jeene Ki Ek Wajah
Tera Hoon Main Tera Hi Rahunga Sada
Maahiya

Tere Bina

Lakshmi:Can I tell you something Rishi?

Rishikesh:Hmmm..

Lakshmi:I love you.

Rishikesh had a heavenly feeling hearing the magical words from her.

Laage Nahi Mera Dil Yaara
Saanson Pe Tera Hi Naam Hai
Tu Shaam Hai Subah Ka Tu Taara

Rahe Door Jo Tu Jaake
Sar Saamne Jhuka Ke

Rishikesh:I love you too Lakshmi.

She smiled.

Lakshmi:I know how much you love me Rishi.

He smiled.

Phir Se Tujhe Mana Ke
Le Aaunga

Shikve Sabhi Bhula Ke
Naye Raaste Bana Ke
Dil Mein Tujhe Basa Ke
Le Aaunga

He pecked her forehead.

Aasaan Nahi Hai Kehna
Tere Bina Main Reh Paunga
Sach Mein Main Mar Jaunga
Sach Mein Main Mar Jaunga

Ek Pal Ki Doori(Satyaprem ki katha).





Rishi and Lakshmi went for honeymoon.Their love and romance bloomed during their honeymoon.

They had cute romantic moments.

They danced romantically.

Naseeb Se Mila Jo Yeh
Tera Saath Hai

Naseeb Se Mila Jo Yeh
Tera Saath Hai
Har Pal Mere Honthon Pe


Teri Hi Baat Hai

Haan Aa Aa Aa…



Naseeb Se Mila Jo Yeh
Tera Saath Hai


Har Pal Mere Honthon Pe
Teri Hi Baat Hai

Adhoora Tha Main
Ab Poora Hua
Jabse Tu Mera Ho Gaya

Gham Kushi Mein Dhal Gaye
Tu Jabse Mere Kareeb Hai

Rishi gave a heart shaped balloon to Lakshmi.

Gham Kushi Mein Dhal Gaye
Tu Jabse Mere Kareeb Hai

They romanced in the rain.


Paake Bhi Dhoondhoon Tujhe



Khwaahish Yeh Kitni Ajeeb Hai


Rishi and Lakshmi went for the party arranged for the newly wed couples at the hotel.

They danced at the party romantically.

Gham Kushi Mein Dhal Gaye
Tu Jabse Mere Kareeb Hai


Paake Bhi Dhoondhoon Tujhe
Khwaahish Yeh Kitni Ajeeb Hai

Khud Se Bichhadna Mujhko
Aachha Laga Hai
Tujhme Bikharna Mujhko
Sacha Laga Hai


After the party went back to their room.They got cozy with each other

and became one.


Naseeb Se Mila Jo Yeh
Tera Saath Hai
Har Pal Mere Honthon Pe
Teri Hi Baat Hai

Adhoora Tha Main
Ab Poora Hua
Jabse Tu Mera Ho Gaya




(
Satyaprem Ki Katha).




Rishi told Tanuja:Tanuja...get ready for the party.

Tanuja remembered how Rishi used to avoid taking her out to protect his reputation.

Tanuja:Are you sure Rishi?

Rishi said emotionally:Yes.I know why you are asking this.I had restricted you from going out thinking that it will bring shame to me.But I ashamed of myself for telling you to sit at home.Now I am proud to tell others that you are my wife.I can't wait to introduce you to my colleagues at the party.

Tanuja smiled emotionally.

Lakshmi got dressed in a grand lehenga.Rishikesh was mesmerized by her beauty.

Tujhse Nahi Main Seh Paunga
Tere Bina Rukk Jaunga
Tere Bina Rukk Jaunga Haan

Ek Ghar Naya Basa Ke

Rishikesh:You look gorgeous Lakshmi.

She blushed.

Lakshmi:You are also looking handsome Rishi.

He smiled.

