Mayra FF : Twisted tale of Revenge and love Part 2 (Pg3) - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is quite interesting... Loved reading it.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting start👏

Loved Maya & her mom's introduction

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
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That's an amazing start!

Hope you continue soon ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Brilliant... 👏👏

Really looking forward to it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

nice intro.like Durga maa Maya will punish the wrong doers.Maya nandini scene was nice.in the show for nandini's safety she wants her to be in the house itself.I am happy that in your ff Maya doesn't want her mom to confine to the 4 walls of the house.guess rajiv is talking about mj n rudra.wonder who is maya's father in your ff.surprisingly you added pics which were apt for the scenes.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2


Mumbai


“Mumbai, city of dreams where every person has dream small or big from young to adult but in this fast paced life all forget one thing, time which is nobody’s own, today its somebody and later its anybody else” Maya’s VO


Scene opens at gym with a young guy lifting dumb bells with all strength. He is talking on bluetooth with somebody about office nd is revealed to be Rudra Roy, who just recently started his magazine office with his partner Ananya

Ananya : rudra, how much will you do workout yaar I am already tired now


“Bestie, there is always right time for everything and we still have time to finish workout, keep going” he says doing pushups


Ananya have hard time doing exercises and sees him annoyingly.


Rudra : all done, high fi look at you, this small face has turned very pale


Ananya : stop it you don’t care for me anymore, here I am so tired and we have to go at office too so much work is left


Rudra : relax, when you are there why do I need to worry for anything


Ananya : rudra I have almost planned everything for our office but there is little problem


Rudra : what is it (is drinking water)


Ananya : there is a big wall in corridor and small corner, and we might need a huge painting over there to put


Rudra : then get it na whats the problem


Ananya : I have seen so many wall arts but none of them matched to our office decor, and imagine if someday any big celebrity comes how will it look


Rudra : hmm thats really good complication, ananya don’t you think we should find really good artist instead of finding a good painting, the one who can create such wall art and then we also need somebody who can design our magazine covers


Ananya : thats really good plan but its little hard to find such good creative artist and our office is very new to offer them anything


Rudra : don’t worry about that, we can sell our little part of office to the person who can do this work and get one more partnership


Ananya : lets see, I will do some research and find out don’t worry now lets go I am starving


Rudra : come today I will take you for special breakfast


Later Rudra and Ananya gives advertisement in social media for very talented artist

Kolkata


Big office


Maya is one of the most popular and creative art designer who owns her own big art gallery consisting of paintings, wall arts and make covers for books, magazines


Rajiv : good morning boss


Maya : yes, come in what have you brought for me today (works on her computer)


Rajiv : guess what your next art exhibition location is


Maya : rajiv, the one who itself is riddle should not be questioned about guessing, Mumbai


Rajiv : sorry to insult your intelligence, yes your next conference is in Mumbai next week, time has come finally Maya for first move, right


Maya : wrong, first move should always be from opponents to know their technique, and I will make sure we don’t lose this chance


Rajiv shows advertisement Rudra published to make giant wall art for his office.


Maya : book my tickets to Mumbai, I will go tomorrow itself


Rajiv : but conference is next week right (she stares at him) okay I got it, I know I am genius


“Maya’s plan is only known to Maya, not so easily Rajiv because this time tables have turned, now pawns will be mine and defeat would be them” She sees the ad with her smirk


Maya walks around her office seeing people working extremely hard to bring her gallery rise on top. Once upon a while she was same young, chirpy type of girl who loved chatting, hanging out but an unexpected storm wiped away all her innocence and smile in one moment.


