A Dark AdiYa FF- Marked! Part 2 Updated on Page 6

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Wow! Wat a brilliant writing👏👏

I just loved the way u described background👏

The way u portrayed zoya to remember her FBs through mirror

Loved the dark side of aditya.. His pain his concerned😭

Oops wat a big MU..

Plzz make it SS... Would love to read it further...

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alizia_malik

@alizia_malik

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

wow!! You just created a masterpiece. It was so awesome and the way you presented all the scenes.. specially the beginning one of zoya and the mirror. LOved it completely❤️

It was hard to imagine AdiYa in this scenario but i liked them in different setting. Do continue.😃

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: cloudcaverns
This was intense. I have 'marked' this as one of my favourite stories. Please do continue and thank you for bringing such an intense Adiya.

Heyyy buddy... 😃 Thank you so much for 'marking' my OS amongst your favorites! 😃

Love you, friend...❤️

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jaditi346
Superbbb man

Thank you sooo much bro...❤️😃

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Carry

@Doc.love

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: itznimi003
Wow! Wat a brilliant writing 👏👏
I just loved the way u described background👏
The way u portrayed zoya to remember her FBs through mirror
Loved the dark side of aditya.. His pain his concerned😭
Oops wat a big MU..
Plzz make it SS... Would love to read it further...

Hiii Nimi... 😃 thanks a lot yar for your kind words and your analysis...⭐️😊

I knowww.. the MU...But dont worry, Zoya will make him hers again... because the Zoya in MY mind is more intelligent and smart than the real Zoya of the show...😛

I cant promise...but i will try to continue if time allows...😊

You are new in this forum.. If you would like to read my previous AdiYa one shots, the links are given in the beginning of this one. You can find them in the author's note...😳😊

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hiii Nimi... 😃 thanks a lot yar for your kind words and your analysis...⭐️😊
I knowww.. the MU...But dont worry, Zoya will make him hers again... because the Zoya in MY mind is more intelligent and smart than the real Zoya of the show...😛
I cant promise...but i will try to continue if time allows...😊
You are new in this forum.. If you would like to read my previous AdiYa one shots, the links are given in the beginning of this one. You can find them in the author's note...😳😊

will surely love to read it❤️

@bold thankGod she is smart and intelligent unlike real one😆

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: alizia_malik
wow!! You just created a masterpiece. It was so awesome and the way you presented all the scenes.. specially the beginning one of zoya and the mirror. LOved it completely ❤️
It was hard to imagine AdiYa in this scenario but i liked them in different setting. Do continue.😃

Heyy buddy... thank you soo much yar...😃⭐️⭐️ Your comments mean a lot to me..

I had a small inspiration from an ff written on Sahir Azim Chaudhary in the Humsafars forum by a person named Neemsundari. Sahir is a very strong character and putting Aditya in that kind of frame was very difficult. Plus Sahir was never THIS kind of savage. (Sahir was played by Harshad Chopda-if you havent watched that show..😳)

Then I had an inspiration from a Pakistani show character, Bashar, from the show called Bashar Momin. Bashar was savage... but again, putting Aditya in that kind of frame was really hard... plus even Bashar was not this kind of kinky and wild! 😆😆

So after a lot of thought, I finally ended up making my Aditya almost crazy in love! 😆😆 bechara...