Rakh Loon Tujhe Chhupa Ke
Duniya Se Tujhe Chura Ke
Le Aaunga

Chahe Zameen Utha Ke
Chahe Aasmaan Gira Ke
Sitaaron Se Tujhe Saja Ke
Le Aaunga



(
Satyaprem Ki Katha).

Rishikesh and Lakshmi went for a party.Rishi and Tanuja arrived.

Rishikesh:Lakshmi...this is my colleague Rishi.Meet my wife Lakshmi.

Rishi:This is my wife Tanuja.

Tanuja:Hi!

Rishikesh and Lakshmi:Hi!

Rishi:We were sad that we could'nt attend each other's wedding.But now we both could introduce our better halves to each other.

Rishikesh:Yes.

Tanuja:Nice to meet you Lakshmi.

Lakshmi:It's a pleasure to meet you.

They chatted and enjoyed.

The music was played.All the couples including Rishi-Tanuja and Rishikesh-Lakshmi danced.

Badle tere maahi
Laa ke jo koi saari
Duniya bhi de de agar toh
Kise duniya chaahiye

Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye
Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye
Kisi ki na madad
Na dua chaahiye
Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye






Sun haaniye
Jind jaaniye
Sau baar janam loon
Toh bhi tu hi
Humdum har dafa chaahiye



Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye
Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye
Kisi ki na madad
Na dua chaahiye
Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye



Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye tu meri
Main hun tera raanjha



Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye tu meri
Main hun tera raanjha



Jab tak teri neend na toote
Ugta nahin hai sooraj mera
Khwab rahe kis kaam ke mere
Khwab se pyaara tu sach mera
Sun haaniye
Jind jaaniye
Zakhmon ko mere marham ki jagah
Bas tera chhua chaahiye



Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye
Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye
Kisi ki na madad
Na dua chaahiye
Tu hai toh mujhe
Phir aur kya chaahiye



Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye tu meri
Main hun tera raanjha

Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye tu meri
Main hun tera raanjha

Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye tu meri
Main hun tera raanjha

Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Tu hi re
Ni heeriye tu meri
Main hun tera raanjha

Kise duniya chaahiye
(Zara Hatke Zara Bachke).

Navratri function....

Rishi and Tanuja were dancing.

Raat Baaki Raat Baaki

Sajke Sanwar Ke Aayi
Dhoom Dhaam Se Dhoom Dhaam Se
Dhoom Dhaam Se






Jag Saara Ghoom Aayi
Jhoom Jhaam Ke Jhoom Jhaam Ke
Jhoom Jhaam Ke

Sajke Sanwar Ke Aayi
Dhoom Dhaam Se Dhoom Dhaam Se
Dhoom Dhaam Se

Aana Chale Aana
Haaye Re Phir Na Jaana
Padi Hai Abhi Raat Baaki

Piya Ji Aadhi Raat Baaki
Karenge Poori Baat Baaki
Piya Ji Aadhi Raat Baaki
Karenge Poori Baat Baaki

Jaane Ram Jaane
Aage Woh Shyam Jaane
Chalegi Kitni Ishqbaazi

Piya Ji Aadhi Raat Baaki
Karenge Poori Baat Baaki
Piya Ji Aadhi Raat Baaki
Karenge Poori Baat Baaki

Ishq Ki Chali Hawayein
Chunri Sarak Jaaye
Toone Jo Dekha Toh Sharm Se
Main Doob Jaungi

Ishq Ki Chali Hawayein
Chunri Sarak Jaaye
Toone Jo Dekha Toh Sharm Se
Main Doob Jaungi

Jaadu Chala Aisa Zor Se
Khinch Aayi Bin Dor Ke
Socha Na Tha Maine Pehle Kabhi
Tere Paas Aaungi

Teri Main Toh Hone Lagi

Bajaj and Prerna smiled while watching them dance.

Prerna:Mr.Bajaj...you know one thing?I had apprehension regarding Rishi and Tanuja's relationship.But Tanuja had faith in their relationship.She proved me wrong and I am so happy to see Rishi and Tanuja happy together.

Bajaj smiled:Our daughter is so lovely that anyone will love her.