Flashes of Maya when she was around 5 and playing with her 3 years old sister on swing


Rajiv : maya where are you lost


Maya : nothing, childhood memories are supposed to be the best past but some bitter memories turn into nightmare, life is so weird na


Rajiv : but you cannot be weak so easily, I won’t let you become one, and believe me if god wants someday you will find a path of love waiting


Maya : no, I won’t ever let love come in my way neither I would let anybody stand in between but yes I spin such web of revenge everything would flow in water like pieces, only ashes would be left


Mumbai


Rudra comes back home during lunch only to meet his mother but finds her consuming pills

Antara : rudra please


Rudra : how low you make me feel mom, that inspite of me with you, still you need support of this pills why mom


Antara : those make me feel better, you know I don’t like to trouble you for anything


Rudra (holds her hands) : why are you lying to yourself? just leave everything, I am with you


Antara : I can’t leave, its not easy for me to break relations, rudra for my sake please attend party in evening (pleads him)


Rudra : fine but remember one thing I don’t believe in forced relations ever so please don’t ask me to forgive him


Antara : he is your father rudra, and who does not make mistakes


Rudra (shouts): if it was mistake I would have forgiven in a moment but he did sin that only selfish person can do, and rudra Roy can forgive mistake one time but not backstabbers at any cost


Antara : can’t you forget past once and move on in life thinking that chapter never came in your life


Rudra : no mom, I don’t have big heart like you and the day you stand for yourself I will walk with you (leaves angrily)


Other side maya has put pictures of Roy family on projector

“Mj Roy, you are fond of playing games and I am fond of turning tables. Always use your enemies tactics to give them proper loss. Now matter how sinner is father but for his child he is savior. Your pain of being away from son is big weapon for me and I will use it as trident to end your evilness. See your soon Mr Roy” Maya stands between Mj and Rudra picture holding knife


In evening Maya returns home and finds her mom has left for party


Rajiv : maya where is aunty


Maya : she went to club party, I insisted her so much


Rajiv : well it’s good, but my hunger (pouts) I will die starving


Maya : don’t worry I would set your funeral grandly promise


Rajiv : really, maya I have no rush in dying okay and yes I am coming with you to Mumbai


Maya : not at all I need somebody here with mom and right now I trust nobody other than you


Rajiv : but you let aunty go out everywhere then what’s the fear


Maya : she is my strength but also weakness and I can’t let my enemies eye on this, please you stay here


Rajiv : fine but please take care of yourself and be in my touch


Maya : thank you Rajiv for everything, god took away sister but gave brother in return


Rajiv ; then soon please find Bhabhi for this brother


Maya : first mend yourself and then dream of marriage, poor girl who will be your lover


Mumbai


Ananya : rudra you are joking seriously?


Rudra : Ananya I feel so bad for the guy who would dare to love you, poor boy won’t know how hammer are you


Ananya : the day I stop boring you then you will understand me, stupid yaar please rudra tell papa I don’t want to marry anybody right now until we reach our goal


Rudra : okay fine I will talk to uncle , did any response came about our ad


Ananya : not yet but let’s wait for few days, next week there is a big art exhibition and who knows our search will be finished


Rudra : lets hope for the best

Precap


Mayra unique meeting


Mj entry

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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Interesting one... Loved reading it.

Loved Rudra's dialogues to his mother and his scenes with Ananya...

Also loved Maya's scenes with Rajeev...

Waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Interesting update👏

Loved Rudra's moment with his mom & Ananya😊

Maya & Rajiv's moment was nice😊

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
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rudra ananya friendship is cute .I hope their search for a good artist will reach Maya.is Maya rajiv's boss?I really loved how rajiv cares for maya.how he told her not to be weak n he won't let her be like that n if God wishes she will find love was lovely.ananya telling rudra that when she stops boring him he will understand her was nice.rudra asking antara that though he he is near her still she wants tablets was painful.I liked rudra saying that if it was a mistake he would have forgiven mj but what he did was sin.wonder what he did to Maya.i loved Maya saying that though she lost her sister God gave her a brother like rajiv.rajiv telling her to find a bhabhi was cute.hope he will get love.Maya saying now pawns will be mine n defeat would be them was superb

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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story is getting interesting

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