Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 46

Originally posted by: sweetsorrow18

Thank you for the updates, I like how you transition with all the points of views however I am confused at Zoya's character progression - why is Adi forcing psychiatric treatment on her?

From my understanding, she seemed quite mentally stable at the beginning of the story, sure she has issues with seeing Adi again, but at some point, her character just went really dark super quickly...basically when Adi found out why she left him...I almost feel like Adi triggered her mental unstability - but I'm not understanding exactly why.

It would have made more sense if she was shown to be battling depression or some sort of mental health issue from the beginning, then I could understand her trajectory.

I hope you take it as constructive criticism and nothing more! I truly enjoy your writing and wish you continue to do so!

Originally posted by: Itsflora

Adi is tooo much screwed up instead of zoya.

Its weird considering zoya had to go through more shit.

But its adi who kind of became a manipulative,somewhat character dheela jerk.

I'm not questioning his love for zoya.

Just his life in overall-totally in tatters.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Adi is like a crossover between Harvey Spectre and Damon Salvatore, maybe Kai. I can totally see Harvey having that scene with Penelope.

The thing about this fic and characters which is so unsettling is that- in all fics/stories we have tender scenes, emotional breakdown which tears our soul, but here both are so stubborn and not giving an inch of ground. For eg the last scene-Adi is so cold and Zoya is angry, some other fic it would be an emotional epi where Adi would be pleading to her and she will cry and accept it after 2000 words. This is where the fic is so fascinating and different. They are strong, but fragile, and comes off as strong.

I wonder what's going to happen next, if he will really drag her to mental hospital. He has always done what he wanted to do. And excited about his POV.

amazing updates just caught up, hoping for a beautiful ending

OMG so many post missed.

How can zoya be a Looney. I hope not.

Why do i get the feeling from what I've read that she escaped the looney bin and they have been trying to get her back to her safety. I hope adiya do get a happy ever after.

You've kept me intrigued throughout the whole story. When i think something is going to happen it never happens the way i thought. Which is a good thing.

Thanks fof always pm me. I've been away for a while with little internet access.

I can't believe this story will end shortly.

Originally posted by: sezo

OMG so many post missed.

How can zoya be a Looney. I hope not.

Why do i get the feeling from what I've read that she escaped the looney bin and they have been trying to get her back to her safety. I hope adiya do get a happy ever after.

You've kept me intrigued throughout the whole story. When i think something is going to happen it never happens the way i thought. Which is a good thing.

Thanks fof always pm me. I've been away for a while with little internet access.

I can't believe this story will end shortly.

If there is one thing I hoped to achieve by writing this story it was not making it predictable. 😊

I am glad that I can keep you on your toes. And thanks hon for coming back to Toxic even though you weren't so active.