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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

I was thinking yash was the mad man hehehe. Its RK good one yar. Lovely update.

Haha I love Yash to much:) thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Adiya45

Wow

I am speechless
Already in my bookmarks
Your my 1st favorite writer 😳
Loved it ❤️
Beautifully written
Keep doing more outstanding updates dear
Update soon!😳

Aw! Thank you so much, I think I just teared up a little:))
Youre so kind Shreyu!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Pearl-2710

First of all, thank you so much for the quick update.

I loved it. I really like how the story is going.


You have portrayed Zoya's fear beautifully.
The food thing was really sad! Poor Zoya. I hoped Adi would have heard her when she whispered about not getting any food for 3 days.
Thank you for the dreaming and soothing sequence. I would love it if you give a bit of detail about Adi's feelings too like did he feel her scalp was sore when he massaged it. Would love the details.
But I have another sadistic demand 😃.
I don't know if you seen Saubhagyavati Bhava, but I would love to see Zoya's husband inflicting the kind of torture that Viraj inflict on Jhanvi. Specifically that burning feet with the iron rod or putting her feet in boiling water. (God, something is wrong with me.) 🤔 Just a demand, and then when Aditya asks her about her scars and helps her to heal.

Anyways, I trust you, you are any which ways an amazing writer. Whatever you will do, will be great.

Thanks so much lovely!
I will for sure try to incorporate Adi's feelings, but I have this moment planned that I am waiting for!
I have not (and by that, I am glad I haven't because I would have cried a lot)!
I will also try to add something similar, as requested:)
Thanks for the faith! I hope I will keep impressing you:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

oh god

i seriously hope man like rajveer get their dues
please do continue
bye sumi

I promise he will!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Hollyyy that was intense! I just read both parts, and I'm definitely worried about how Zoya was treated before Adi came along! And Rajveer! Ugh I hate his character (but this forum will never give him a break, eh?) - I love your attention to detail, especially at the end, where he specifically adds crazy while describing his wife, even though he could've simply said, "my wife", he says, "my crazy wife", to fully nail what kind of person he is. Zo's safe with Adi know, but I can't wait to find out how she landed herself in this predicament, how she and Adi will move on from this, how Noor will re-enter in her life (if she does), and if there's an AdVeer showdown in the midst, that'll be the icing on the cake! Update soon! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasleen77

Hollyyy that was intense! I just read both parts, and I'm definitely worried about how Zoya was treated before Adi came along! And Rajveer! Ugh I hate his character (but this forum will never give him a break, eh?) - I love your attention to detail, especially at the end, where he specifically adds crazy while describing his wife, even though he could've simply said, "my wife", he says, "my crazy wife", to fully nail what kind of person he is. Zo's safe with Adi know, but I can't wait to find out how she landed herself in this predicament, how she and Adi will move on from this, how Noor will re-enter in her life (if she does), and if there's an AdVeer showdown in the midst, that'll be the icing on the cake! Update soon! :)

Oh I know, it's only going to get worse:(
I couldnt make Yash the husband, I love him to much haha!
Kudos to the actor who plays Rajveer, hes made Rajveer a very hated man!
Aw thank you, for sure he is a very messed up man!
All of that to come:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
3- Fate's Game-

Zoya jumped at Rajveer's face on the TV "Zoya, I love you, I dont know where you are, but I want you to come home, please" his eyes were teary "Im so sorry Zoya, it was all a mistake"

She stood up slowly, he loved her? He was sorry? She had waited for this moment forever. She knew Adi was in the shower, she could leave now and return to the man she loved. Zoya walked over to the window, pushed it open and climbed out

XXX

Rajveer looked up as he saw Zoya running his way. She paused before him, breathless "I love you to, im so sorry I left" she hugged him tightly. The entire police force cheering around them. Her eyes shut as he kissed her forehead

"I was so worried about you Zoya" he cupped her cheeks, looking down at her

She smiled back up at him "I knew, I knew you loved me"

He nodded "Lets go home"

XXX

Adi pushed his hands through his hair "You dont get it Arjun, I could have saved her, but she left and now I may not find her again, what if this man takes it to far and kills her, I will never forgive myself"

Noor sat behind him, rubbing his back "Jaayth Ji, its okay we will find this woman, but first, what was her name"

Adi looked up "Zoya"

Noor froze, pulling her hand back, no, no it couldnt be her Zoya, could it? It had been so long since she had even seen Zoya, but would Rajveer really hurt her? "Allah Mian, kaise taqdeer hai yeh" she turned around

"Bhai, Zoya is the name of Noor's older sister, did she say who she was married to"

Adi sighed "A commissioner, I think"

