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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi everyone I am new to this forum. I wanted to write a short TS on Bepannaah current track.

So this story starts from the time when Waseem decides that Zoya and Arshad will get married by hook or crook. and wedding will happen within 2 days.

Waseem : Zoya aapko ye shadi karni padhegi warna aap hamara mara hua mooh dekhengi..

Zoya : Lekin...Abbu

Waseem: hame kuch nahi sunna agar iss bar aap hamare khilaf gayi toh samajh lena ki aapke abbu aapke kiye marchuke hai

Zoya agrees to marry Arshad as she don't have any other choice..

She calls adi in the middle of the night

Adi picks up the call and he can read his silence

A: Zoya kya hua

Z : wipes her tear and says kuch nahi Aditya

A : asks again Kuch toh hua hai zoya please bathao mujhe kya hua

Z : Jo galthi humne apne past mein ki uss galti ki saza abbu hame aaj de rahe hai. Abbu chahthe hai ki hum Arshad se shadi karle warna woh hamse apna saara rishtha thod lenge..

A 's heart is broken and he can feel Zoya's pain more than his

A: with the broken voice toh tumne kya decide kiya hai

Z: decision toh ho chuka hai aditya sirf hame sare function mein muskurana hai ye dikhane ke liye ke hum iss shadi se kush hain..

Suddenly zoya hears some voice and cuts the call

A is broken to hear this news

Z drops a message to adi in which she has written

"Thanks for being with me always"

A is broken more after reading the text.

A decides to support zoya in her decision as he want to fulfil his responsibilty as a friend. He neither understood pooja nor he supported her when she fell in love. So this time he want to be a good friend.

So he decides to participate in their wedding rituals

He asks Waseem that he want to participate in the wedding ritual as a friend Waseem agrees as he can see adi in pain.

A starts involving himself in decorations and all

Suddenly he hears Arshad talking over the phone

Arshad : Patha hai mujhe kya karna hai Shaadi ke badh hi main usse aisa poison dunga jisse koi doctor thak patha na laga paye ki ye natural death thi ya murder tha..

A is shocked

Arshad: Aur mauth ke baadh zoya ki saari property meri aur koi mujhe crorepathi banne se rok nahi payega

A thought to expose him infront of everyone

A goes in the function where everyone are dancing he screams loudly to grab everyone's attention

People around him started staring at him

A : Janab Arshad Habibi ek aisa insaan hai jo zoya ke property ke liye usse shadi karna chahtha hai before he could say anything else waseem comes and slaps him

W : Thinks this is why he wanted to attend the function to ruin it.

W : Toh isiliye apko rasmo shamil hona tha

A: Uncle aap mujhe galath samaj

W: Galth hum aapko samajh nahi rahe hai aap galath hai janam Adithya Hooda

Z gets tensed and she thinks to handle this situation she has to go against adithya

Z: Adithya aap please yaha se jayiye

A : Lekin Zoya

Z: Maine kaha na aap yaha se jayiye

A: leaves angrily

Arshad is glad to see that people trust him more than adithya

Zoya makes waseem to sit down and tell him to calm down.

and she promises him that Adithya will not interrupt her wedding

W: feels happy and blesses her.

Zoya calls aditya.. Aditya is drunk because the girl whom he loves asked him to leave when he wanted to save her from the one who is hurthing her..
A picks up the call
A: in drunken tone
A: Kya chahiye tumhe ab kyun call kiya mujhe
Z: she tries to explain
A: mujhe kuch nahi sunna tumhe mujhse zyada uss arshad pe yakeen hai na.. main toh tumhara kuch nahi lagtha
Z: Aisa nahi hai aditya
A: Aisa nahi hai toh kaisa hai
Z: Aditya aap mere bath ko samajh nahi rahe
A: Toh samjhaona yar pooja ne bhi yahi kiya usne bhi mujhe nahi samjhaya aur tum bhi yahi bol rahi ho..main koi bhagwan hu jo bina samjhaye samajh jaoonga
Z: thinks he is drunk he will not understand right now its better to cut the call she cuts the call.
A sees that call is disconnected
A: ajeeb duniya hai jab boltha hun samjhao toh sab bhag jathe hai.. pehle pooja ab zoya.. and starts singing "ye duniya.. ye mehfil...mere kaam ki nahi" and starts drinking more.
Z thinks how to expose Arshad.

To be continued..

Please let me know how it was 😊 and please let me know if you want me to continue with the next part😊

Edited by fire_wings - 7 years ago

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Aaliya....

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Posted: 7 years ago

Liked it totally, wish something like this happens in the show too.

Adiya exposing arshad together...

It's very good piece of writing like very realistic one.

Felt like I am actually watching show👍🏼

Continue Soon...

