(17+) Adiya 3-shot: Double Date Part 1: Updated Part 2: Pg 9

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vandana21

@vdna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Thank you :) I'm not sure when I'm going to get 4hrs at a go :) but will write soon enough :)

Originally posted by: malarmia
When is Part 3 coming?
Would love to know the conclusion of the love story.

Well written.

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vandana21

@vdna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Thanks brishti :)

Originally posted by: brishtii78
Beautifully written once again Vandana!!!

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vandana21

@vdna

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Thank you :) glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: MissRight
Alright! I have to say this... you have a knack for writing intimate scenes!!! These were PERFECT. Neither too little nor too much! Very well done!!!

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

They needed each other with the same level of passion which made the entire closeness more intense. Him noticing Zoya couldn't keep her mind straight while reading the book was something I liked. They both were aware of their unusual attraction, tension & desires.

The 'content' you've written speaks volumes abt your maturity, in controlled writing of stories 😊 Thanks for the pm too.

Do write more on AdiYa & yeah, special mention to Adi's confession though Zoya didn't hear a word 😆 That was nicely penned