An AdiYa OS- Bepannah Pyar! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Heyyy buddy... 😃 Thank you for liking both my write ups... ❤️

I am an avid reader too.. Besides that, i review books and write stories. Just a couple of months back, I finished my 1st novel... its on Wattpad, if you are interested in the life of someone who has been struck with massive tragedy and suffers from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. The story is about her journey from hopelessness and tragedy to hope and happiness, through some paranormal means.. 😳😆 Its name is Beyond The Realms...and you can find it in my Wattpad Profile link which is given in my signature. 😊 If you decide to read it, do let me know about your reviews about it too...because I am in its editing phase...

Yes I am a Muslim... and married too, so have been through the process of Nikkah...hence i know all the details... 😃

The process of Nikkah involves The Sermon, the acceptance from groom and bride verbally and then signing the contract and a joint prayer... In this Nikkah ceremony, the acceptance portion was not done yet...so Zoya and Arshad couldnt get married. Uss se pehle hi Zoya behosh hogai thy..😆

Originally posted by: FaizaAndalibC

Amazing OS👏

Originally posted by: IFLove

Ayesha, this is the first fiction I read in Bepannaah forum. N guess what, my first reason to give it a try was u. I wanted to see how the one who considers her writing immature n childish write stories. N u r too good, dude! This was such a good OS.

Zoya's sub-conscious thoughts were so cute n funny...hum bhi marr gaye hain😆 (Tell me, that was Zoya or Ayesha?😉)

N Waseem toh bada he naram-dil nikla tumhare khayaalo mein! Adi se maafi n all I can't expect from him...nakchadha banke he manzoori dega wo AdiYa k nikaah ko😆

Btw, how could u even write about the death of ur Adi Boyi!!!😭 That was so heart-wrenching to even read.

N doctor sahiba made sure to have a final confession in the hospital room!😉

Next time, write an OS where Zoya stands up for herself n she's really strong n bold!😳

Originally posted by: Nimshad

Luvd this os

Wonderful

Originally posted by: castlebones

You are welcome, they were lovely. Books are not just a mean of entertainment for me, they are different Worlds, just waiting for us to step into, leaving the reality behind. They are much MUCH better than any movie.

What's your favorite genre? Mine is detective fiction.

Wow! You review books and write stories. That's so cool and I'm so jealous. Actually I'm jealous of all the good writers because I can never find the right words to express my feelings or to pen down my thoughts.

Btw, I think I found your story- Beyond the Realms by Doc_Ash, right? I'll definitely read it.

Me too. A Muslim and married but I can hardly remember the rituals, I was too much of a nervous mess.

Originally posted by: vandana21

Loved Loved Loved this ..I hope something like this happens!! Zoya is madly in love with Aditya ..but she's just in denial!!

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Heyyy Anujaaa my friend... 😃 I am soo glad that you liked my OS..

Wasim is nakchada..he will remain that way... but seeing Zoya almost dead for Aditya, that thawed him a little. I do hope that he will ask for forgiveness for misunderstanding Adi one day... 😛

Zoya's subconscious thoughts were cute...i agree... but I found them a little poignant too. I mean she was sooo fed up of listening to others, and so unwilling to live in a world without Adi...that she was feeling happy on the thought of her own death... 😕 Bechari...

I have loved Zoya a lot...and I have kept full faith in her sensibilities and judgement. I have tried to find reasons for her actions...and then justify them also.. but since yesterday, I am unable to comprehend her. 😕 I cant understand her stance...what shes doing, I dont agree with it... so i guess it will be difficult to now write on her strength and bold avtar unless I start connecting with her again... 😕

I will try to write something though... it might be on Adi only... 😳

Ohh i cant even think to kill my Adi boyii... But Zoya needed that kind of shock... 😆 She needs it in the show also..i believe... 😛