Treat me like u treat mahi..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I want this scene...so just thought of writing it down...

Z- mahi se to aap bhut pyaar se baat krte h.. kitne pyaar chalakta h aapki baaton se.. pyaar ki baarish hoti h baarish.. vhi baarish jo aap pooja ko nhi de paaye.. vhi baarish jo pooja ko yashwa detergent powder ke paani se mili...
A- main mahi se jaise baat krun meri marzi.. jo jaise hota h usse vse hi treat krna chahiye..
Z- aap kehna kya chahte h.. mahi bhut acchhi h n hum bure.. btaeye .. kya bigada h humbe aapka.. *sobs* kya hum itne bure h k koi humse pyaar se baat nhi krta.. humaare ammi.. abbu dono humse kitne naaraaz h... Itne mahino se baat bhi nhi kri h humne unse.. mahi ka jab man krta h humse acchhe se baat krti h.. jab mann nhi krta tb nhi krti... Mummyji to humse vse hi khafa rehti h.. aur ek aap h...
*Tears flow down her eyes* *while adi eyes her lovingly*
Z- hum dono 1 hi sikke k do pehlun hain.. hum dono k nasseb jude hue h.. aapko sirf apna dard dikhta h pr humara nhi.. aapko nhi pta jb aap humse aise baat krte h to humein kitna bura lgta h.. hum pehle se hi toote hue h.. aur aap... Aap humein aur tod rhe h.. aapne humaari jaan to bcha di .. pr aapne humse humaari zindagi hi chheen li.. isse acchha to hum marr hi jaaye...
*Adi keeps his finger on her lips*
A- shhh.. chup bikul.. ab 1 shabd aur nhi.. mujhe maaf kr do.. pr tum btao main kya krun.. tum mujhse baat hi nhi krti ho.. tumhare reactions paane k liye mujhe tumhari darling mahi se chipakna pdta h.. tumhe kya lgta h.. main apni khushi se usse aise baat krta hun.. nhi zoya nhi.. main ye sb tumse baat krne k liye krta hun.. kyunki main jaanta hun... Jb insaan depression mein hota h.. usse sirf uske dost hi baahr laa skte h...
Z- aap humein apna dost maante h?
A- main to manta hun.. baaki tumhara ni pta..
Z- hum bhi aapko dost maanenge .. pr ek shart pr...
A- kaisi shart?..
Z- treat me like you treat mahi..
A - I'll treat u in a much better way..
*AdiYa shake hands*


Yeah so m done.. m not able comment n reply nowadays.. actually aaj mere 12 boards ka result tha. So kl se tension mein thi.. i got 96.75%.. anyone here from isc , icse or up board.. as in teeno k results nill chuke h.. doo share ur results.. n let me know if you liked coz i have so may scenes in mind.. i can write it down n post it.. vse I'll be less active till 24th . I will be busy with my engineering exams.. so wish me luck guys.. n ueah don't forget to comment n share ur percentage.. n i hope someone misses me when i won't be active...

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TunesOfHeart thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it was so sweet and best of luck for your exams dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

it was so sweet and best of luck for your exams dear!


Thank you so much..🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice scene it ws.. u shud try writing OS(one shot) n congrats 4 ur amazing result n all the best 4 ur entrance exm👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So sweet.
All the best for your exams and congratulations... 🤗

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