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Isha

@tereliyex

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

What a beautiful OS <333
Those dialogues are so heartfelt
"Pyar aur mohobbat main utna farq hai jitna Yash aur Adi main farq hai" is my favorite

This was written so beautifully.
Please write more I love reading fanfics on the current track and BP doesn't have too many :/

Lovely once again

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Awesome os

Beautifully penned

Loved it to the core ❤️

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Sukha hai yeh mosaam pyar ke bina,

Tumahare bepanah pyar neh aie jahan ko bhiga dia...

What I am trying to say is, though I know that what ever is happening is logical but, I am feeling bad for Aditiya. Bechara ka kya yeh hi dosh hai ki usko pehle pyaar hua hai? Dono ko ek sath nahi ho sakta tha?

I know there is no point to discuss about it cause Aditiya babu ko pehle pyar ho gaya😭, I am happy and sad,in the same time.

What I am saying! I came here to talk about your OS and I am talking about serial. So first of all I am glad that you have written such a beautiful OS in such a short time.

Now about the story, ZOYA is in love with ADI, isse acha or kya ho sakta hai😳

Papa Siddique melted after seeing Zoya, jo hama is janam mai dikhne ko milga yah nahi yeh toh Khuda hi jane.

Strong Adi! Serial wala Adi toh tutke bikhar jata Zoya ke invitaion pakar.

At last ,pyaar ka izhar!So beautiful. Love you Ash, I loved it.Especially those dialouges❤️

P.S. Tumhare speed main serial likha jata toh 15 episode se jada episode nahi milta 😆 I guess its pak serial effect. But I love high speed drama.

Again P.S. Sorry for late reply Ayesha.

Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago

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geet0910

@geet0910

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Simply fantastic OS. Words fall short to praise this bful one shot. Hope something dramatic like this happens in the show too😆 loved it so much. Pls keep writing more.

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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Thank you soo much Anushka... 😃❤️
Yes yes yes i was in the RLHN forum... and I wrote a couple of DiRa one shots too... 😃 I still have DiRa gif as my siggie and Ratan's dp... 😆😆
I will in sha Allah write more on AdiYa... 😊 I wrote one more OS on them and you may find its link in one of the above comments... If you would like to read it..that is.. 😊

They were my fav too!

I watched it due to Teju but then Dira!😳

I have read all your OS dear! Here also & there also!😊

And your OS are simply awesome.

Edited by LoveAnushka - 7 years ago