The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Binzzz
Chapter 1
Awesome chapter Aish...
Yash was shot by Adi n he resigned from his job for Zoya..
He was such an amazing police officer...it was his bad luck to shot Yash...
Zoya was very excited for her marriage..n destiny chose something else for her...
N I loved the mehendi part...where Y replaced by A...
Zoya tried to commit suicide n Adi is saving her...
Totally loved the chapter...

Originally posted by: Binzzz
Chapter 2
Thank God...she has a flat in Mumbai...
Haha..Adi thought Zoya is following him...
It was really fun...

Originally posted by: Binzzz
Finally I completed all 3 chapters...
Zoya's entry to adi's house was funny...
N all misunderstandings are cleared...
Loved arjun -Zoya scenes too...
Adi having dreams about Zoya..it's very interesting..
Zoya got motivation from Adi...
Waiting for more..update soon...

Thank you for all the detailed comments on all the chapters Binuu!! 😃 Feels happy to see readers getting involved with the story...looking forward to your comments in the upcoming chapters too...and do keep supporting!! 🤗

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Binzzz

Heyy...
M fine dear.. Of course I will be here to comment in your story...
Actually m very happy to see one of my fav writer here...
N m loving this track very much yaar ...

Awww...that's really sweet of you and I am sooo happy that you are loving the plot and tracks of this story...shall promise to entertain you more!! 😳

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update dear
Arjun helped zoya.
Adiya encounter was nice
His words to zoya in balcony, encourage her to follow her mission.
Arjun Aditya scene was funny, hit by truck in dreams & in actual, hit by his brother.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much Asif!! Keep reading and looking forward to your support!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: atharin
it was really nice sad and funny updates
love to read next update
update soon

Thank you so much for commenting...glad that you liked it!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
Aishu di finally Read it
Thanks for the pm
You are an awesome writer di the way you write simply can imagine the scenario it is just like front of my eyes
it has pain emotional and hilarious too
Keep up 😊

Hi Aarohi!! 😃

Thank you so much for your heartfelt comments dear!! 🤗 I am so glad that you can visualize my story...shall keep up this work...and keep following the story!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: kdramafan
Interesting story
Keep up the good work and update soon

Thank you very much! Shall definitely update soon!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
It's a perfect story
Each element in perfect mix
Glad u added hilarious situations too
Awesome updates

Thanks a lot for commenting...there will be a mix of all emotions in this story and looking forward to your support!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#168

Hello everyone!!

Sorry for the late response for your comments...just went through all the comments today...and thank you so much for taking time out for my story and liking it along with your valuable comments!! 😊

Shall soon come up with the next chapter and please continue supporting me!! 😳

Love,

Aishwarya