A Dark AdiYa FF- Marked! Part 2 Updated on Page 6

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

😉 now this is the ending this story needed well done!

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Part 2

Lovely part...

he hurt her so much just because of her abbu's mistake and she still forgave him yet he left her after their marriage...what love+anger+possession does to you...Adi is the clear example of that...

loved how Zoya kidnapped him and resolved their issues...

Once Adi knew the truth, it was obvious that he would be remorseful but am glad Zoya got him back...

they got their third chance...

beautiful ending to this painful and emotional story...

kudos to u Doc!!

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Thanks for pm.

I'm glad you decided to do another part. I didn't think you would.

Your writing is amazing. It's one of the best i have read ever

She did to him what he did to her. He hurt her so much and still.managed to forgive him. Adi does everything spontaneously and thinks after. It's a fab story you captured both of them so well.

Please do write more when you do plz.pm.

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Shafaq

@Shaf17

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Wow this was so amazingly written lobed it. I have read all ur one shots and I love all of them. Such a big fan of ur work. Thanx for giving us a 2nd part for this it was beautiful

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: alizia_malik
Finally i got some time and read it.

Now coming to the part.
Loved it a lot!!
liked how you started with present and then took a dive in flashbacks.Narrative was so good. I find it sexy when a girl took a a charge 😳😆😆 Though i was shifting a lot from Adi-Zoya frame to Maya-Sahir frame😆😆😆 Nonetheless i loved this piece a lot. I liked how the imagination was wild but the scenes were subtle and sexy enough, not over the top. I don't like much depth exploration of sexual scenes and prefer to be left to reader's imagination.Your's was the perfect blend.

Ayesha you did so good here.. and this type of story is not everyone's cup of tea. 👏

P.S Whenever you write other stories do PM me.😃

Heyyy budddy..Thank you so much for taking out time to read this 2nd part... I am soo glad that you liked it... 😃

I did take inspiration from Sahir-Maya too... 😆😆 See, Adi-Zoya are sooo nice that its really hard to imagine them in a crazy, angry kind of role... Sahir was not as savage as Adi was, in this ff. though... 😆 Also, Maya was not as lenient as Zoya was here..😆

I have written extremely sexual content with details in other fanfics... but I myself dont really enjoy the deep exploration of such scenes... I prefer writing about emotions...and I place more value on nuances and expressions rather than the hot stuff... 😃 Besides, I guess its the demand of the story. I once heard a famous author saying that the writer does not take the story forward... Its the story that itself takes the writer ahead! And I absolutely agree with this. Some stories need that kind of in-depth sexual scenes to show something about the couple doing them... while in some cases, a superficial mention is enough... 😊 In this story... well... I felt that there was a need for some exploration...not too much...but not too little either... As you said, it was a blend. I am glad you liked it... ❤️

I will send you a buddy request to remember to PM you next time also... 👍🏼

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ..wanderlust..
YAY! I'm so so happy you did a second part!
This part was just as amazing as the first! YASSS RETRIBUTION! I'm so glad that Adi paid for what he did and Zoya was so badass!
Fabulous update Ayesha and thank you so much for the PM - please always let me know when you write a story, it's always a pleasure reading your work 😃

p.s. Mere Mehboob is one of my all time favourite songs! Was so happy that you used it in your story!

heyyy buddyy... 😃 Thank you soo much yar... I am soo happy that you liked the 2nd part also... 😳

Hahahha... Zoya was a little bit of Maya here...i guess... 😳 I liked her too... but she could not stay angry with Aditya for long... typical Zoya.. ❤️

I will in sha Allah try to remember to PM you next time also... when I write something... I am a little forgetful though... 😕 👍🏼

Thank you soo much for so much love and praise... ❤️

P.S. Mere mehboob is my all time favrt. too! 😃

Edited by Doc.love - 7 years ago

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: AbnerFernandes
Ayesha ji too good!

Thank you Thank you ji.. 😳😃

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: jaditi346
You are one hell amazing writer bro.
Hotness level ufff...i was actually picturing whole scene.
Please make another mature one short or story, anything would work. We cannot witness these intimate scenes in show but here we can..

Heyyy yar.. thanks a lot for liking my work so much... 😳😃 It really means a lot... 😊

I will definitely try to write something new too... maybe explore some new genre... different from my usual sweet, emotional ones and from this dark one... Lets see... 😊