Noor stood up, gasping "Rajveer, Rajveer is hurting my Aapi"

XXX

Rajveer smiled at Zoya, before slamming the door and throwing her to the floor "Is this how you repay my kindness, by running away, huh"

Zoya's face paled "But, but, you said you loved me"

Rajveer laughed "Oh Zoya, you crack me up, you didn't think I actually loved you did you"

She gulped, looking away

"Aw" he shook his head "Poor Zoya, I only said it to make you come back home, now if you try and run away again, ill do more than break your hand"

"Break my" she asked confused

He stamped down hard onto her hand, making her scream "Now, go and make my dinner, I had to do all of that by myself, maybe if you make it up to me, ill forgive you" he grabbed her chin "Stupid girl"

XXX

Zoya sat under the shower, her hair was wet, her clothes soaked, she just wanted to forget for a while. She felt stupid, she never should have ran away from Adi, he could have helped her. But her heart had won over her head as usual, now she had nothing left. Zoya knew Rajveer was going away on a business trip, in the morning, maybe she could run again, but this time, she could never go back.

XXX

Zoya leant up, kissing Rajveer's cheek "Goodbye, I packed you some food"

He smiled, hugging her, he gripped her side painfully " Dont even think of running away again Zoya, because I will find you"

She swallowed painfully, her eyes teary "Yes, I wont"

"Good girl" he kissed her cheek, then slammed the door, catching her foot in it, she fell back with a pained yelp

XXX

Zoya looked around as she arrived outside of Adi's house. Was it right to ask him for help again after what she had done? Betraying his trust by running away. Though, she had no other option, if he didnt want to help she would go away alone.

Zoya stopped when she heard voices behind her. Inhaling deeply she turned around to see Adi, his jaw dropped.

"Zoya, you came back"

"I, um, im so sorry I ran away, I made a mistake and I just, im sorry, please I need your help, I have nowhere to go"

"Its okay, I was worried but I get it, before I agree to help you again, you need to promise me that you wont run away again, okay" Adi was concerned for her safety, the fact her hands were behind her back and she was wearing sunglasses when there was no sun to be seen was enough for him to know she had suffered a beating

"I promise, thank you so much, for all your help, I just dont know how to thank you, I feel like such an idiot for running away"

Adi shook his head "Please, stop apologising you are in a very difficult situation, is it okay if I take you somewhere, I have a surprise"

Zoya felt dizzy

"Zoya, I have a surprise for you" Rajveer said sweetly, pulling her into the living room

Zoya glanced over the coffee table to see a woman about her age, her chestnut brown hair was long, curly and she was beautiful.

"This is the woman who is pregnant with my child, since you can't have children"

Zoya trembled "You cheated on me" she sobbed

The woman looked shocked "Raj, you said she knew about this"

Rajveer pulled Zoya forward "Apologise now you bitch, she's ten times better than you, beg for forgiveness"

The woman shook her head again "Raj this isn't necessary"

"I said on your hands and knees" he shouted, shoving her to the floor

Zoya looked up sadly "Sorry, im so sorry, please forgive me"

"I, I dont like surprises, im sorry for leaving, I just" she knelt down "Sorry Adi, I really am"

Adi looked aghast "Zoya, Zoya no, hey you have nothing to be sorry for" he pulled her up slowly "Its a present for you, please come with me"

Zoya lifted her hands "I said im sorry, I dont want a surprise, please"

"Your fingers, did he do this" he wanted to reign in his anger, but he couldnt.

She nodded "It was my fault, if I wouldnt of ran away it wouldnt have happened" she flinched as he picked up her hand, his touch feather light "We need to get this looked at, I promise you, I wont hurt you okay, I just need you to trust me, I know that is hard"

"You promise, promise me please" her voice broke

"I promise Zoya, you can always trust me"

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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Great update!
So Zoya is finally going to meet Noor.

Please update soon this time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Awww... Zoya... broke my heart! If I could physically jump into your story and beat up Rajveer, I would! Just the fact that after all that, she thought that he could love her shows how damaged she is - how much she's been hidden from the outside world that she can't distinguish truth from farce. But I'm glad that she's back to safety with Adi. Also, the sisters are finally going to reunite! I can't wait for Zo's reaction to seeing Noor! It's going to be amazing! Once again, thanks for another amazing update, and I can't wait to see what's next! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Aww😭
I feel bad for Zoya 😭
Rajveer 😡
Noor and Zoya will meet thanks to Adi
Can't wait 😆
She came back to Adi
Can't wait for the next chapter 😆
Amazing update
Well written
Loved it ❤️
Thanks for the pm
Update soon 😳

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