A Dark AdiYa FF- Marked! Part 2 Updated on Page 6

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
😉 now this is the ending this story needed well done!

😉 Thank you so much buddy! I am so glad that you feel good about this update... 😳⭐️

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Part 2
Lovely part...
he hurt her so much just because of her abbu's mistake and she still forgave him yet he left her after their marriage...what love+anger+possession does to you...Adi is the clear example of that...
loved how Zoya kidnapped him and resolved their issues...
Once Adi knew the truth, it was obvious that he would be remorseful but am glad Zoya got him back...
they got their third chance...
beautiful ending to this painful and emotional story...
kudos to u Doc!!

Heyyy Sahiba... 😊 Thanks a lot yar for your beautiful analysis and comments... ❤️❤️

Its true actually... Love+Anger+Possessiveness+Misunderstanding+Impulsive nature = Deadly Mixture! 😆😆 Here, Aditya ka tou ishq mien dimagh kharab ho gaya tha...

Thank God Zoya took little bit revenge but didnt go too far... I mean... she at least tried to resolve everything... 😃

I am really glad that you liked it..

Oh and in one of your previous comments, you asked me if you can call me doc...? Of course you may, buddy... ❤️ You may call me Ayesha too, if you wish... I am both anyway...Doc, as well as Ayesha... 😃⭐️

Take care buddy.. ❤️

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sezo
Thanks for pm.
I'm glad you decided to do another part. I didn't think you would.

Your writing is amazing. It's one of the best i have read ever

She did to him what he did to her. He hurt her so much and still.managed to forgive him. Adi does everything spontaneously and thinks after. It's a fab story you captured both of them so well.

Please do write more when you do plz.pm.

Heyy buddy... Thank you soo much for keeping hopes with me and I am glad that I did not disappoint you.. 😳😃

Yes... Adi was crazy in love... and impulsive as ever...

Zoya did get angry...she did take revenge too but she didnt go as far as Adi had gone... Besides, she did make him come around eventually... 😉😆

I will surely try to PM you if I write something new... 👍🏼

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Shaf17
Wow this was so amazingly written lobed it. I have read all ur one shots and I love all of them. Such a big fan of ur work. Thanx for giving us a 2nd part for this it was beautiful

Heyy dear... 😃 I am really happy to hear that you like my work so much... 😳 Thank you yar... for all your love and beautiful comments... ❤️

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik
Loved reading it, there was so much pain, love, Intensity in this story :) Amazingly written

Heyy buddy... 😃 Thanks a lot for liking my story and for your beautiful comment... ⭐️😊

I am glad you liked it... ⭐️

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Oh my god AYESHA...YOU KILLED IT MAN!

When it is I dark and matured I was like "Ok, it would be dark and matured, one shot, Zoya and Adi will have some time and so on " But after reading part one it felt like you have not only written it mature but also it had a BEAUTIFUL revenge story that made me realize that now the real Bepannaah story would feel "fika".

You also changed Aditiya in part one, that suited damn right. He was also playing piano and singing ❤️ I don't know why many didn't liked the new ADI.😕

And the second part, personally I really want to thank all those who requested to give a closer. The new bad girl Zoya , Adi helpless as pilot 😳 (thank god is sab ke bich bhi Zoya ZoSh events mai or Adi pilot hai) and the BDSM part ☺️

Again I have to say Ayesha the combination seemed too great, Aditiya being too revengeful , Zoya helpless but at the end of the day they are too much in love WOW! mind blowing!

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: nancy505

Oh my god AYESHA...YOU KILLED IT MAN!

When it is I dark and matured I was like "Ok, it would be dark and matured, one shot, Zoya and Adi will have some time and so on " But after reading part one it felt like you have not only written it mature but also it had a BEAUTIFUL revenge story that made me realize that now the real Bepannaah story would feel "fika".
You also changed Aditiya in part one, that suited damn right. He was also playing piano and singing ❤️ I don't know why many didn't liked the new ADI.😕

And the second part, personally I really want to thank all those who requested to give a closer. The new bad girl Zoya , Adi helpless as pilot 😳 (thank god is sab ke bich bhi Zoya ZoSh events mai or Adi pilot hai) and the BDSM part ☺️

Again I have to say Ayesha the combination seemed too great, Aditiya being too revengeful , Zoya helpless but at the end of the day they are too much in love WOW! mind blowing!

Heyyya Nannncyyy!!!! 😃😃

Aa galay lag ja pehle tou... 🤗😆😆

Thank you so much yaar ke tumne padha aur itna accha comment kia... 😳 Love you bro... ❤️

Savage Adi in part 1 was very strong and different... I guess iss liye shayad loagon ko accha na laga ho? It was very difficult for myself to create him... because we all know Aditya Hooda from the show and he is nowhere this crazy... Woh jab shadeed ghum mien bhi tha, aur Zoya ki naak mien damm ker ke rakhta tha...tabb bhi he never actually harmed Zoya in any way... Aur physically tou kabhi bhi nahi... Zoya has slapped him twice( both times he deserved! 😆) But he never ever raised a finger on Zoya... tou woh Adi aur yeh mere part 1 wala Adi... zameeen asmaan ka farq tha bro... 😆😆 Maybe thats why people could not relate to him... 😊

Lol... I am also happy that at least I took Adi back to his original profession! 😆😆 The cvs have forgotten to send him back to pilot-giri as it seems these days! 😃

BDSM... YAAAR! 🤣 Do you remember our discussions in the rlhn forum...about chhote thakur sa outside the redroom of christian grey, shouting, "Majoo aagiyo"? 🤣 Pata nahi when I think about BDSM now, this memory makes me laugh out loud! 😃

But I am really happy that you took out time to come and read my ff... 😳❤️ Thank you soo much my dearest friend...

Lots of love to you... 🤗

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Prizi
loved it dear

Thanks a lot buddy... 😳😃

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

The tables have turned and in part 2 Zoya is the one who is being the dom! Loved this little retribution that she had planned for him. This part was, like you said, heavy on emotions and I thought it was a good balance. Loved reading how everything came to a nice culmination.

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rashuaq

@rashuaq

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Seems my wish came true.. I so wanted to read a dark story on these two..brilliant.. you write so amazingly well... m actually looking forward to read some more stories/fiction written by you... please do keep up such grt work..😊

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