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SA19

@SA19

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Posted: 6 years ago

#421

Wow.. It was a superb update... Love the way your story is shaping.. How you detail every character so well.. I love how flawed aditya and Zoya are.. Both of them have guilt of doing wrong but then they know it's necessary.. This long update literally made up for delayed one.. I hope next update is a bit soon coz I am really excited to see how it will unfold.

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 6 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: SA19
Wow.. It was a superb update... Love the way your story is shaping.. How you detail every character so well.. I love how flawed aditya and Zoya are.. Both of them have guilt of doing wrong but then they know it's necessary.. This long update literally made up for delayed one.. I hope next update is a bit soon coz I am really excited to see how it will unfold.

Thank you dear for staying with me in this beautiful journey. I am happy that you appreciate the flaws in Aditya and Zoya, not many are able to do that. I know I drove away quite a few readers with Aditya's POV. With his crudeness and harshness. 😆

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#423

Awsum...

The chemistry between them is so firey...

Loving it

Can't wait for their journey from here

Continue soon

Thnx fr pm

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SA19

@SA19

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: harsha..

Thank you dear for staying with me in this beautiful journey. I am happy that you appreciate the flaws in Aditya and Zoya, not many are able to do that. I know I drove away quite a few readers with Aditya's POV. With his crudeness and harshness. 😆

Oh no not me.

For me it was just the name aditya but never the character from show.

This character is your own and I like it. He is crude and harsh but he is a softie too. Plus the guy is sassy

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: aarushi04
Awsum...
The chemistry between them is so firey...
Loving it
Can't wait for their journey from here
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm

Thanks buddy 😊

I am glad you love the chemistry...after all what will there be to Toxic if there is no chemistry 😆