Antara OS- Infidelity (14+)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Just in time to read yet another awesome piece... Had it been a little later, I would have come here tomorrow morning...


It's amazing as usual... šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

So, this time you wrote about Antara having a temporary relationship/fling/affair with some other guy...an epilogue to the previous one... And as usual, you have done a great job... I must say, you are really a fabulous writer.

Loved reading it... ā¤ļø


Waise, discussing a book...mainly it's plot twists with my maa or my Di is one of my favourite pastimes... šŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Just in time to read yet another awesome piece... Had it been a little later, I would have come here tomorrow morning...


It's amazing as usual... šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

So, this time you wrote about Antara having a temporary relationship/fling/affair with some other guy...an epilogue to the previous one... And as usual, you have done a great job... I must say, you are really a fabulous writer.

Loved reading it... ā¤ļø


Waise, discussing a book...mainly it's plot twists with my maa or my Di is one of my favourite pastimes... šŸ˜†

@bold, my bestie and I discuss web series plot twists at 12-2 at nightšŸ˜†

@red, thanksā˜ŗļø

glad you liked itšŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

@bold, my bestie and I discuss web series plot twists at 12-2 at nightšŸ˜†

@red, thanksā˜ŗļø

glad you liked itšŸ¤—

Most welcome... šŸ¤—


That's really nice... Midnight discussions on web series... šŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Short, simplistic and beautiful ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

I loved the light yet deep tone of the prose....

Keep it coming šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: stormborn

šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Short, simplistic and beautiful ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

I loved the light yet deep tone of the prose....

Keep it coming šŸ‘šŸ‘

Glad you liked it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow, beautiful. ā¤ļø Loved the style of your writing. šŸ‘

Antara finally understood the meaning of Nilanjana's taunts at MJ. I wonder though why 'late' husband though?

Keep writing more. šŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: tournesol

Wow, beautiful. ā¤ļø Loved the style of your writing. šŸ‘

Antara finally understood the meaning of Nilanjana's taunts at MJ. I wonder though why 'late' husband though?

Keep writing more. šŸ¤—

Idk, I just felt that if MJ loses his father soon, he becomes more aggressive, more entitled and that is why he is what he isšŸ˜†

You know, like a prince who when he realizes that he can get the throne either by fighting his father or waiting for him to die, no matter how much he loves his father, how much love he gets back, a part of him wants the throne more than his own father(m not saying all princes, just some)

I feel MJ would have had the same feelings, which Nilajana would have caught on way before anyone else and then started being harsh with him, only driving more to prove his point that he can be a better businessman, lose respect for women(and other people, in general) and this drive. Just a pov of minešŸ˜†

Glad it was worth your timešŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Idk, I just felt that if MJ loses his father soon, he becomes more aggressive, more entitled and that is why he is what he isšŸ˜†

You know, like a prince who when he realizes that he can get the throne either by fighting his father or waiting for him to die, no matter how much he loves his father, how much love he gets back, a part of him wants the throne more than his own father(m not saying all princes, just some)

I feel MJ would have had the same feelings, which Nilajana would have caught on way before anyone else and then started being harsh with him, only driving more to prove his point that he can be a better businessman, lose respect for women(and other people, in general) and this drive. Just a pov of minešŸ˜†

Glad it was worth your timešŸ¤—

That's an amazing perspective into MJ's psyche. šŸ‘šŸ¼ I felt MJ's mother was the only woman MJ truly loved, but only loved not respected. If MJ respected his mom he would have cared to do something so that her daily taunts would stop happily.

Forgot to write earlier, the banner looks amazing.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: tournesol

That's an amazing perspective into MJ's psyche. šŸ‘šŸ¼ I felt MJ's mother was the only woman MJ truly loved, but only loved not respected. If MJ respected his mom he would have cared to do something so that her daily taunts would stop happily.

Forgot to write earlier, the banner looks amazing.

@red, thanksā˜ŗļø

@last red line, I was actually supposed to post in fan fiction section, but it started giving me troubles (IF, as usual😳)

@bold, agreešŸ‘šŸ¼

@green, dont give him ideas, he will kill her and say i killed you coz i love youšŸ˜†

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