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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -Ishana-
I just love this OS!
Truly made me look forward to the next track. Your writing is absolutely beautiful

Thank you so much for your encouraging words! I can't wait for some beautiful AdiYa moments in the show

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Beautiful One-Shot😊
ABSOLUTELY Loved it❤️
You're an amazing writer😉
Please continue this and pm me😛

Thank you so much! Haha I'm quite the IF novice so will figure out this pm thing as well 😉

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Hey kiki (If that's your nickname 😆) this was so delightful to read. What an insight to their bonding! Aditya & Zoya were feeling something was missing definitely & then, Aditya knew he shouldn't loose this precious girl Zoya who came in to his life as a blessing. I could just visualise how Adi walked towards Zoya to hand the umbrella & their beautiful smiles to each other. Ik the story has it's own track but such a beginning to their love story would have done wonders 😊

Do pm me if you write more...

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sezo
Fabulous. Well written. Made me think this may actually happen in the show

Thank you! Yeah I hope it plays out similar to this but I highly doubt the writers are going to make it this easy for AdiYa. Haha I'll just keep myself content by coming up with my own version 😆

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Bepannahlover24
So beautiful..

Thank you 😊

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
lovely os, hope this happens in show as well, want to see their date!😳

Thank you! I hope the writers don't make us wait too long to see a date scene, even if it is just as friends 😳

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Prizi
lovely os dear
I'm so excited to see how this track going to be unfold

Thank you! Yes I'm super excited to see some beautiful AdiYa moments

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: jumz86
I loved loved loved it. Please please please continue the story. I wanna know everything that happened in the 12 months

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Haha I want to know too 😆...I might actually continue the story if inspiration strikes me 😳

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Kiki

@kiki_kj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Hey kiki (If that's your nickname 😆) this was so delightful to read. What an insight to their bonding! Aditya & Zoya were feeling something was missing definitely & then, Aditya knew he shouldn't loose this precious girl Zoya who came in to his life as a blessing. I could just visualise how Adi walked towards Zoya to hand the umbrella & their beautiful smiles to each other. Ik the story has it's own track but such a beginning to their love story would have done wonders 😊
Do pm me if you write more...

Thank you dear 🤗

Yes call me Kiki 😳

Aditya and Zoya don't realise yet how much they need each other. I think they will need to go through separation to understand this. But when they do realise, it's going to be amazing to watch!

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

This is so beautiful, I donno what to say 👏 and loved the way u have weaved the dialogues. How I wish this is the the same scene we get to see on Monday! I know some of it will be the same though but this was amazing 👏 the words had a beauty of its own that was captivating n would love to read anything else u might have penned. Keep going 👍🏼

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