P.s: Welcome To Bepannaah Forum😃

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Aditi Jain

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Posted: 7 years ago

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rangeen titli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliya_Fizz
Liked it totally, wish something like this happens in the show too.
Adiya exposing arshad together...
It's very good piece of writing like very realistic one.
Felt like I am actually watching show👍🏼
Continue Soon...

P.s: Welcome To Bepannaah Forum😃

Thank you 😊

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AbnerFernandes

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Posted: 7 years ago

Bechara Arshad phir se pitega ;)

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rangeen titli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Zoya comes up with a plan and goes to her Abbu's room
Z: Abbu hame aapse kush baath karni hai
W: Boliye beta kya baath hai
Z: Abbu humne socha hai ki hum ab ek nayi zindagi shuru karne wale hai toh hum nahi chahthe ki iss zindagi mein yash ki yadein rahe
W: mathlab.. hum kuch samjhe nahi
Z: Hum ye soch rahe the kyun Zosh events ko aditya ke naam pe likh de
W: Lekin beta
Z: Abbu.. aditya zosh ko sambhal sakthe hai abbu and woh akele insaan hai jinpe hum yakeen kar sakthe hai
W: thinks if thats the cost of seeing her daughter getting married with Arshad he doesnt have problem
W says theek hai beta agar yahi apki ichha hai toh hume isse koi shikayath nahi and blesses her
Z : smirks as she is succeeded in part A of her plan.

A: wonders mujhe zoya samjhana kya chahthi thi.. ye bath mujhe abhi ke abhi samjhna hai.. aur iss bar mein samjhke hi rahunga.. main nahi chahtha ki phir koi mujhe bole ki maine samjha nahi..
😆

Z was about to sleep on her bed Adi enters through window
Z thinks he is thief and gets scared
A: Arre main hoon
Z: aditya aap
A: haan main.. ab bolo kya samjhana chahthi thi
Z: main apko yahin samjhana chahthi thi ki "mujhe ye shadi karni padhegi" after hearing this adi covers his ears saying "Nahi" and drinks more alcohol and looses his senses.
Z: Aditya kya kar rahe hai aap chodiye isse and takes that bottel from his hand and makes him sit on the bed
Z: jo ab hum aapko bol rahe hai dhyan se suniye
A counts his fingers he tries to focus and sees 10 fingers instead of 1
A haa bolo main count karunga jo tum bologi she explains her plan to adi
Z: Adi hame ye natak karna hai ki hum apko sari jaidath de rahe hai aur aap isse lene ki acting karenge
A repeats hame ye natak karna hai and marks it as 1 with his finger.
Z: isse Arshad ka plan flop hoga kyunki unhe lagega ki hamare pass koi jaidath nahi hai
A repeats tumhare pass koi jaidath nahi hai and marks it as two
Z: boliye aditya aap humara sath denge
A: Haan kyun nahi main tumhara sath dunga and he faints
Z: kya kare hum inka and makes him sleep on the bed
A wakes up in the morning and he doesn't remember anything else other than zoya saying hame ye shadi karni padhegi..he feels sad and leaves zoya's house before she wakes up
Z wakes up and sees adi left she thinks he must have gone to prepare himself for her plan.

Marriege function is going on
Z thinks aditya abhi thak aye kyun nahi
Z calls adi
A picks up
A: hello
Z: Kaha hai aap.Kya kaha tha humne aapse
A: Ye ke tumhe Arshad se shadi karni hai in a sad tone
Z: Hey allah aap please jaldhi se yaha aayiye
A: kyun
Z: maine kaha na jaldhi se ayiye zyada sawal match puchiye
A : thinks mujhe kyun bula rahi hai
A reaches Siddiqui house
W gets angry
Z says hamne hi bulaya jo humne kal kaha uske silsile mein bulaya hai
W cools down
Z announces that she is going to give Zosh to aditya as he was her partner she says hum ye bhi janthe hai ki aditya zosh ko apne dilo jaan se sambhalenge
A thinks she is trying to make him happy by giving zosh and thinks iske bajaye tum meri zindagi main aathi toh wahi mere liya kaafi tha
A says mujhe nahi chahiye zoya.. mujhe sirf tumhari kushi chahiye
Z nahi aditya hum chahthi hain ki hum apni zindagi ki nayi shuruwath kare and iske liye yash ke yadein peeche chodne bahuth zaroori hai.
A thinks ye bolo ki mujhse bhi peecha chudwana chahthi ho .. jaise bacche ko chocolate diya jaatha hai mujhe zosh de diya 😆
Z thinks why adi is behaving like this when she has already explained her plan to him.
Z calls Arshad and says i hope aapko bura na lage humne aap se bina puche ye faisla le liya.
Arshad for the sake of people who are staring at him says nahi nahi accha kiya tumne.
Z handovers papers to adi
W asks adi to leave as his work is done
A thinks he shud protect zoya and he calls Arshad and says that he has already filed a police complaint against him if he tries to harm zoya after marriege he will be in jail.
Arshad gets scared.
To be continued..😃

Edited by fire_wings - 7 years ago

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ArshAriya

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice one dear continue soon

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is sooo amazing story love your part 1 and 2 plzz put more parts .

