||AdYa OS: The Pain & The Rage|| - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

It was beautiful..
I loved the way you've penned down both Adi and Zoya's point of view..their pain and rage were perfectly described..


Thank you so much dear
Keep reading and commenting!😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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great job and insight to their feelings
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great job and insight to their feelings


Thank you so much dear
I'm so glad that you liked it
Keep reading and commenting!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much dear
I'm so glad that you liked it
Keep reading and commenting!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: eufara_naghm



Hello
I'm Sahira
Here is a new OS on AdYa


The Pain & The Rage


Zoya's POV:


Yash! I can't believe Yash that you left me alone. You promised me that you'll always be with me. You'll take care of me & protect me from the world. You promised to love me always! It was supposed to be forever! We're going to start our family someday...! There would have been so many happiness in our lives. We would have been so happy. I know eventually your and my parents would forgive us . We would live with them . You didn't have to leave them for me. But now Yash...how will we fulfill them now?! Our dream of a happy life and happy family! What will I do in the world without you? You're my everything Yash! I never knew anything other than my house and you...! You know Yash they all are saying that you cheated on me but I don't believe them . How can you cheat on me? I know you loved me so much...you never even looked at any other woman other than me...I promise you Yash I'll prove your innocence in front of the world... I know you're helping that woman...Adi doesn't believe his wife but I believe you and I'll always believe you...


Aditya's POV:


How could she do that to me? She was my best friend I knew her from our adolescent days...No she couldn't do that to me...she knew that I hate cheaters . She knows about my past! But how can I not see the evidences ...she was holding that vile's hand she was hiding her dairy from me...I shared my everything with her,she knows everything about me but she kept me in dark. What was there in that scum that was not in me...she did with me what my father did with my mother! I hate her! Oh God I hate her so much! If she was alived I would've killed her with my bare hands! And on top of that Zoya believes her husband that Yash so much...with all the evidences she still doesn't believe that! But I know what the truth is and I don't need to prove it to anyone!


What they didn't know was that they both have to become one in order to defeat the world...they will love each other Bepannah only then they'll live in peace!



Hi Sahira
Cute precis beautifully written .Awesome you have penned down the feels of each character in extraordinary way keep it up dear. Keep going 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice ...
please read mine and suggest if its good

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