Prerna smiled.


Manish and Swarna smiled seeing Rishikesh and Lakshmi dance.

Aaj Shaam Se Aaj Sham Se
Aaj Sham Se

Mujhko Bacha Lo
Main Toh Gayi Kaam Se
Gayi Kaam Se Gayi Kaam Se









Naino Hi Naino Mein Chori Chori
Hum Tum Karenge Mulakaat Baaki
Tere Bina Hai Raat Aadhi
Padi Hai Aadhi Raat Baaki

Piya Ji Aadhi Raat Baaki
Karenge Poori Baat Baaki Haaye

Arey Chunri Udi Zor Zor Se
Hawa Chali Charon Oar Se
Khincha Khincha Main Bhi
Teri Oar Ho Gaya

Dil Mera Tere Dil Ka
Chor Ho Gaya

Tu Akeli Nahi
Main Bhi Gaya Kaam Se
Gaya Kaam Se Gaya Kaam Se
Mashhoor Hone Laga Tere Naam Se
Tere Naam Se Tere Naam Se

Jaane Ram Jaane
Aage Woh Shyam Jaane
Chalegi Kitni Ishqbaazi

Piya Ji Aadhi Raat HaHa..
Padi Hai Abhi Raat Raat..

Piya Ji Aadhi Raat Baaki
Karenge Poori Baat Baaki


(
Satyaprem Ki Katha).



Manish:I was really worried about Lakshmi's future.Now I am relieved.

Swarna:Me too Manishji.It's our daughter's luck that she got such a nice husband who loves her so much.

Manish:Rishikesh is also lucky that he got a wife who fell in love with him even after losing faith in love.

Swarna smiled.

The End

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourite pair,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#83

Good that there’s an improvement in Rishi’s job now. Tanuja feedingcake to him was sweet, Rishi praising her was nice. Glad that they both love eachother, and that Tanuja’s love didn’t vanish and Rishi started loving him. Surprisingthat now Lakshmi isn’t having nightmares, Lakshmi sleeping close to him was unexpected.Happy that they confessed their love. Honeymoon moments were romantic. Dance wasalso romantic. I am so happy that now Rishi doesn’t feels ashamed. Nice dance. Fellin love with TanShi once again. I didn’t know its ending, will miss this ff. Favoritecouple is TanShi. Favorite character is Rishikesh because normally husbands leaveafter hearing about molestation, but here he supported Lakshmi. Favorite scene isRishMi and TanShi accepting each other.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#84

Tanuja finally finds true love with Rishi. He realized what a good person he was married to.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#85

Lakshmi finally put her fears behind her and embraced life with Rishikesh.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#86

Thanks a lot.

Did you mean that you fell in love with Tanshi again after reading this SS?



Originally posted by: salley145

Good that there’s an improvement in Rishi’s job now. Tanuja feedingcake to him was sweet, Rishi praising her was nice. Glad that they both love eachother, and that Tanuja’s love didn’t vanish and Rishi started loving him. Surprisingthat now Lakshmi isn’t having nightmares, Lakshmi sleeping close to him was unexpected.Happy that they confessed their love. Honeymoon moments were romantic. Dance wasalso romantic. I am so happy that now Rishi doesn’t feels ashamed. Nice dance. Fellin love with TanShi once again. I didn’t know its ending, will miss this ff. Favoritecouple is TanShi. Favorite character is Rishikesh because normally husbands leaveafter hearing about molestation, but here he supported Lakshmi. Favorite scene isRishMi and TanShi accepting each other.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#87

Yeh story bhi khatam ho gayismiley19

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Posted: 1 years ago
#88

Beautiful end to a wonderful journey ❤️❤️

Just awesome 😎

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing

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Posted: 1 years ago
#89

Don't worry.My other ff is going on.

Please do give your views on the last part.



Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Yeh story bhi khatam ho gayismiley19

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Posted: 1 years ago
#90

Thanks for the pm


Part 8

Awesome update... nicely written

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