Adiya SS: Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 7 on Pg 55, 29/01/19

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Mandy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: Kkafunda
Very well-written Mandy. Although, you said that it is primarily a father-daughter story, I see it as a complete story with drama, emotions and a bit of mystery. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Even if the mystery behind Zoya's disappearance is not immediately revealed, I would like to have some insight into where Zoya is and what she is doing.

Thanks Manjari 😃 If u look at the no of scenes then yes it wont come across as a father daughter story. The original story I had in mind was purely a father daughter story n it was originally a one or two shot. But since I wrote it as an AdiYa fanfic I had to give some prominence to the love story as well. TBH I could never relate to best friends turned lovers theory thanks to the BW movies I saw but yet I decided to explore this angle 😆 Plus I was sceptical about it bcoz AdiJa was portrayed so badly in the show. I had to make sure that this wasn't another instance where two people decide to take their relationship to the next level just bcoz they have known each other for years. Hopefully I can portray that when I reveal Zoya's side of the story. And at the max u will have to wait for two chapters not more 😉

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janu2006

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Posted: 6 years ago

#422

beautiful parts..

waiting for zoya's side part as well

update soon

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Auroraborealis

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Posted: 6 years ago

#423

This is so emotionality moving😭 I hope Aliya prays in the Durgah and something miraculous happens.

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JungleeBilli

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#424

Why I feel Zoya is dead? She probably never told Adi she had a complicated pregnancy and chose the kid over him and that's how Adi avoids the kid for years. This will explain how Yash and Pooja broke up, did you ever mention his career?

Please update soon, can't wait to hear more.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 6 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: janu2006
beautiful parts..
waiting for zoya's side part as well
update soon

Thank u 😊 u will know it soon. Next two updates.

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Mandy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Auroraborealis
This is so emotionality moving😭I hope Aliya prays in the Durgah and something miraculous happens.

Thanks Priyam 😃 a miracle will happen but what it is u will know in the end.

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Mandy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil
Why I feel Zoya is dead? She probably never told Adi she had a complicated pregnancy and chose the kid over him and that's how Adi avoids the kid for years. This will explain how Yash and Pooja broke up, did you ever mention his career?

Please update soon, can't wait to hear more.

U can guess for sure 😆 u could be right or not 😉 but like I said I never intended this to be a mystery or a thriller coz I have written them before n this is no where close to that in that department 😆 i knew it before I penned it that readers will pick on it soon 😊 as for Yash I did mention his career in his entry scene. But didn mention the specifics.

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tv05

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Posted: 6 years ago

#428

Awesome updates...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm...

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megha sharma

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Posted: 6 years ago

#429

Amazing update mandy . Seriously now I am too intrigued to know what caused Zoya to take the decision of moving away from Adi . I have my doubts on yash . Adi has returned to Dehradun and it brought back all the past memories. The convo between Adi and roshnaq was so heartfelt.it seems that they both could understand what other was feeling and has gone through all this time . Aaliyah and Adi were adorable together . Great to see Adi spending time and taking his responsibilities of her father