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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#241

Poor zoya.

Now I expected to seen him with another woman maybe Pooja but not this. Or mahi has lied and he was there. You left sich a clif hanger. I can't wait for next part plz do update soon.

Seriously this is way better than the movie.

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frustrated12233

@frustrated12233

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#242

My my!!! I was right!!

Oh it's Soo exciting

Thank u for the update

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#243

Oh my God...I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to comment on previous few updates...I had gotten busy with university work. 😭

Give me a couple hours and I'll have comments ready for each update I missed.

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#244

wow...I expected this

he was lying to her

I am glad that Aditya was with her in this situation...

she is shocked by this...and so many doubts creeping in..what is he doing in mussoorie..he said said so many lies

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#245

Chapter 8

Wow...such a beautiful update 👏

I've run out of words to praise you and your writing but still I'd say this much. YOU ARE THE BEST! AND I SIMPLY LOVE YOUR WORK. ⭐️

Aditya keeps thinking of the bathroom scenes and fascinates about Zoya...dear these are signs of attraction.

Zoya and Aditya are stuck together at least for one another day. Gosh, I know something big is going to happen in these 24 hours.

The sarcastic and taunts Arjun and Zoya send towards each other just shows how comfortable those two have gotten over the period of 48 hours. They can freely talk and sometimes even make fun of each other.

Zoya can't cook? Don't worry dear...if you say with Aditya long enough, you'll learn a lot of things 😉

My favourite character is Ivy. 😆 She is making Adiya do all the couple-y things...and that kiss 😳

It might not be a proper kiss but it still left an impact. Man thanks for putting ideas in my head. Adiya's kiss is the highlight of this update.

Aww Aditya, this is the start of a love story...well the story already started in the flight but this is another chapter to it.

I had a question regarding your writing. I noticed you bold the names when there's a line-break. Does that indicate whose POV we will be reading from?

Thanks a lot for the pm

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#246

Chapter 9

Yet another wonderful update 👏

Again you have penned down every emotion very carefully. Aditya's partial uneasy thoughts on Zoya's boyfriend and the pain of reliving some bad memories were so real. I'll keep all the praises until the end. ⭐️

I can't believe Zoya is still thinking about Yash after 'kissing' Aditya...no please don't regret it. Aditya is literally your future girl

I know something is really fishy with Yash. The lack of texts on Valentines' Day proves he's too 'busy' somewhere with someone else. I'm going to be super angry if he's double-timing her 😡

Ah Aditya heard the conversation? The fun begins now. His newly developed feelings and an unwanted boyfriend is going to be an interesting mix.

Aditya is so awkward with Zoya after the kiss but she seems totally cool about it, well majorly...okay even she is awkward and guilty.

What is Aditya's backstory? This mystery is slowly eating me alive. There seems to be so much that has happened in Aditya's life that he refuses to even think about it. And I'm not talking about his parents. I feel like there's something else that's troubling him.

Zoya is right...it helps to share problems with a stranger. But you are no stranger to Aditya dear.

So...both are drunk 😆 classy way of gathering courage to share problems.

Well Aditya...she's going to find out the truth sooner or later so no point in hiding it from her...

Thanks for the pm dear

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Adiya_fan

@Adiya_fan

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#247

This was so so so beautiful! I just wish Adi decides to stay in her life forever! Can't wait to read more 😊

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Sunshine_kk

@Sunshine_kk

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#248

nice update and very good twist 👏
Waiting for the next update.

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monikagdd

@monikagdd

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#249

My god zoya is heart broken.. and aditya is so understanding and caring..and what is yash hiding?? Hope zoya and aditya fall in love soon..loved the update.

Thanks for the pm dear.