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rangeen titli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Aditya is heart broken he sees property papers that broke his heart even more..
He statred thinking may be zoya loves Arshad that thought itself breaks his heart into millions of pieces..
He decides give it a last try to save zoya from Arshad he calls Arjun and handsover a letter saying that he
cant go to the venue as Waseem will not like it..Arjun tries to console adi,but adi prefers him to go to
Zoya's wedding venue..He also takes promise from arjun that only zoya has the rights to open this letter
and this letter must reach her before her marriage.
Arjun assures him that he will not let anyone else to read this letter other than zoya..
and leaves from there

In siddiqui house everyone are happy arjun calls noor and asks her to meet him outside.
Noor agress she comes out and sees that arjun is standing with a letter
N: Arjun aap yaha..Aditya kaise hai?
A: Noor ab in sab bathon ka waqt nahi hai bhai ne kaha hai ki ye letter Zoya ke pass pahuchna chahiye woh bhi shadi se pehle.
Aur dhyan rahe isse zoya ke alawa koi aur na padhe.
N agrees as even she wants her Appi to live a happy life.

N goes to zoya's room and she sees that her room is crowded. Its impossible to give her the letter to read.
Z starts thinking why Arshad is not reacting after this news. She starts loosing hope and goes to Marriage Venue.
Suddenly light goes off and everyone gets panic and suddenly some one pulls zoya from the marriage venu.

Suddenly a video starts playing in which Arshad is talking to some one on the phone where he is discussing about his current issue.
Arshad: Ab main phas gaya.. Agar main zoya se shadi karunge toh mujhe phooti kaudi thak nahi milegi..Agar hum shadi se mana kar denge toh
zoya ki abbu hame maar dalenge.. agar humne shadi karke zoya ko takleef pahunchaya toh Aditya hame zinda nahi chodega..Ab hum kya kare ye sab tumhara hi idea tha aur ab hum phas chuke hai..

W gets angry and slaps Arshad hard on his face
Z tries to console her dad as she don't want him to loose his temper and it can affect his health as well..

Z: Says hamne tab hi Aditya pe yakeen kar liya tha jab unhone bola ki aap humse property ke liye shadi karna chahthe hai..
Patha hai kyun..Kyunki Hume aditya pe khud se zyada yakeen hai..
Noor feels happy and forgets about the letter.
Noor video calls Arjun and shows him whats happening
Arjun can hear and see everything
Z: Aapko kya laga aapke wajah se hum Aditya ko galth samjhenge ? Uss aditya ko jisne hame jeena seekhaya apne pairo pe khada hona sikhaya..
Jiske wajah se aaj ye Zoya aapke saamne khadi hai woh zinda hai warna hum toh kabka khudh kushi karlethe.

Hearing this Waseem gets shocked

Z: Humne toh apna nass bhi kat liya tha agar Aditya samay pe nahi aathe toh aaj hum yaha khade bhi nahi hothe..Jab aditya ne kaha ki aap paiso ke liye humse shadi kar rahe hai toh humne ek plan banaya apne sare zaidath ko aditya ke naam karneka aur humne sare zosh ke logon ko apke peeche laga diya thaaki aap par nazar rakhi jaaye.. Aur aap pakde gaye..

Suddenly Arshad goes and starts fighting with his cousin it is revealed that she is indeed his wife who was the mastermind of this plan
As arshad has lost money in gambling and they have to return the money which they have borrowed from others..

Suddenly police arrives and takes both of them to jail

Waseem apologizes to Zoya.. Zoya wipes his tears and smiles..

Zoya goes to her room as she is free from all the tension now.
Meanwhile arjun tries to call adi but his phone is unreachable..
Zoya to tries to call Adi but finds his phone unreachable so she thinks he must be busy..
She opens the drawer to keep her wedding ornaments as she wants to get rid of this as soon as possible.
But she finds Adi's lettter instead.
She opens it and she starts reading...A tear drops from her eyes when she reads that "Mera sukoon tum ho Zoya" and "I love you Zoya"..

She does not know how to react as she believes she doesn't deserve love anymore as her naive behavior made her love betray her.
She just consoles her self saying that she doesn't love adi... And she is just feeling bad that adi loves her but she doesn't..

Suddenly Noor gets a call.. Arjun tells her that Adi's phone is unreachable did she completed her task?
Noor :hum toh bhool hi gaye in sab chakkaron mein..rukiya abhi dethe hai and calls Zoya
Z wipes her tears and acts as if nothing happend
N gives her the letter and tells her that Aditya gave this letter to Arjun and Arjun asked me to you.
Padh leejiye isse.

Z with confusion opens the letter..

To be continued...

Edited by fire_wings - 7 years ago