Arya FF - Gupt - Page 5

Nice update
Arjun saves maya from being teased
Then realises she's his maya
Now both r happy to be back together
But now this proposal in way n probably gonna cause lots of heartache n trouble
How can karan n Arjuns mum accept without speaking to him first
They r doing exactly like what vandanas mum did to her in past n look how it turned out
Looking forward to next update
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Wow, awesome loved it to the core

Nice update dear

Omg again Saanjh and Maya are after Arjun ;)
But Arjun doesnt seem interested in Saanjh again
I'm happy that this time it is Maya who was Arjun's childhood friend! That's means they were close! And it's sad that Maya and her father aren't respected due to Maya's chacha :(

And omg you're tooo good!
I love how you put the song lyrics there! Lmfao
I was imagining the whole song in my head!
And I wasn't laughing in the first song with duniya haseeno ka mela lmfao I was imaging Kushal dancing to that song! Hahahaha
But the second song was quite romantic
I liked that you use daily songs from the nineties! I love love love old songs so was happy u used them :)

It's shocking that vandana was in love with arvind who was ashwin's brother and vandana was forced to marry arun.so arvind only killed arun.sad.though arvind was hanged sad that it ruined Karen ashwin's relationship though ashwin is innocent. Loved arjun saving Maya from that flirt.superb scene.surprising that arya were childhood friends. I loved arjun saying that since Maya is there he won't feel lonely n maya's smile was sweet.arjun saying that he will visit in maya's dream was sweet.does arjun love maya?loved the dream song of Maya saanj with arjun.lovely scene of Maya ashwin.unlike the movie here they are rich and have their own business empire.arya seeing childhood pics together was nice.can you please show the childhood scenes of arya?sajun's parents have fixed their marriage. How will arya react?nice pics

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

wow awesome update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.

Very nice update 👏👏👏
continue soon

WOW!! Fabulous update...

loved it dear