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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AbnerFernandes
The whole one shot was so beautiful 😉

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Meeph
Uff, this OS made my boring weekend
Loved it

Haha thanks! I'm so glad I could bust some of your weekend boredom 😆

Weekends do seem to drag without BP these days!

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Oh my heart!!!! What an absolutely fabulous OS yarr! 👏
I loved every bit of it... ❤️ So well written.. Such a beautiful (and our wishful😉) insight in Zoya's head... ❤️
The way you described each and every thing, it was fantastic...
I was glad to read about Zoya's frustration at being dominated by the males in her life! That was soo true... Thank God you touched that important aspect of her life and why she felt comfortable with Adi... it was because she thought that at least he would not try to dominate her and take life decisions for her!!😛
So all in all, it was a wonderful update, Kiran...❤️ Please do write more on AdiYa.. It would be immense pleasure to read more of your work..😊⭐️

Thank you so much Ayesha for you kind words! 🤗

I so so want to see some of Zoya's perspective in the show! I'm sure it's coming though so I guess we just have to be patient...

Yes, poor Zoya has always been wrapped in cotton wool by the men in her life...never letting her carve out an identity of her own. Waseem is so desperate to get her married, as if she won't be able to function without a man taking care of her. That's why I always loved that Adi was constantly challenging Zoya to get out of her comfort zone and making her a stronger person.

I promise I will write whenever inspiration strikes! 😃

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Kiki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .MooN.
I Loved This Piece .. Amazing 👏
I could literally visualise everything playing in front of me. Most importantly you brought forth Zoya's inner self of what it is when it comes to Adi.
You Rocked 👏

Do write more OS'es...

Thank you so much for your encouraging words! 😃

I thought it was high time that we got a glimpse into Zoya's mind...and if the writers won't oblige us, then we will take matters into our own hands 😆

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Kiki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: alizia_malik
ohh! This gave my heart much needed peace.😳 I was being so restless with track and previews and the promos😵

But this OS was just so so so beautiful👏. You created magic with your words❤️ and i totally could imagine each and every word uttered by Adiya. I want something like this to happen in show and if it didn't happen then I am going to add this Os as a much needed chapter in my Adiya story.

The way you described Zoya's side and you did give importance to each and every question going through fan's mind.I loved it and i love this Zoya.❤️ I can relate with this Zoya and fall in love with again. I want this Zoya abck in show who is still sweet,pure,unselfish but a force to reckon with.

Do keep writing more on Adiya and PM me. Thankyou for giving us this... that too at the time when everyone's enthusiasm is down.

Wow Alizia, thank you so much for your wonderful words of appreciation! 🤗

I completely understand...the whole fandom is in a state of dissatisfaction at the moment 😕

But I've always tried to look for the silver lining and the negativity was getting me a bit down so I figured I would write this to make myself feel better...but I'm so glad that it gave you some sukoon as well 😆

Honestly, the initial character sketch of Aditya and Zoya was so strong, that it is forever etched in my heart and I will always remember them like that, so even if ]their characters do waver from this in the show sometimes, I have faith that eventually they will be brought back on track. And in the meantime...we can keep writing our own stories that are more in line with the AdiYa that we know and love ❤️

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Kiki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Aaliya_Fizz
Wow magical...I hope its not the ending👍🏼
I felt like I am watching last epi of Bepannaah🤪

Thank you dear 😃

Oh no I definitely wouldn't want this to be the end...I want so much more from AdiYa after marriage/confession 😆

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Kiki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: hriti713
Love it! ❤️
There are so many confession OSs written... I really wish the CVs take ideas from our forum 😛

Thank you!! 😃

We have so many talented writers on this forum! If CVs were to ever peek in, they would find an abundance of amazing ideas! 😆

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Kiki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jumz86
Kiran, this is AWESOME! Can you email this to the writers some how? :p. If this ends up in the show, i would be so happy. Right now the writers seem to have stopped caring about what they flush out of that writing room. With fans like us and stars like JenShad, they really ought to be fired for the type of writing they are producing

Thank you so much Jumzy!! ❤️

Ahahaha if only they would come and get their ideas from here...we would all be so happy. But they have already given us JenShad in the form of AdiYa, and for that, I will be forever grateful - because now at least we can imagine and write endless scenarios for them whenever we are not satisfied with what they show 😆

P.s. this story would have been sooo much longer but when I realised how long it was getting and that it was 3am in the morning, I kind of just rushed into the confession at the end. Probably should have made it a TS or SS, but knowing me I never would have ended up finishing it :P

Edited by ..wanderlust.. - 6 years ago

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Kiki

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Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AdorableTrouble
If only... *Sigh*
Beautiful, beautifully written. Finally someone who expressed the Zoya side of things, in a way that they're believable, and completely acceptable! Something that goes with her character without making her too dense (God, CVs!).

Wonderful confession. Leaves a smile on the face :)
What a lovely surprise to start my day with!
Thank you!

Love,
AT.

Thank you AT! I really appreciate your comments and I'm so glad you enjoyed it 😊

This is the Zoya that we all know and love. I have faith that the CVs will eventually bring her back to us...I guess they have to drag things out for a bit. It's just annoying that in the process of doing that, the characters lose some of that essence that we so love. But...I shall remain positive and keep loving our wonderful JenShad/AdiYa! ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Read this hours before but got time to comment now only & it had to be done because you deserve a comment 😊

From the beginning there was the connectivity of one & one combined together for Zoya to call out Arshad's name & look for him. Made sense well & ofc Adi was bound to feel bad & miserable. Him distancing away from Zoya's life under the said circumstances made practical sense & that's what almost all of us want right? Letting Zoya come to terms with her deep feelings for Adi? 😊 Her rejection of the proposal was obviously the best part & her insecurity with Adi's current behavior made me feel 'Aww..' 😳

Zoya's determination to talk out the issues with Adi, walking inside Hooda house & questioning boy making him literally go numb were the best. That confession of Zoya's without even admitting the 'I Love You' was surprisingly nice (though she didn't directly say it there 😆) & finally, their acceptance of each other was the cherry on the cake!

This was so nice & sweet & well, do write more on AdiYa + great work again 👏

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