AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 43

Originally posted by: Sovereign_K

What should I say about this part? Totally amazing. I could not let the smile slip from my face. It was so beautiful to read and watch.[I could visualize it as how you wrote it.]

I am not going judge this before reading the part B as you suggested bcoz I do not want to imagine anything now. But I can't really stop seeing how and what lead them to take such drastic step though being semi-conscious.

Loved how you started and how you proceed it, thoroughly enjoyed the meeting of Adiya. From the first meeting itself, they formed a bond, a beautiful one. I am afraid, what would happen to them once the truth is out.

Update the next soon, Aks...Can't wait for more.

[Will give you a more detailed comment after the next part.]😳

Keechu.

Originally posted by: max_thakker

Amazing, waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: max_thakker

Plz update soon, can't wait for the next chapter any more

Originally posted by: Rabialuvsadiya

Nice update😳

Originally posted by: malarmia

Thanks for the PM.

Loved how adiya met.

Keep writing.

Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi

Awesome update

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: princessnikita

Lovely update and sorry I am replying really late...

It's a Fab one and just cleared the thoughts of both how their partners ignoring them. Some kind of emptiness both facing which was filled by them in that moment. It was emotional. Both were somewhere sad and seeking comfort for the pain which both got each other..

Looking forward for next..

Originally posted by: Puja_07

Superb update

Originally posted by: Swarnalatha5

amazing updates

i liked ur writing style very much

pls pm me

once u update next part

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Awesome update...