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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

The prologue is quite interesting... 👏


Waiting for the first chapter. 😊

Thank you for reading it...

Will try to update soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Hello again guys,

Thanks for reading it and sorry in advance for any grammatical errors you see...

So here is the first chapter


CHAPTER 1


“I will hurt you for this. I don't know how yet, but give me time. A day will come when you think yourself safe and happy, and suddenly your joy will turn to ashes in your mouth, and you'll know the debt is paid.”

George R.R. Martin, A Clash of Kings

A girl can be seen entering a mansion as she enters, this mansion's name is shown- ROY MANSION. While entering she can hear voices coming from dining table especially Rishi's voice. All members of the family can be seen having breakfast there except only one is not present her best friend Rudra. Yes, the girl who entered is Ananya.

Of course, she knew he won't be here like always like the past 9 years from the time he believed that his father was involved in her death and the only time he will be here is when he is going to sleep or if his mother or brother needs him. She has come at this time due to only this reason because if Rudra finds about his father to meet her in order to know about the business matter then there would be another fight between father-son duo.

Well, the business matter is also an issue, there wouldn’t have been a problem if that one writer haven’t gone to marry abroad while the other one has left after his contract expired and the investors have left. She can’t understand where the problem lies, for the past eight years there wasn’t any but now it has come like a big happy family. But, finally, after this whole past month they have found a company that would be interested in investing in their Ruan Publications and not only that they have also found a writer- one of the world’s Renowned writer and she only hopes they agree.

As she was thinking about the situation she has already reached the dining table. Antara aunty asked her to sit and have breakfast and of course like always she can’t say no to it after all she has been away from home for quite sometime and only this kind of homemade food can make her not feel homesick.

While eating, she can hear Rishi blabbering about his Future wife and honewali bahu and bla bla.. Seriously, he has been talking about this from last 2 days and have said it n times and she can’t understand when he gonna grow up like its okay him having a crush or something like that but love. For goodness sake, though he has met his saviour girl yaa saviour girl who have saved him from drowning and just said three words tum theek ho? Then she left. And he doesn’t know anything about her except her face yet he has decided her as future wife. At first, I was amused but now it is irritating her by continuously hearing his same talks for last 48 hours and god she going to give him a good hearing if he doesn't stop. And she would have done it, if MJ uncle didn’t call her and ask her to follow him to study after breakfast.

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Antara thinks about this girl who is rushing to follow MJ towards the study room. And in her eyes she could see the respect and a feeling one has towards his idol or mentor. Well, she is a good child but too bad she thinks a hypocritical person as mentor. Yes, a hypocritical person, after all that person worships devi Durga - a female goddess but yet didn’t hesitate or even blink while destroying the girl’s life just for his own ego’s satisfaction and control which he named as love for his son. She can never understand how he could claim he loves his son while at the same time killing his love, his happiness. Her Rudra who have after that incident though one can see him smiling with his lips but his eyes it looks...as if he is living but his soul as left him.

Ananya thinks he cares about his son so he want to know...so that he can help him but she forget if he really wanted to do that then he would have done it ages ago after all who won’t hear him, Mrityunjay Roy in this city. And not only that he can also make sure Rudra don’t come to know about it just like he doesn’t know that incident. But he would never do that if he does this then won't he lose his desire to control him.

Oh, why she is blaming her dear husband when she herself at that time wasn’t strong enough to stop him, her dearest husband. People say they are a power couple, Antara Mrityunjay Roy has a family people dream of- a loving husband, filial sons if only they knew if only. She was drowning in her guilt when her younger son voice made her come out of her thoughts.

He was talking about his saviour girl. She wondered who is she, who can make her son talk that much about herself just like the same when his older son first time told her about that girl.

Of course, if only she knew....

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MJ looks at girl who has followed him in the study his son’s childhood friend Ananya. This girl is always been obedient and has all the qualities as this family’s eldest daughter in law and Rudra’s wife if his eldest son agree he thought as he gestures her to sit.

He asked her about their company’s situation as he knows their company is facing crisis. Of course, he knows that, after all he was the one behind it. And he can’t be blamed after all he have let him do whatever he wants for the last eight years but now Rudra has played enough..

Well, his eldest son is just like him cunning, shrewd, sharp and he had wanted to tell him to come and take his business but that damn boy he would make sure to not even see me, to make him listen is like out of the question. He had always wanted him to follow his footsteps and wanted to see in his eyes himself as his idol. He doesn't think its wrong after all, won't every father wish this from his son. But, everything changed due to that damn girl.

Of course, at this time while thinking he was also listening to Ananya. And what did he just hear, did she said they have finally found investor as well as a writer and he don’t have to worry now.No, this can’t happen...how can Mrityunjay Roy’s calculations fail. He didn’t even hear her telling her she needs to go to the office nor did he see her looking at him with confused eyes. He just gave her a perfunctory nod while thinking about ordering Aamir to investigate about this matter..

Mrityunjay Roy can never lose……

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Okay that the first chapter, I know I didn’t write anything about Rudra and Maya view or their scene but pakka se in the next chapter they will get their entry for sure.

So till I think about their entry and write it bye bye😉….

Edited by Kriyaina - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Awesome update...👏😎

Rishi is lost in love...😆 drowning in love...🤣

Antara is sensible here...

Rudra...I am sad for him...

This MJ...😡

Don't know why but I am getting bad vibes about Ananya.

Who is that girl killed by MJ???

Please continue soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Awesome update...👏😎

Rishi is lost in love...😆 drowning in love...🤣

Antara is sensible here...

Rudra...I am sad for him...

This MJ...😡

Don't know why but I am getting bad vibes about Ananya.

Who is that girl killed by MJ???

Please continue soon...

Thanks for Appreciating it

Why.. Ananya is a good sweet si bestie only...

And about the girl it will known as the story progress..

So do read

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Interesting update👏

The introduction of Ananya, Antara & Mj was good

Who was Rudra's girlfriend

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Interesting update... smiley32 smiley32 smiley32

MJ being the evil, cunning, control-freak one as usual...

Antara is at least sensible here and feels guilty of whatever happened in the past...

Rishi is in love with his saviour...

And Rudra... I am feeling bad for him...


Loved reading it... ❤️

Waiting for the next part... 😊

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